Just not right
Added 2023-07-19 23:51:02 +0000 UTCSo I promised the two chapters but I don't think they are very good.Like the When the Cat Becomes the Mouse I started with Emmett raging and attacking Bella as soon as he sees her and things escalating from there.After rereading it however it would ruin the entire plot I was going for with the story.I rewrote it twice more and it I can't just get it to work.I've tried to take a break and come back to it but it has been frustrating me all afternoon.I think I'm going to sleep on it and go back to it in the morning.Hopefully it will work out and I can move on to Lizard Mate like I planned.
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Perfection can't be rushed, take your time! <3
Skippy13
2023-07-21 16:58:22 +0000 UTCEmmett should have some “not my idea” speech before it all goes to hell
M60476zeus
2023-07-20 21:23:19 +0000 UTCI like the ideas you said I think they'll make an excellent chapter regardless. Comeback refreshed 😌 👌🏾 post when ya ready
JusTay
2023-07-20 11:36:03 +0000 UTCEmmett is always the "good brother" him being the bad guy seems right for this one tho.
JusTay
2023-07-20 11:33:44 +0000 UTCPlease don't stress over timeschedules. Post the chapters when you are happy with them
Rebac
2023-07-20 05:26:28 +0000 UTCI’d be happy to give any help you need.
Shazmit
2023-07-20 02:21:14 +0000 UTCI’m always up for suggestions
Angel Simmons
2023-07-19 23:52:29 +0000 UTCCould we add a bit of detail to help you with the writing
Denaye Eubanks
2023-07-19 23:51:57 +0000 UTC
