"Undone" Demo
Added 2024-09-18 20:00:02 +0000 UTCHi lovely people :)
Sharing a demo today that I made with my bandmate and close friend from Ok Goodnight Martin de Lima. We've been a couple of sad boys this year and kinda going through it, so we both really wanted to start getting it out in some music-writing. Here is the first demo to come out of it! He wrote the guitar part, then I wrote these vocals over it. I'm loving the barren, acoustic direction it's going in. We've both been listening to a lot of Adrianne Lenker and Sufjan Stevens, so that's definitely some of the big inspiration here. How do you feel about it so far?
Casey
Undone Lyrics
Verse
Turn me off, turn me on, turn me down
Turn the wheel till it don’t make a sound
Again, I wanna hear again
Feel the walls are closing in again
They’re ringing, only ringing, but I know I’m screaming
Pre-Chorus
“Oh my god, what have I done?”
Try as I might, I’ve come undone with you
All my love, is caving on into me
Chorus
I’ve come undone with you
Comments
Brilliant! I hope things start to look up for both of you
Paradox Hunter
2024-09-22 13:59:26 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this sound you've been using recently as a long time Sufjan Stevens fan ❤️ I hope time is kinder to you and Martin soon 💕
Jae Carothers
2024-09-19 02:52:43 +0000 UTCA wonderful demo!
MichaelL
2024-09-18 20:46:58 +0000 UTCi'm sad now, beautiful
Matthew Elliott (handicapable)
2024-09-18 20:22:39 +0000 UTCDamb, sounds awesome for a demo
Morg
2024-09-18 20:21:49 +0000 UTC
