Bewitched by a Lewd Fox - NSFW Release + Art

thank you i will fix it, looks like that one wasn't in the timestamps i was given.

Olivia Crowley

In the F4F version, I found a “Good Boy” at 33:10. Apart from that, it was a fun audio! It really gives a different vibe to have the narration along with the dialogue

Kaytea Kat

Always love breeding a Kitsune!

Hellhound lover

Never listened to one where it was read like a book before, somehow it felt far more erotic, nice work!

CaptainSingle

if I have time later after doing further releases this month I'll consider it. This format is not going to replace my other format and will be refined further and can coexist alongside it. The original format will be the majority of the releases.

Olivia Crowley

Noted. Good to see you taking care of all of your flock. 🙂👍💝

Jonathan Williams

I hate to say this since I'm a big fan of your work, but I'm not really fond of this new storytelling style. With this exposition taking time to explain a lot of little things it either takes too long to get to the main event, or I get confused whether a line spoken is the main character or the narrator. Is there a chance you can make a version where you reduce the amount of narration like you did with some audio clips having no ambiance?

silentwave

I really like the narration, great telling the setting and story. I think you may just want to differentiate the talking/narration part, maybe it has a soft echo on it or sounds a little more ethereal, just my thoughts. Very much soul liked it

Eban

You've got a good voice for narration, and you did a great job of having sound effects in alongside the narration to not have it break the scene up. Your voice matching the characters does make it a little challenging sometimes to tell the narrator from the character, but I think that'll become easier with practice

Richard Hardslab

I think I'm part of the other side of the argument here. I feel the narration while helpful for the story building doesn't leave enough to imagination and with the narration tone being sometimes close to the character's tone. Can make it slightly confusing. Still enjoyed it, would love to see more wholesome sides of the cheeky lewd fox.

F1uffernaut

I am definitely a fan of 'gently' forced relationships! Or rather, it may be a little forced but you know the outcome will be positive.

Olivia Crowley

Hello, fellow people of culture. It terms of feedback I really like this style of narration. Imo the more of Sasha's voice, the more I will simp. I appreciate in terms of feedback it's not great but I'm just easily pleased. You continue to gazump my expectations. Also the ending was so good. I have a soft spot for forced relationships. Thank you!

Sivonix

The narration add lots of details that help with basic story clarity. I know some things being a little vague can help with the sensual feeling, but it’s not better or worse, just different. My main feedback is to differentiate between the narrator and the character in some way, there were a few moments where I was confused if it was narration or dialogue for a moment. A suggestion: When I worked on an audio drama podcast we changed the and fiddled with the EQ and compression between perspectives when the narrator was also a character. It gave them each a subtle but distinct sound, and didn’t compromise the quality. Otherwise, sounded great! I don’t think every story will need a narrator, but this was a good use of it.

Noxshade

Amazing work something about your narration is so captivating

Chocolatechocobo17 .

This feels like starting an audio book. I love it! Especially love how you paint the scene with your words~ However I prefer your usual style for the conversation part. How should I say this? It somehow takes the immersion back and forth between the narrator style and the direct involvation of our character (if that makes sense?) It s not per se bad, I d just recommend maybe separating the two styles a bit more. Criticism aside, can t go wrong with fox girls :3

Diarys

The altered audio perspective was definitely different from the norm- it reminds me of writing way back when. I rather like it. Fantastic work, as always. Thank you for your effort 🙏

Nox Nemesis

Im a way bigger fan of this format of audio than I thought I would be, I eagerly await more of these in the future I hope, another absolutely stunning audio as always!

Shazam++

My initial impression compared it to an audiobook. Different from most Roleplays I’ve listened to, which isn’t a bad thing!

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Spooky fox

Potlerpup

There's a lot to refine here. This is closer to how I used to write around 15 years ago, and audio is a different delivery than pure text. I'll keep dialing it in and try to get it somewhere more in the middle.

Olivia Crowley

I don't have aphantasia, but I still find the narration really adds to painting the picture and telling the story. It did feel a little bit wordy and distracting at certain points, but I think that's something you can refine over time as the style develops. I do also like "us" having more direct input to dialogue and having some actions and reactions spelled out instead of having to almost guess what was intended based on what your character says or does next. And the most... important... part doesn't seem much different. Although leading up to that did feel the most wordy to me; some people are into reading out all the explicit details with all the "dripping, glistening, and throbbing" adjectives. I am not one of those people.

Your fox girl audio always makes my face turn into a tomato. I love these so much

Mystic56