sunstone update
Added 2022-09-20 01:06:25 +0000 UTCi mean she wasn't wrong XD
now off to make the crimson update
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Ever think about shaving the goatee, Stjepan?
Charlotte McKenzie
2023-04-18 00:04:47 +0000 UTCOh jeez.... that crossdressing scene is making me very interested in Marion's future shenanigans.
Griffin
2022-09-30 01:48:02 +0000 UTCAlly your gay is showing
Diana
2022-09-25 15:00:28 +0000 UTCAlan without a beard resembles Allys wife ;)
Angerboda
2022-09-24 10:27:41 +0000 UTC"The day of the burrito" - What a kliffhanger xD
Canadis
2022-09-23 09:26:16 +0000 UTCWhoa. Shaved Alan was more jarring than I expected.
Dan Storm
2022-09-22 23:34:58 +0000 UTCSame here. My idea was just to help him find and fix them for later versions.
derHinek
2022-09-20 18:26:39 +0000 UTCP73 Panel 5 embarasing =>embarassing honestly I don't mind typos on patreon content, I'm actually glad to help fixing them before publishing
fenarinarsa
2022-09-20 17:50:58 +0000 UTCI guess that's stuff for volume 20...
Leak
2022-09-20 17:17:01 +0000 UTCScorched earth, with some fire & brimstone as sides? :D
Leak
2022-09-20 17:16:31 +0000 UTCBachelorette party?! Please tell me what happened. I gotta know!
rdm51
2022-09-20 16:33:28 +0000 UTCOh. Yes. The book is a Masterpiece, Maestro, but in the lettering, maybe it would need a proof reading ... page 8, "momentof" and "neededa"; page 14, "befforehand", page 26 "prepaired" and "allyis"; page 56 "punihsment" and "patents" (parents), page 61 "ofthe", page 64 "aint" and "gtet", - don't follow me, i'm not a professional...
Michele Castelnovi
2022-09-20 11:36:46 +0000 UTC"First, clean the space" (Sun Tzu).
Michele Castelnovi
2022-09-20 07:51:11 +0000 UTCLittle typos: on page 70 "cut donw on" on page 75 "out of conjtrol" and "wouldhave"
derHinek
2022-09-20 07:06:19 +0000 UTCWhat’s this, the burrito incident? What on earth is coming?
Spelt Wrong, but right.
2022-09-20 06:47:58 +0000 UTC" m'kay alan....ready?" Nnnn no. " too late" *lubes up dildo* AEEEEEEEEEEEEE
LazyReader
2022-09-20 02:44:06 +0000 UTCAwesome indeed.
Stephen Woods
2022-09-20 02:40:26 +0000 UTC
