fine print update
Added 2022-05-31 01:57:27 +0000 UTConly 8 pages. was supposed to be more but a late stage rewrite ruined my plans but improved on the story XD next months update will be a bigger one :)
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Fine Print is ALL about missed opportunities, angst and short-sightedness... youve SEEN most of the end, it does NOT end well for Lauren
Desmond Auer
2022-07-15 11:41:08 +0000 UTCgood! this means you're paying good attention you're supposed to dislike her. that will change tho. she talks a big game... but... well, you'll see. mind you any one of them is perfectly capable of bailing out. they also choose to stay in this because she is nothing but a big pile of points in a divine contest for them there are no good ones in this story yet. i stated this over and over again. everyone here starts of as either a bit of a selfish asshole or a full on one. but they change. and more you know about them the more you understand how one can become a profoundly broken person and all that without needing to excuse them for it. this is gonna be an intense story well, i mean, everyone is a self centered asshole... besides merryl, sam, and altheo XD they are awesome.
stjepan sejic
2022-06-06 11:49:41 +0000 UTCI realize this won't be a popular comment, but... I've honestly lost all sympathy for Lauren. She's an incredibly selfish piece of shit, that only cares about herself. Two cubi appeared that clearly hate each other. Let's push them into a threesome. They're in a service job, they can't turn me down. I get what I want, and this is their job, tight? They don't have feeling about that. Oh, I can die if I have a threesome with them. No worries. I don't care. And this is all about me. Who cares what the service workers might feel about killing me while having sex with me? They're service workers. They only exist to please ME.
Gwennafran
2022-06-06 10:12:10 +0000 UTC
