achilles shieldmaidens update
Added 2021-10-21 13:57:48 +0000 UTCwelp here we are. it's a bit clunky and i intend to polish it over time as i'm still gettign into the groove of writing another lore heavy book. been a while since ravine. this one has that level of complexity that i'm still figuring out how to deliver perfectly.
this will still get a bunch of polish but till then, i hope you like it for at the very least its potential :)
now i'm off to sleep cause i gotta get to death vigil tonight
the update starts at pdf page 30
Comments
Love it!
Sean Young
2021-11-09 03:52:56 +0000 UTCSO amazing! (and listening to GRIS ost reading this is GOOD!)
Cilou The-Fae
2021-10-26 22:02:00 +0000 UTCThis was EPIC!!!
NoNameC
2021-10-25 10:12:23 +0000 UTCDoesn't happen to me. Maybe it's your pdf reader?
NoNameC
2021-10-25 10:12:12 +0000 UTCthe hype is strong with this one :D
Fan
2021-10-22 15:52:41 +0000 UTCIt seems there's an issue with the text ? I'm reading it back from the start and very often the text has a weird white line in it somewhere like when a printer is starting to run out of ink. It doesn't seem to have affected the drawing, just the text
Duport Guillaume
2021-10-22 15:02:00 +0000 UTCWhenever I read/watch something that instantly makes me go: "Man... I would give ANYTHING to have this as a single-player story-driven game and immerse myself in its world and it's characters for hours on end." I know that's something rare and precious for me. THIS is definitely the case. <3 Can't wait for more.
Costanza Bertani
2021-10-22 11:33:10 +0000 UTCOooh YES!
Matteo Manino
2021-10-22 06:19:08 +0000 UTCWonderful! The characters really dance well together. Can we please have a scene later on where Sofia becomes the teamโs unbeatable arm-wrestling champ? ๐
Nizing
2021-10-22 03:07:54 +0000 UTCYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
2021-10-22 02:38:44 +0000 UTC"if you ever want to see me naked again . . ." lol
Colby
2021-10-21 23:22:03 +0000 UTCBeen looking forward to this update!
Misty F.
2021-10-21 20:27:30 +0000 UTCi did! :)
stjepan sejic
2021-10-21 20:24:17 +0000 UTCyou'll find out what happened. and yes the timeskip is very necessary.
stjepan sejic
2021-10-21 20:24:00 +0000 UTCGiant Robot Lizards!!
Death of Ink
2021-10-21 17:18:43 +0000 UTCbut only in 2 panels xD I missed it the first time and had to go back though
Maz Moore
2021-10-21 16:24:18 +0000 UTCI am so in love with all of these characters already, but Sofia is my favorite.
Anissa Roy
2021-10-21 15:38:40 +0000 UTCShe has a wedding ring on ๐ฅบ
2021-10-21 15:32:22 +0000 UTCExelent!
Atilio Gambedotti
2021-10-21 15:30:43 +0000 UTCLove it! Really looking forward to this.
Ted Van Roekel
2021-10-21 15:10:52 +0000 UTCDid you see gw2 engineer is getting a mech!?
Spacecat
2021-10-21 15:06:18 +0000 UTC"If you ever want to see me naked again...." LMAO
2021-10-21 14:58:16 +0000 UTCI love it. I hope that we may be able to buy a physical version some time in the future.
Tim van den Berg
2021-10-21 14:49:55 +0000 UTCAh, you give us such lovely things <3 Thank you.
Lisza
2021-10-21 14:44:34 +0000 UTCWhile I understand their narrative necessity, I find timeskips annoying. โWait! Go back! What happened with the last part!โ
Taigan
2021-10-21 14:29:59 +0000 UTC"The update starts at PDF page 30." Thank you for that, it's super helpful. ๐
Shoop83
2021-10-21 14:22:14 +0000 UTCI love how you always tell us what page the update starts at. I know it's a trivial thing, but I appreciate it nonetheless.
Sean Carter
2021-10-21 14:18:56 +0000 UTCTease... Now I just want more!
Song W Eretson
2021-10-21 14:11:19 +0000 UTCYou never dissapoint! Eager for more!
Jose Lopez Maldonado
2021-10-21 14:07:22 +0000 UTCLet's just hope the characters names don't get incredibly convoluted when you polish this rough diamond... Sorry, couldn't stop myself from making that pun...
Raven Coldheart
2021-10-21 14:04:32 +0000 UTC
