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fine print update

this one is gonna be a colorful one XD

update starts around page 140


also, uploading 2 pdf versions, one is a full comic but slightly more compressed, other is uncompressed but second half only. why? because patreon, a platform that digitally distributes content, limits filesizes to like 250 mb


ffs...

fine print update

Comments

Absolutely loving Fine Print. My favorite of your series. Thank you! ❤️

Joanne Ellen Patak

I didn't expect it but I think I might even be enjoying this series more than Sunstone. I deeply hope that you continue making this wonderful series <3.

Alexa The Traveler

Got it! Thank you :)

Ian

that stick has quite the tale behind it

stjepan sejic

she tans a lot.

stjepan sejic

Question for this writer's note: Lauren's friend, Samantha Sawyer, what is her skin tone color with her blonde hair.

Ian

I want to know how a STICK got wedged in Bauphette ass. Or maybe she just needs to get laid. 🤣

Christopher

That smile... one of unfiltered happiness. That moment when you don't need to read the text to understand the feelings conveyed. Wonderful work!

Finally got the time to sit down and read all of this. It is amazing and I can't wait for more.

FL4GG

Meryl is just breathtaking! I mean WOW! JUST WOW.

Jaki Burden

Wonderful! Loved it. And with that said... I did see a number of typos, missing punctuation, missing emphasis, and dialog balloons where the text could be placed better, or text flow could be improved.

Baxter Turnham

Damn, that was intense 😍 love that scene, very well drawn

Schamannie

I literally laughed out loud at the chocolate covered butt plugs part.

DAMN!!! &lt;3

The Kat Kid

for your own purposes, i have no issues with that. i do have issues with people sharing this comic as it is disrespectful to those that support it.

stjepan sejic

you better believe there's a good explanation ;)

stjepan sejic

Well, Meryl put it as “emotional energies”, so I guess succubus perceives ‘desire’ but not necessary ‘sexual desire’ (though that one must be their field of expertise) or maybe gods (succubus and cupids) see all kind of energies and some times get confused 🤷🏽‍♀️ still, that doesn’t explain to me how Rachel (that first girl) was able to see through Meryl disguise, anyway… I want to know 😅

pichi randoms

I'm so happy to see her without her pain and finally getting some relief &lt;3

Liz Denocte

Good point. If people can notice succubus because of lust, and asexuals dont HAVE that....maybe she's another scion of some sort?

straycat74

she’s so thoughtful of her human/potential contract -and yes, I know it’s coming from her fear of failure but still… it’s cute

pichi randoms

stjepan, the way you always deliver! 👌🏽I can’t wait for the rest !!! and I’m specially eager to know about the first contract and the way you gonna explain how an asexual person was able to see through the disguise and emmaned enough energy to attract a succubus like meryl 🤔🤩

pichi randoms

Such a good update! Aaaaa

I kinda feel like there's a missing market opportunity for someone to make specific purpose anal-use condoms. You know, like how they make condoms specifically for oral play? Like, "Butt Condoms: Condoms...but for your butt!"

Alysandir

Hi Stjepan. Fist off I love your work. Second, I wanted to check to see if you have any issues with people converting the PDF's to CBR or CBZ format My Ipad and comic reader tend to deal with them better than PDF's? but didn't want to assume that you were cool with people amending your work.

jennifer Walters

They will be edited by the publisher before being printed. It will be fine.

Maybe, maybe not

This is the sexiest use of blood I have ever seen and it’s usually a total turnoff for me.

BiSound

As always, thanks you ! The thrill in my spine !

Laurent Lacouture

It's amazing.

Matteo Manino

That... was beautiful. I'm torn between being really sad for Lauren and really happy for her. Losing a pain that eats you up from the inside is bliss, but the lengths we go to to do so- or even TRY to do so, since it seldom works- can be horrifying. I'm happy she's lost the pain, but I'm still hurting for her.

Shaz

Amazing artwork. Stunning.

Ohhh I love them both and this update was so so stunning!!

Tedra Boag

Amazing, simply amazing.... As for the kinks to sort out (wink wink), there seems to be a dialog bubble missing in the last panel. ;)

Saturday Morning Renders

Is this where we proofread? I found a couple typos and such simple things, should we let you know in this chat? Or on discord? Or do you sort them out on your own once you get to publishing time?

Heletilla

ah, forgot to delete the earlier sketch for the dialogue

stjepan sejic

Oh man, I can't wait to buy the print version!

Dafydd Mac an Leigh

On the last page of the second part only, is the "So about the contract?" on the left supposed to be there? Regardless, wonderful stuff.

a Khronisfere would work too...if you can face a dragon, that is :P (yup, that's a Trollhunter reference)

Quincey Forder

Mag-fucking-nificent! The art, the plot, the characters, EVERYTHING. I love it!

Sarah Lannister

Wow! So intense! I love how you draw the "intense scene"... Sooo beautiful!

Elisa Miggiano

As always a Wonderful Story, well told and Beautifully Drawn! Thank you!

Robert

RIGHT!?

stjepan sejic

So files are limited to 250mb each, but you can attach multiple to a post, sure, makes sense 🤦‍♂️

Hampus Jensen

I'll second this

R Coots

Love it love it

Dominik Reichardt

Since the file size limit will always be there... wouldn't it make sense to put each chapter into a separate PDF?

Adam Ladanyi

Gdi, every time. Just great stuff

oof, Meryl really looks like she doesn't want to give Laura that contract at the end. This gonna be gud

Elizabeth

Dude, you a goddamn magician.

It's so good, and so frustrating. I need a time machine, so I can go into the future and just get the completed story right now. XD

Benjamin Allred

Oh no. This will get messy

James Weaver

that smile &lt;3

Trillbina

That is a note to leave off on Beautiful work

PhaineOfCatz

Oh wow. I really wonder where we go, from all plots suggested so far. This should be fun.

Wow. Utterly fantastic! Such an incredible payoff for the build. &lt;3

Dee Fish

this update is now tied as my all time favorite part of your work i have read ( i have read alot) i love how you where able to take a sex scene and just pour so much character study and development, i honestly feel like i understand the characters so much more, so many works make them all fluff or fan service but yours are just beautifully done

Amber cartier-page

Well this definitely won't have any long-term repercussions on Lauren, no sir! I have my theories already (which are probably super dumb and basic) Also, Merryl's goddess form is so goddamn pretty, the colooooors!

Sophie

Fix your shit patreon. I want my fine print uncompressed and in one file straight from Stjepans super Internet

Brian Byrnes

I love Lauren’s face at the how are you alive moment. And THANK YOU for listing the page the new material starts on!

Taigan

Nice,... Thats why we are here...

BadBadMegatron

Yeah, the file size limit is bizarre. I've seen several creators complain about it. Some of them have resorted to providing Dropbox, OneDrive or Google Drive links on a month-long basis, after which the files are deleted to avoid hitting storage quota on those services. Anyway: Nice work as always! Already have my preorder of the hardcopy in on Amazon! (I have zero comic shops nearby, sadly.)

Arcana


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