fine print update

Just finished this edition, joining the patreon was so the right choice.

We Must Burn Carthage

Every time I read a new chapter of fine print, I feel like whomever is prominent becomes my favourite character. But...I adore Miss Alaris with my whole heart. She's a sweetheart who needs to be loved.

Tedra Boag

The tail stroking! XD I love it!

Benjamin Allred

Aww, Thad 😊 Loving the yearning and pining in this...

Diana

Ooooooh, so THAS why Meryl is so weird; they got the combination all backwards. Gotcha.

Youkai-sama

XD

stjepan sejic

Butterflies and failure? OUCH! Go easy on the girl.

Youkai-sama

not really, she's a divine entity made of butterflies and failure sustained by magical fruit XD

stjepan sejic

Thas cuz Meryl is a WOMAN, through and through! *yeah* XD

Youkai-sama

they are gods. literally every single one of them can change sex at will. will... all but one. merryl just can't seem to make it work

stjepan sejic

So, now that we know Charon and Alecto are Meryl's parents, and we know Bauphette has a cock, things start to get confusing. Is Charon also a futanari? Whose womb was used? Does Meryl call Charon "Dad"? This is such an Asari situation. How does 'cubus biology work all this stuff out? These are the things we have to know!

Youkai-sama

and he was the best of the best XD

stjepan sejic

lauren has had some experiences. there are multiple reasons why she is the way she is now... and we will learn them over time.

stjepan sejic

Still get a kick out of the fact that a 'cubus was utterly bested by an ace. xD

Dan Storm

Lauren taking a moment to make sure Merryl was also consenting was wonderful.

Taylor Hartley

Amazing work as always! I do see about a dozen typos in Chapter 4 you may want to correct before you send it to print.... Peace!

Expect_no_Mercy

"Whats the fine print...?" loved it... Now I cannot wait to see what the succubi will find in her head

Leon Ramirez

Every update I always read that last part with Cale. "I haven't failed yet". Cale's Dad: "Welp, guess my kid is stuck on Earth with an asexual. Stupid Merryl."

Jason

Also man you need an editor, lots of typos in this version. loving it.

Mizino

Wait...the crimson? Is that the same club from sunstone?

Mizino

Oh my god, I love this story SO MUCH!

Sweet, Succulent Content Nectar

aaaa, she said the thing. The name of the storyyyy

Yes, you are very cultured 8D

Sarastre

> also, next month these idiots FORNICATE!!!! You are just using fancy words for kinky sex are you ? :D EDIT: Having read the update - fuck you know how to tease people :))))

polyx

I wasn't watching the pages, and hit the last one and couldn't go farther, literally said Fuck! Nice job, and nice job teasing us!

Onyx

Well. This definitively has you written all over it (or you writing all over it?). I loved the Hades part and the Crimson part the most but it's a very interesting story already. Looking forward to more.

bft... ght... gyhy... what a freakin cliffhanger! loving the story more and more :)

Vazul

Small typo spotted on page 127’s last word bubble.

Heng Ow

Oh hell. Finally got around to reading this. Yeah… dropped my phone laughing when I saw the background of page 113. I think my phone is ok.

Christopher

Quality work!:)

Lock-Master

i'd love to say yes but knowing my scattered brain i'll forget so i can only promise to try XD

stjepan sejic

Passionate fornication!

Dare

Question: would it be possible for you to, when you post an update, to say what page the new stuff starts on? I keep having to either scan forward, mis the cutoff and spoil the upcoming, or else go back to the last update, scroll down to the bottom of it, the go back to the new update. Anyway, a little line like “new material starts on page 134” would make my day easier. Please and thank you.

Taigan

Lauren and Merryl are two flaming disasters hurtling towards each other at terminal velocity. But in the best way. XD

Amanda

Middle left on the same page, "EVEN OUT(our?) BEST FIELD AGENT" also still find that funny an Asexual just kidnapped their best guy.

Jacob

this one :) next month

stjepan sejic

yup. lauren will be one of the most flawed and interesting characters i've written so far

stjepan sejic

So for being a human car wreck it is a very good sign that Lauren was able to note and ask about consent in the way she did. It's wasn't perfect, but good on her.

Chuck Marsh

We will get to see the signing of the gold contract by Lauren in this volume or it will be for the second ... 🤔🤔🤔

Tony

Awesome!! I noticed a couple of typos in page 131, bottom right panel of Merryl (gwt, tht's)

Dewi Neijs

Such culture, much wow! XD

Mysery

Oh, they gonn' frick...

Oplight Froste

Don't forget your smoking jacket!

Ted Van Roekel

Yelling Bird - is that you? :D

Leak

FORNICATION!!!

Chibi Mushroom (Mahasu)

Huzzah! Lauren finally has her glasses! ;P

Leak

Such delectation and delight and how fortunate we are. I shall pour myself a brandy, and don my reading glasses to peruse this fine literature as I anticipate the moment of their conjoining. I like a fancy word too, I do :)

Josephine Baird