fine print update

I love this story, I only wish we had more to read about it! 🤤🤤🤤

Laura Miranda

Already a masterpiece ! :D

Nemea

Love it!!

Can't wait for more ♥

Shina Stark

That was great! especially the page 20 to 21 shift. can't wait for more!

Sean Robinson

Was finally able to read it. Amazing. Can't wait to see more plot and "plot" :D

BananaCarpet

I couldn't stop laughing from the last two pages. I'm definitely joining their ranks xD

JinxedMaven

love the jump from "I have never failed" to "we have gathered here because he failed". that is the funniest goddamn thing in this context

Vesperupus

LOL! I love the twist where she seems to be asexual. Its a lovely twist on the whole succubus dynamic!

Dimitar Bounov

can you post that final page of the pdf with out the lettering, it is yummy

MaZZM

Oh wow this beginning is so good! And I just love how the "Cubi" are presented. All these beautiful colors *heart eyes* And the theme with the butterfly? Just amazing! I hope you carry it throughout the whole story. Can't wait to see more :D Love it!

Silke

Finally! honestly i was really anxious to read the first pages!

Devil Shinoiji

hey, it will make my editor happy cause i got to fix this stuff before print :)

stjepan sejic

Definitely not worried - Your stories have always been great! Just trying to be a helpful pedant.

James Weaver

yeah don't worry this was a fuckup because i was changing the phrase and got distracted. i'll get to fixing stuff like that eventually :)

stjepan sejic

Excellent update, had me laugh out loud. One mminor grammatical quirk, on the 18th page, when Cale says "... you were deemed given a Golden Contract" the phrasing is awkward - something should exist between deemed and given - deemed worthy of a golden contract, or something...

James Weaver

i'll get to it , thanks for reminding me :)

stjepan sejic

i'm mr Cale LOOK AT MEEEE!!!

stjepan sejic

I am loving this.

Ross Kirkland

oh my ! This is so great !

Elisabeth Watson

Also, I am so going to cosplay them. Probably Cale!

Onyx

YES

Onyx

Wait so, (I know this will be explained, but I have to say it) Vain is a Cubi at this point????? And butterfly wings?

Onyx

I can almost hear you muttering... "Ha! Let 'em try to cosplay that!"

Stephen

Does anyone else think it was hilarious that Cale goes, "Oh, I love a challenge." And the next panel is: "Well, it's been two years since we lost Cale..." Maybe it's Coronavirus cabin fever, but I thought that was frigging funny. Sidenote, I loved the way you laid the groundwork for our main characters and plot. It's no longer just a sexy, beautifully drawn story. Now there's some competitive drama. You really piqued my interest with that last panel. Deftly done!

Vairya1

Her desire was to take 2 strokes off her golf game?

Dare

Loving it! I've enjoyed your sunstone/mercy work so much (bought the physical copies)! And I've been b writing my in succubus story in patron since September... Then I saw this... "Ohh, succubus and shiniez? Yes please!". Lol. Keep up the great work!

Mistress_Dyvia

This is why I set up a Patron account and I am not disappointed! The set up and storytelling are outstanding... and the art- of course!- is... I do like “distracting”! As a former seminarian, this series hits ALL of the best buttons.

Dustin Batson

So the two stories are intertwined? Interesting, really looking forward to how you weave them!

Lia Graf

Looks like the issue with which hand is outstretched in the opening "look for the butterflies" section is still present (from her POV it's her right hand, but from the wide shot, it's her left).

Lattimer Pines

Cale is so sreaking hot it DISTRACTS me. This comic distresses me in bisexual

I just have one teeny question.. how do I summon the red head in the second to last panel? hehe

Richard Marshall

This is absolutely amazing! Thank you!

Darci Brennan

i deleted the first update as i forgot to set tiers because i'm still terrible at that XD

stjepan sejic

yes, all of them can change at will :)

stjepan sejic

This is fantastic, I cant wait for the book to come out so I can buy it :D.

Zen

The email link for this update 404's for me.

Senoj Nai

And so the stage is set.

River Asmussen

Pretty interesting so far can't wait to see more development.

Jeremy Eloi

Sooo... will there be more of FemCale?

Matthew Bamford

haha yeah xD I reread it 3 times, to continue laughing xD

NoNameC

*drooling* Also, that transition from "I have never failed a challenge" to his father announcing it has been 2 years was hilarious xD xD

NoNameC

ohmygod, i LOVE it XD

Kavi M

Thanks. This was much needed. Going bat shit crazy having to stay at home.

Old Dog

Lol, this has soo much potential

Matthew Rice

xD that bit tho "challenge accepted" next panel, "I've lost a son" xD

Chibi Mushroom (Mahasu)

'And I have never failed a challenge in my life!' *I am DYING*

AniOne

Amazing work

Pious Erika

Thank you kindly. *yetihug*

Kaiyeti