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fine print 01

and so it begins. 


some typos and edits left to correct but there's time for that in the future, for now, i have a story to share :)

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Comments

So good... new subscriber here... and couldnt be happier with the quality you are pouring in to the story telling... looking forward to that mech drama you are cooking up..

Bryan Welch

Oh yeah, this is worth actually signing up and subscribing to. Looks like I am going to enjoy this one.

Joseph Rattray

Yaaas! Can't wait!

Alex Bridger

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That was brilliant! Clearly worth the $6 sign up fee. Looking forward to seeing moire of these two in the future! :D

Sarah Lannister

LOVE this first meeting scene.

Dravencour

EEEEEEEEP! I'M SO EXCITED! AND I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU MADE THIS PATREON!!!!

odd-rose

This looks so fabulous and I am so curious about their whole world and these characters already. "Typos in the dictionary" made me giggle in an unseemly manner.

Josephine Baird

i'll put it up on my redbubble next week

stjepan sejic

HAH! I KNEW I FORGOT SOMETHING XD thanks, i'll edit this for the next time XD

stjepan sejic

I WANT THAT SHIRT!!

Death of the Endless

Stjepan, the fourth picture with the woman lying on the floor with two others supporting her and the dialogue of "Never even occurred to me it could be true" shows her reaching out with her left hand. The two pictures above it and the sixth picture with "And my last thoughts are of that butterfly..." are from her viewpoint and it's her right hand reaching towards the butterflies. Unless her injury is causing her to see things mirrored left/right, should those three pictures have the left hand in them?

Lattimer Pines

The man comes up with a simple dirty idea involving a sex contest between a succubus and an incubus and turns it into another epic story. The reader in my loves this guy. The writer in me is groaning with envy. :) It's fantastic.

Leo F

I love this already!!! Worth every cent!

NoNameC

Very nice! Thank you!

This gonna be LEGENDARY!!!

Leny

AWESOME! Could you make the first picture (the one with the butterfly) as a picture on its own? Like for phone background? that would be nice and cool :) Plus the effect of the changing form looks so nice! the colors are really wonderful ^^

Silke

Oh my ! This looks promising ! ^^

Elisabeth Watson

Rachel.exe has crashed, press any key to reboot

ShadowRoadz

Oh man definitely digging it so far!

I'm SO excited!!!

This is so awesome. I really hope it will be available in print one day. :)

More. I need more, like now. IT'S A MIGHTY NEED!!!!! please.

Nick Starr

I'm excited for ambitious cosplayers with glowing butterfly wings :D

Sheri Spangenberg

This image crashes the Android app.

Mike

ohh I'm loving this!

INKtiger

this is the kind of stuff I paid to see

Barbara Venecia

"And so it begins." Some of the most ominous words in the English language, followed by "There is a hole in your mind."

Lattimer Pines

I'm loving these two in only a few pages.

Arthur Alford

Want, want, want. And another long treck through the city, hoping that people won't notice what I've just bought. Though a comic book is easier to hide than a huge calendar at least. =D

Empo

I want-.... no I NEED more of this in my life

JinxedMaven

I'm fan ! That's for sure ! Can't wait to see where this will lead

Laurent Lacouture

Of to a good start.

Jeroen Brugman

Truly amazing. I want it in spades !

Nopik

Found a correction to make ! The shirt on the top of the panel just before the last.

Djerin Rashkae

Okay... I'm hooked.... Please don'y met us hanging too long

Djerin Rashkae

Merryl the Cubi looks awesome. Rachel's Shirt though is funny "Conducting the ORChestra" or something like that. Could we get a better look at it please?

Haematite

YEEEESSSS this is already so epic

Liz Denocte

amazing

Ross Kirkland

sooo will there be more? cause i want more XD

Danzan Sandeev

This so epic, cannot wait to see where this story takes us

Philip Leadbitter

Well, friend, you got me. This is perfection!

Bastion Of Tales

Aw yis, was waiting for this.

Roselyn Shade

Hooray! So amazing... I'm so glad this is happening! :D

Classical Salamander

Damn, how do you do that, when you post any art - i'm feeling like some little hyped girl, even tho i'm 21 old guy, you never cease to amaze me with your stuff

More please :D

Dyno

So gorgeous, and that final page! I want it as a wallpaper.

Robert Seidl

Great stuff once more.

Samuli Olki

Loved it very much. Can't wait for more. Merryl is awesome

Brian Byrnes

This first bit is great, looking forward to the rest of the chapter and story.

David Stanley

I was hooked already by the snippets you posted, but now Iβ€˜m all on. This is gonna be amazing! Also, the use of colour is so so beautiful! Canβ€˜t wait for it to continue ❀️

Thy Mian

This is going to be a fantastic story! Can't wait to see this through to the end.

Therian

So much Hype. Can't wait to read more.

James Weaver

Love it, need more

Sean Robinson

I am Hyped.

Pious Erika

I could SO hear Grey Griffin read Merril's lines! She would be perfect for the role! (she's the now who does the voice of Salem in RWBY)

Quincey Forder

All the HYPE

Derek Skipper

I am having flashbacks of when I first read Sunstone way back when on DeviantArt. This series is going to be something special and i cant wait for more :D I try to keep throwing more money at the screen but it just bounces back. Well I guess I can just buy the variants of Sunstone :D.

Zen

I was thinking that, too!

James O'Donnelly

More, please. Gotta say, since you left the first collection of Sunstone on here, I found it to be a really touching story. I went out and found the next trades at my nearest bookshop, what luck, and ate them right up. So, thanks for creating fiction that messes with my emotions.

Very excited to see this finally <3

Emily Dragondoodle Gaskill

Awesome! Beautiful art as always, I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Elisa Miggiano

I love your work, i can't wait to see the next part

This is incredible. That last page - the light from the book, highlighting her abs, the shadows, reflecting on her glasses, tinting the inside of her ears... And that bit with the couple - looking for Sunstone vol. 7? No question. You have magic powers.

James O'Donnelly

πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ hell yes

Autumn

it is

stjepan sejic

It's been a long week and I needed to see this ❀

Meryl is gorgeous!!!! .....can't wait for the Cosplayers to see her.

Chris Fabinsky

This is gonna be good! 😻

Joshua Ohmer

EEEEE loooove it, definitely another one eagerly awaiting more!

Awesome :D

Evening

Add another to the list of people greatly looking forward to more. Specifically I just want to say the vibrant color usage is looking amazing and I hope that's part of this book's theme.

A Napoleon

I didn't know what to expect (although I was sure that I was gonna love it) and man this is already a wild ride! Can't wait for the next update. Your work is incredible as always!!!

thank you! cant wait to see more!

EEEEEEE YAASSS! I can't wait for more! <3

Marcia Hauer

Yes! so excited!

Korra-n-Stuff

I'm very much looking forward to this. Thank you very much for it.Is there a chance we could get a paged PDF of your comic pages? These pages are very hard to read on some devices as-is.

spectria.limina

OMG...*NOW* all the hints come together! This is *SO* Awesome...can't wait for more!

Judy Lyle

My body is ready!

Yaaas! Super hyped. Ready for more!

James G. Shelton

Its not enough. Its not nearly enough to sate my hunger for this story. I need more....like stat!

Faye Fatale

This is like my new favorite series of yours. Haha. Can't wait for Rachel to meet Cale.

Xarallei

God this is going to be an amazing series

Badwlf7

VERY happy with what I'm seeing here man. Can't wait to see how this all plays out. And yes, Merryl's design is so relaxed and lovely.

Lovely! So...many...questions...but I'm definitely here for the ride! /buckles up with snacks :D

Lia Graf

thank you !

StΓ©phane Delancy Larnaudie

Amazing

John Weekley

amazing!! can't wait for more

Yey,... really? We found typos in a dictionary.. I like that kind of humor 😁

BadBadMegatron

Need more, and OMG you put one of your major characters in a graphic tee with writing on it? That takes balls.

Diana

I still love Merryl's design, very unique! And am super into this already!

Dapper Woof

OMG this is so awesome!! I'm so excited it has begun!!!

Jennifer Wick

Excellent :)

Terry Masson

Awesome start and that last panel would make an awesome poster

Jeremy Eloi

I have. So. Many. Questions. I LOVE IT.

AniOne

Well that certainly makes for a great start. And can't help it, that T-shirt ... LOL

Cederien

Absolutely awesome. Love Rachel's face when she was trying to figure why everyone was ignoring the "cosplay".

Alba Murataj

YESSS!!!

Snarkysciurus

HERE πŸ‘πŸ» FOR πŸ‘πŸ» IT πŸ‘πŸ»

I. NEED. MORE!!!!!! Holy crap this might be the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.

Neal Colford

Man ... not nearly enough pages ... it ended up like in a second ...

Sleep3walker

YAS my body is ready 100% pun intended

Android devices can. Not sure about iPhone though.

Jason

oh hell yesssss!!!

philip brown

Ok, im sold. Just let me know where to leave my wallet!

Matthew Rice

Finally!! <3 gimme more pretty please! :3

Briana Rae

Talk about wetting your appetite! Just fantastic.

awr74

anyone know if cellphones can open pdfs?

stjepan sejic

I told myself I wasn't going to. I told myself I'm supporting enough patreon creators. Then this came out. Worth it.

geekinlikeaboss

It is too fine! *ba-dum-tsss*

Marko Filipović

Oooh, this is gonna be goood

are you on a pc or on a cellphone?

stjepan sejic

The print it to small and trying to open it bigger makes it fuzzy

John Weekley

I can't read it

John Weekley

I'm already in love! I can't wait to see how things progress πŸ’œ

Dorie Weaver

Oh hells (heh) yes!

Daniel R.

Yey

BadBadMegatron


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