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Added 2019-05-01 04:49:14 +0000 UTCIt feels kind of weird to be actually drawing this scene... it has been so long in the planning that it's a little bit surreal to see it starting to unfold. Things are about to get a little bit more surreal.... :D
A surprising number of patrons said that they like seeing the rough panels, so I'm posting them again. A few folks had concerns, but I think what they took issue with was the rough panels not being updated in a timely manner. I think the process worked pretty well last month, so I'm going to try to keep up with the weekly updates to the site. If you have thoughts or concerns about this method of updates, please let me know in the comments below.
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Loroi do have males, I'm sure what ever passes for their supply and fabrication systems can make a male version available. And if it is a liner for a Vacc suit I'm sure he will want the male version because of ummm "plumbing issues"
Bee
2019-05-05 12:10:23 +0000 UTCDoh! Hehe... nothing to see here. We are a hedge...
CJSF
2019-05-04 18:23:40 +0000 UTC...except that the narrator _does_ explicitly say "seemed like."
Arioch
2019-05-04 15:05:07 +0000 UTCYes, I suppose you are right, but I guess where Alex doesn't say "seemed like" it struck me as odd. But there are some literary devices I never feel comfortable with. Regardless, the story is moving along and I can't wait to find out what happens next , especially beyond Chapter 2.
CJSF
2019-05-04 13:37:43 +0000 UTCThose kinds of situations are exactly when moments will "seem like minutes"
TSH
2019-05-04 09:36:54 +0000 UTCthis is awesome; thanks for sharing this, with and without the full range of color...there's something rather appealing about this part (maybe the lack of full color reinforces that he's alone and in a spare room right now?)
Anthony Docimo
2019-05-02 02:45:06 +0000 UTCwell, thats what form-fitting means, right, that it fits the form - regardless of shape.
Anthony Docimo
2019-05-02 02:43:48 +0000 UTC"How did you know my chest size?" "I guessed, you look to be about the same size as-" "BERYL!"
2019-05-01 22:23:33 +0000 UTCPicking nits here, Arioch, but imagine you're in a tense and dangerous situation and the (essentially) strangers tasked with "watching" you have stepped out for you to ostensibly try on some clothes. You hear a click. Now, time "several minutes"... say 3... and imagine how long that is given the situation. Did you mean "moments"? I guess you did write "seemed", but anyway, that's my two cents. Great to see the story flowing again!
CJSF
2019-05-01 18:08:39 +0000 UTCI'm just happy to see updates and the story rolling along. Keep it up!
Will C.
2019-05-01 14:43:50 +0000 UTCWomen's chests as a whole aren't that big compared to a male. (In humans at least.)
TSH
2019-05-01 11:46:50 +0000 UTCNo concerns, let the good times roll
Wabbit
2019-05-01 07:57:29 +0000 UTCEven so... tight fitting on a male?! I would expect that to be intrusive on a female - That's still an new interesting detail. Thank you for sharing your world. Do they atrophy significantly when between birthing cycles?
Twinkee
2019-05-01 07:26:27 +0000 UTCWell... Loroi aren't particularly known for their large bra sizes. ;)
Arioch
2019-05-01 05:03:31 +0000 UTCI would have thought the outfit would be loosest in the chest area given who's it designed for...
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