Outsider page 150
Added 2019-03-01 06:45:51 +0000 UTCOne the one hand, I feel a sense of accomplishment at reaching 150 pages. On the other, I feel sad that it took so long to get here.
Well, here we are, in any event.
Comments
This is a substantial rework of the page, though I like that it makes them seem less robotic in their speech.
TSH
2019-04-14 18:29:40 +0000 UTCSomehow I always got the impression that Talon might intend to give Alex mischief, or at least she doesnโt hold as strongly to other cultural taboos of her people. Case in point the handshake scene. Personality-wise she just seems quite bit more free-wheeling and outgoing than the others and not exactly pinned down by societal or cultural expectations.
2019-04-09 11:39:28 +0000 UTCSweet... nice to see them in color! :)
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-30 18:15:01 +0000 UTCIt's not mine, but there is an Outsider-oriented discord channel here: <a href="https://discord.gg/BADcKsJ" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://discord.gg/BADcKsJ</a>
Arioch
2019-03-26 17:58:40 +0000 UTChi, new here... does Arioch have a discord?
2019-03-26 04:24:06 +0000 UTCSeems pretty unambiguous to me..."show me some skin you blonde cutie!!!"
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-22 21:30:23 +0000 UTCI can just see it- They "respect his privacy" and turn around when he redress. Meanwhile Beryl transmit the image of a naked Alex in full detail...
Michael Pettersson
2019-03-21 10:17:07 +0000 UTCArioch, I wouldn't read my comment as confusion. :) It was interesting phrasing, but in the context of the story I think it makes perfect sense - with maybe some underlying details that could come out of it.
Jack Mudge
2019-03-03 23:47:07 +0000 UTC"Let me see you Stripped...!" ~ Thanks Rammstein <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wkU2PT_o73Q" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wkU2PT_o73Q</a>
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-03 23:02:35 +0000 UTCit was well worth the span of time it took to get to this point - we don't want you to rush, after all. you do great work as is.
Anthony Docimo
2019-03-03 06:20:39 +0000 UTCOr you may assume Loroi females act like human males. ;) He's a side of beefcake. *cough* I may of used this line on female friends AKA future GFs before.... the line, it makes perfect sense and so does the other one : )
Bee
2019-03-03 04:26:00 +0000 UTC.. Worked for me.
Twinkee
2019-03-03 02:19:49 +0000 UTCPardon the use of a placeholder.
Arioch
2019-03-02 22:04:16 +0000 UTC"Why would you be worried about my seeing you naked, when I have already seen you naked?" Did this confuse anyone else?
Arioch
2019-03-02 22:01:07 +0000 UTCTo my human ears, "Why [do you need privacy]? I have already seen you naked." reads as a little bit of a contradiction; the second half seems to imply they already know the answer to the enquiry. I'm curious how this relates to Loroi culture. This could just be a translation issue, but one (or at least, *this* one) has to wonder whether it's deeper than that.
Jack Mudge
2019-03-02 19:34:46 +0000 UTC<a href="http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider044.html" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider044.html</a> LARGER ;)
Twinkee
2019-03-02 04:07:46 +0000 UTC150 pages; well done Arioch. im so looking forward to see how this is going to turn out
NOMAD6
2019-03-02 03:57:15 +0000 UTCNSFW? <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYNNAlbfDLc" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYNNAlbfDLc</a>
Twinkee
2019-03-02 03:10:21 +0000 UTC<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWZisnZ-RGE" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWZisnZ-RGE</a>
Twinkee
2019-03-02 03:02:56 +0000 UTCGood reuse of that panel on page 35 ;-)
CJSF
2019-03-01 20:32:10 +0000 UTCIt is moving forward, that is the fantastic and good part.
Earl Tower
2019-03-01 19:09:54 +0000 UTCThat Talon ๐ as if i could love your work even more! Take your time. The only sad thing is that one day this will be over. Hope you got a sequal planned!
Jericho
2019-03-01 16:49:50 +0000 UTCFore some reason... Beryl's expression 'seems' deceptively faux-innocence... Tallon is just plain prurient, lol! She's so un-apologetically naughty!
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-01 10:24:50 +0000 UTCI love it! WHATEVER pace you put out pages...I'm just glad you keep at it.. I love this Story! And Tallon is such a bad girl...pilot jocks are all the same ~ lascivious! :)
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-01 10:20:14 +0000 UTCAh, fighter jocks. Never change Don't feel bad about taking this long. Watching Outsider still going on and still putting out pages --and actully picking up the pace some -- after a decade and a half filled me with Determination.
2019-03-01 09:50:34 +0000 UTCand you did great work so far .. please keep doing it ..
markus baur
2019-03-01 08:21:28 +0000 UTC"well, I have'nt - so please go ahead and strip to satisfy my curisoity" - LOL
markus baur
2019-03-01 08:20:58 +0000 UTCAlso, for a species that 'doesn't do' tactile contact, they seem to be otherwise pretty lax about personal boundaries...or it's been a while since the last time they've been around a male; even for a species with an 8:1 ratio...
DocSpit
2019-03-01 07:03:33 +0000 UTCI second the above emotion. I've seen dozens of projects like this fizzle and vanish over the years. It says something about your passion for the story you're telling that you're not giving up on it, even if the timetable isn't what you might have initially envisioned. Whether it's a page a week, a month, or a year, progress is progress. Keep moving forward :)
DocSpit
2019-03-01 06:57:01 +0000 UTCThat moment when you realize the girl who's seen you naked also has perfect recall.
TSH
2019-03-01 06:52:49 +0000 UTCSo it took longer than you expected to get page 150 to this stage and posted. From my perspective, I'm just happy that you are still around and willing to keep making them. Keep up the excellent work, please!
Perrin Rynning
2019-03-01 06:49:52 +0000 UTC
