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Added 2019-03-01 06:44:11 +0000 UTCCozy...not.
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<a href="https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_046jEHIe-bMEqFEsEkp8qKVuAJBxI6P" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_046jEHIe-bMEqFEsEkp8qKVuAJBxI6P</a> I love seeing this comic progress.
Twinkee
2019-04-10 17:56:58 +0000 UTCI don't use it in the contexts that they use it, certainly.
TSH
2019-04-09 09:51:51 +0000 UTCDo you not use the word "excellent"? I do. :D
Arioch
2019-04-09 08:31:52 +0000 UTCSpiral has the more extreme grammar, but I do try to make Talon's speech as distinctive as I can while still being clear and not making her sound like an idiot. It's something I should spend more effort on.
Arioch
2019-04-09 08:31:02 +0000 UTCI notice both Talon and Beryl using the term "excellent", is that a particular of trade, or are the loroi suprisingly familiar with the 90s?
TSH
2019-04-09 08:27:07 +0000 UTCTalon's grammar seems to have improved, which is fine for readability, but I miss her pseudo-eastern European accent (in my head)! Anyway, glad to see this in final form on the site. Looks great as usual. Great job, Arioch.
CJSF
2019-04-09 04:28:47 +0000 UTCYeah. Thanks.
Arioch
2019-03-01 16:00:30 +0000 UTCHey wait in cell 3 isn't Tallon missing her right cheek tattoo for her Direnal{sp}?
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-01 10:14:57 +0000 UTCAlex may be generating the most 'heat' of any of them...lol.. the idea they might all end up cuddling closer to him for HIS body heat is amusing!~ :)
Sunphoenix72
2019-03-01 10:13:13 +0000 UTCWait, can the suit regulate human temperatures?
TSH
2019-03-01 09:21:40 +0000 UTC
