Looking for feedback on banners for Kimochi
Added 2015-10-20 05:45:29 +0000 UTCI'm putting my games up on the new Kimochi platform, which is an adult game distribution program. They describe it as "like Steam but steamier". I've already put up Let Me In.
Anyway, each game needs a banner. PAF is a little hard to do a banner for, as I no longer have the original 3D files to render any new pictures with the old PAF character models, so I have to work with the image resources I already have. I'm also not really looking to do a whole lot of work on this if possible, but... well, I will if I have to.
Considerations: Each banner needs to...
- attract attention and represent the game well
- have bold contrasts to catch the eye
- work when shrunk down to a thumbnail size
The reason it actually matters is that it'll be a big part of what leads people to click on the game and at least read the description.
So what do you think of these ones? I've tried looking at them at the appropriate thumbnail size and they seem to clear enough, and bold enough. I know they're not the best images I've ever created, but do you think they are good enough? Are there any obvious problems or changes I should make?
Comments
The lighting makes it look super weird, like here face is split in two. Also the texture of her clothes looks odd. I know you want to make her look evil, but the game does that well enough.
Hank Rillek
2015-10-21 09:10:51 +0000 UTCBy the way, can you put your finger on what you find weird about how Masami looks here? Some problems are fixable :)
BBBen
2015-10-21 01:01:33 +0000 UTCI'll have a look at another design - often complex ones don't turn out as well, though, particularly when shrunk to a thumbnail.
BBBen
2015-10-20 12:27:16 +0000 UTCThe crisis one is pretty good. The future one makes Masami look really weird. Can't you paste together some sort of space backround wallpaper, with a combination of the robots and the girls wearing their tight fitting battle suits?
Hank Rillek
2015-10-20 07:04:58 +0000 UTC
