5 Story (To LOVE-Ru)
Added 2025-02-09 01:07:22 +0000 UTCAnime - To LOVE-Ru
Characters - Yui Kotegawa, Rito Yuuki
Description: Even a strict girl wants a worthy guy.
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Artur, I really appreciate that you're trying to help improve my content. At first, I also thought about focusing on the length of the 18+ scenes, but I just don't like that approach. I understand that some people might not enjoy long introductions, but they at least give some context about what's happening and why the girl agrees to cheat—that's what sets my work apart from regular hentai. Now that I've figured out many issues, the scenes will be much better. I'll also make the 18+ scenes longer and more intense.
Hirovim
2025-02-09 11:53:36 +0000 UTCstory 3min, other things 1min, sex :1:13 min there are two sex scenes in which the first one is so so and the second one could be but as standard the camera is where it shouldn't be, i.e. at the bottom (this is a mistake) in addition it moves too slowly it has to do it faster, as I said the lesson was not learned the standard mistakes will appear, i.e.: too much story and the camera moves slowly, everything happens too slowly and this scene could have been definitely longer maybe it would have been better, you still have a lot to learn although I say after a few things what and how it does not change at all.
Artur
2025-02-09 01:28:04 +0000 UTC
