Scenes (Hentai 16)
Added 2024-12-30 21:43:09 +0000 UTCLink to view and download
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new order in which it occurs story-25 sec bj (other things)-25 sec.-1 part -scene with breasts,2 part (BJ scene) 70 sec - too long shorten it (I mean the bj scene) sex- 1:40 sec.2 :63 sec,3:63 sec - (total 166 sec) this position could have been different the camera angles are an obstacle sometimes it is closer sometimes further away, usually it is close up after -41 sec - this could have been changed to a sex scene (this can be counted as a story but......) the scene is 4/5 (summary of this scene is that 2 out of 3 sex positions are awesome but 3 not so much is what I wrote above (this scene should be DIFFERENT!!), I am glad that there are more sex scenes but there should be more I see that you have improved a bit :but there are a few elements to improve (doing more awesome sex poses, much better camera angles because in the 3rd sex scene (sex scene no. 3) there is room for improvement, less BJ scenes, much less secs (other things) first of all some dialogues are in Russian you can fix that
Artur
2024-12-30 23:17:17 +0000 UTC
