Ava's Story Part 5 Poll
Added 2023-11-26 13:01:01 +0000 UTCHey there!
Exciting times are ahead as we dive into Ava's remarkable growth journey, and your votes hold the key to her path! Choose from the following poll options and let's make Ava's story a captivating one.
Remember that your votes hold immense power in shaping Ava's destiny and the thrilling twists that lie ahead. Join us on this extraordinary adventure as we unravel the consequences of your chosen path.
Comments
I understand that it’s a poll driven comic, what I meant is it could benefit from a longer format. She’s already grown substantially in just four parts so I don’t know much longer it can get. Thus maybe, when it’s wrapped up it could be revisited, delving deeper into Ava’s life. Anyways, I’m thrilled to see where this goes. Great work!
LucaG
2023-12-15 20:56:54 +0000 UTCThank you for your kind words! I'm glad I could assist you. Regarding Ava, is an ongoing comic, with the storyline being influenced by choices made by the Patreon users.
Khooza
2023-12-15 15:43:53 +0000 UTCWas hoping to see Ava flaunt her new figure some more by trying on different outfits and get reactions from her and the people around her, but I guess the totality of the other patrons have a different outlook 😅 Anyway, nice little comic, it’s awesome to see her confidence grow more and more; her figure is spectacular and that last page… whew! Just stunning. The facial expression is pure gold, can’t stress enough how much I ABSOLUTELY love it. And that rear omg 👀 Thank you for having her wear those tiny clothes multiple times, seeing how they fit after each step, I like that a lot! Only thing missing imo is an in-front-of-mirror render in her original form. Maybe you could add one inbetween the first pages, could be her expressing self-consciousness about her lack of prowess, something like page 4. Also, I noticed how her body language went from a closed one in the first part (pages 2, 4, 10) to a progressively more open and assertive one, especially in the fourth part, nice touch. Looking forward to see how it will keep reflecting her growing self-esteem!! Speaking of the fourth part, I enjoyed it thoroughly, more than the intercourse with the roommate (hence why I’d rather have seen something new in the next part), it was pretty neat with all the different positions but personally I would have been a little more touchy on the boobs hehe Would you ever consider making a full length comic of Ava? From the polls I can see ideas are not lacking and also the support is pretty good it seems. I would totally love to explore in deeper fashion her life going from a meek nerdy girl to a statuesque confident woman, have a better look at how her character changes and even more so the relationships with her bf and her friends/relatives.
LucaG
2023-12-15 15:17:52 +0000 UTC
