All Access: Fair Exchange Part 4
Added 2021-02-21 21:41:45 +0000 UTCDaniel and Megan finally make their decision about their guest.
As a special treat, I've included a PDF with the entire series compiled into one.
Comments
Thanks for the feedback Glyn! I’m really glad you liked the way it all played out. It was a joy to develop and shape this story over time. It’ll be weird moving on to new characters after so long. And I always feel like its a success if the reader is left satisfied and wanting more. Definitely a good combination. =) Daniel got himself quite a few first experiences that day. It was fun breaking him down until the inevitable. Hopefully his descent didn’t seem too quick because I think he feels the same. Lucky dog. For many reasons. As you mentioned, that sociopath could destroy them, but he knew that would end the fun. The Fergusons would understand that if they weren’t too distracted with the debasing sexing to care. Although, now, they might have to with Cary back home and the whole dynamic thrown off. Then again, Cary probably isn’t too different from his father anyway. And who knows what can happen in six months. I bet by that time, Vedmid could convince them to let him stay longer. ;)
Lykos Bane
2021-03-02 18:57:20 +0000 UTCEnding with the son's return is hilarious. He's the beginning and ending of this story, and seemingly the person who most embodies their fear of discovery. I can't even imagine what he'll think when he enters that house. I get the giggles imagining what kind of starting point that would make for the plot should you ever decide to return to these characters. Wonderful work as always, Lykos! I can't wait for your next tale!
Glyn Wolf
2021-02-23 03:23:33 +0000 UTCSPOILERS FOLLOW You definitely fired Chekhov's gun in this part: Vedmid's final victory over the Fergusons felt prefigured and inevitable, just as every desire of Vedmid's seems inevitable in this world. I enjoyed every moment of the Fergusons' delicious undoing, as clearly did they despite their protests. My favourite part is when Daniel is caught between Vedmid and Megan in an anal sandwich, effectively becoming a strap-on sex toy for Vedmid, and how hard he cums from being used that way. It may be humiliating and emasculating but I say what a lucky dog! We've shifted perspective a number of times and so I suppose it's fitting we end with Vedmid himself. I got so used to viewing him as more of an inscrutable force of nature than a relatable character that it was a little disorienting at first. I very much enjoyed hearing about his motivations, though, and his mental checklist of all of the things he COULD bend the Fergusons to do if he were more evil than he is. Clearly the Fergusons cannot entirely understand how lucky they are to have met such an *enlightened* sociopathic bully. I mean, he could destroy their lives and reputations entirely, but instead he'll give them endless debasing sexings because it's more fun for him.
Glyn Wolf
2021-02-23 03:23:25 +0000 UTCHow sad that all good things must come to an end! ;) This series has been a thrill ride and the conclusion is both satisfying and leaving me wanting more, which is the best combination. Wonderful work as always, Lykos! I can't wait for your next tale!
Glyn Wolf
2021-02-23 03:05:32 +0000 UTC
