Production update 11/21/22

Production and script update time!

First off, thank you to everyone whose either followed me or supported me or even just read the visual novel!

It really means a ton that people would give my work the time of day, and usually come out enjoying it as well!

Okay, updates.

The script for the beginning of part two is currently at 37k~ words consisting of two "days." The idea is to push for four "days" this update consisting of two days with Marrowyn in his office, one with Rhoun doing Eye knows what in the vents, and finally a, shorter, day with Marruk to calm down.

Currently the days with Marrowyn are being written/edited. 

As far as new art goes I have 2 new BG wips and a CG wip available for "Executive Officer" tier patrons right now, with 3 more planned for the update. (Shooting for 4 new BG's and 2 CG's)

I might need to make some new sprite art as well, which would be a big bottleneck in development as it usually takes me the longest.

Script editing and updates. Thank you all for pointing out and helping in any way to alleviate the current grammar issues in the novel. This is my first time writing something long form and editing it is a feat in and of itself. I am aware I would be well of finding a proof reader, and I will try, but as to where or how I am unsure. 

Any community help would be fantastic. If anyone finds an error feel free to helpfully point it out and I will try to fix it, but I know that is not enough in the long run. My Twitter DM's are open and I believe you can message me on Patreon. 

It is something I would like to get better at myself, but I am not fantastic at grammar so an extra set of eyes would be wonderful. 

Story clarification: Choosing who you room with will not change the overall plot. I understand that that might be upsetting to some but taking on writing three plots would be to much. It is simply for romance options and who you want to hang out with more. There will be entire "days" in the future dedicated to each character so feel free to play all of them! But in the end the story will progress as normal, it might just change who says what and so on. Thank you for understanding. 

When is the next update? Great question. Unfortunately, I am not sure. As I said I'm working on Days 1-2 right now and the backgrounds for those are almost done, but nothing has been completed for days 3-4 minus an outline.

I would like to push for an update around Christmas but with how school is going, and this cold I've contracted, I haven't been able to work as much as I would like to. 

I could most likely push an update that is just days 1-2 and the beginning setup of day 3 if that were preferable? To get some more content out ther in a smaller update. Please feel free to let me know you opinions on that.

Mostly just wanted to give everyone a progress update and say thank you for all the support you have given me so far! Even following my Itch.io means a ton to me! 

Thank you!

Sincerely,

Cryptid