DAY07.DIARY
Added 2022-01-26 16:40:35 +0000 UTCThis is the diary scene that covers the seventh day. It focuses on the girl's emotions and her struggle with them. I hope to showcase a so far unnoticed/recognized gradual shift in her thoughts regarding the relationship between her and the boy.
I'm not entirely happy with the scene. I will keep tweaking it every now and then until the next update is released (and possibly, after that, since I find these diary entries tough to write).
As for the plans for the next two updates, I have planned them out already, sketching a basic structure of the events and plot. Of course, as I'm writing, it's likely to get changed slightly, but the foundations are laid out.
Comments
Thanks, it's good to know it isn't too bad and it doesn't rub you the wrong way right away :)
2022-01-26 17:44:45 +0000 UTCi think it works. I see you struggling a bit with how to get it down on paper, but so is she. I think that you finding it tough to write the diary actually shows that she is finding it tough to write it too, and that creates more authenticity than if you had a perfect flow and smoothness in the diary writing.
RexArmand
2022-01-26 17:21:53 +0000 UTC
