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deleted scene (chapter seven).

chapter seven was initially extremely difficult to write. i had a lot of plans for the separating branches (stay in the vip room or check out the commotion) but all of them fell through. this is one of the more minor changes, where the hunter exited the room after their conversation with Mirai, rather than the ro coming in. to follow up, i had created the choice of staying to snoop or following Mirai, where the former would lead to a personal one-on-one conversation with the ro of your choice, sitting on the ground in Mirai's private room.

i ended up scrapping the idea because one, my writer's block and two, because the snooping felt too similar to what had already happened in chapter four. i like what i did instead with the whole 'there's someone coming, quick hide' thing, but it'd be interesting to see where things would've went if i stuck with my original idea.

deleted scene (chapter seven).

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