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Glory Days Chapter 8

The first piece of content for the year 2022!

I had a lot of fun writing this one. As a concept, it seems Glory Days is a favourite for not just you guys, but myself. On occasion, I find chapters going over double the usual word count (2000) but I think this is actually the first time when I've gone even further. As the first piece of the new year, I would like to think of that as a sign of good things to come down the road. Hopefully, content over the rest of the year is either just as good or, fingers crossed, even better.

As always, let me know your thoughts on the content. Was it to your liking? Better than expected? Where do you think things could be improved? I'm forever striving to be not just a better writer in the general sense, but as a storyteller, too, so all the feedback is helpful.

Comments

I think it would be interesting if Jason jealous of nicola's relationship with caleb joins Pam's gym and starts roiding up.

Overall a great chapter. It really brings out the drama that Nicola and Jason are having both externally and internally. One interesting idea would be interesting would be Krista "going undercover" to Pam's gym to get info for Nicola.


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