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Amnoartist
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Gemini!

Hey guys!

Here's Gemini for those who pledged.

Please, just as always, let me know what your thoughts were on this particular release. Should I have done something differently? Should I have swapped some events round to create a better flow or suspense?

Thanks! :)

Comments

In my opinion, yes, but that could be that I'm easily satisfied. I liked it a lot, but you'll have to see what your other patrons think.

Jeremy Wilson

Glad to see you enjoyed it Jeremy :) Yeah, they're in a relationship. I guess that's something I should've mentioned. Did the length and quality reflect the pledge amount though?

Amnoartist

I quite enjoyed it, short, sweet and to the point, love a girl who loves to show off her insanely put together body for a guy. Whether that guy is their boyfriend or just a John paying for it doesn't matter as long as they both get some gratification out of it and it appeared that both did in this story. Really good stuff, dude. :)

Jeremy Wilson


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