Gemini!
Added 2016-10-28 19:00:00 +0000 UTCHey guys!
Here's Gemini for those who pledged.
Please, just as always, let me know what your thoughts were on this particular release. Should I have done something differently? Should I have swapped some events round to create a better flow or suspense?
Thanks! :)
Comments
In my opinion, yes, but that could be that I'm easily satisfied. I liked it a lot, but you'll have to see what your other patrons think.
Jeremy Wilson
2016-10-28 22:21:58 +0000 UTCGlad to see you enjoyed it Jeremy :) Yeah, they're in a relationship. I guess that's something I should've mentioned. Did the length and quality reflect the pledge amount though?
Amnoartist
2016-10-28 21:07:38 +0000 UTCI quite enjoyed it, short, sweet and to the point, love a girl who loves to show off her insanely put together body for a guy. Whether that guy is their boyfriend or just a John paying for it doesn't matter as long as they both get some gratification out of it and it appeared that both did in this story. Really good stuff, dude. :)
Jeremy Wilson
2016-10-28 21:02:48 +0000 UTC