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🍃EASE OFF - CHAPTER 2, Part 2 🍂 - Pages 1-12/35 ($3)

Chapter 2 looks like this (🤡):

Because I won't be able to finish the full chapter for a couple weeks, Chapter 2, Part 2, Page 12 is a good scene change to share! I'm redoing the thumbs for the rest of the book (Chapters 4-6) while I have a (sort of) lull in work and have the brain energy to spare. 😅

Next stop: Achilles' room!!!! 🚂

I'll update this post with the full PDF once the remaining half is done!! Public release TBD, maybe end of April?


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Comments

Thank you, I’m glad!! 😭 I imagine it’s hard being best friends and also being in love / being inexorably drawn 😔 they’ll resolve it sometime… but not this chapter 😅😅

That was so fun to read! They were awkward but then they seemed to relax and then suddenly the whole conversation slipped back into a mess. Than has the perfect advantage for leaving a conversation unfinished D: Nice little emotional rollercoaster that leaves me with anticipation.

Thank you!! I’m glad to hear that 🙏💜 I trying to avoid a pitfall where they’re exaggeratedly & repeatedly awkward or upset without taking their entire history into consideration 🥺

You capture the dynamic of Than and Zag being so awkward at one another so well without making either of them seem bumbling.

Alu 😭 Your comments are always so attentive. I'm so glad you noticed that panel, since that was one I added last minute and waffled about keeping before deciding to keep it 💜 They're all just talking so hopefully it can be interesting visually too

I love them all so much. Seeing Than and Zag playing around like this, only to have that misunderstanding destroying the mood, AAAAAH 😭😭 Also i love the tension on Achilles at the simple mention of Patroclus; or just the panel focus on the codex Zagreus is holding: it's "just a panel" but to me this means a lot, if we consider this focus is from Achilles's eyes!


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