The Crawlspace
Added 2022-12-25 01:46:49 +0000 UTCThank you for bearing with me for so long this
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I want credit for coming up with the concept of Existential Crisis Barbie before it went mainstream.
Derivative Kebab
2024-01-05 21:43:23 +0000 UTCWow. This was the first time a kink story actually made me feel a sense of cathartic tragedy. Well done on that bittersweet ending. I especially liked how Kara’s philosophy contrasted with Nanny and the toys. Kara has a need for everything to have an explanation because she can control so little in her life so she wants to at least understand that which she can’t control. But for all the terror the unknown can bring, it can be pretty exciting too. I guess that’s the reason so many kink stories have a bit of a horror vibe to them. Nice twist at the end there. It’s great to see the usual formula get shaken up a bit (I’m predicting that the end of Bethany the Doll will play out similarly). If you ever want to do more “deleted scenes” like with Francesca in Strawberry Bootlaces I would love to see more of Kara. Maybe an epilogue where we see how she used her new “gifts” to improve her life (maybe even getting a girlfriend who does some Nanny/Doll roleplaying with her). Lastly, Existential Crisis Barbie actually sounds like a very interesting and funny concept (just not very kinky).
Josh Stack
2022-12-25 03:07:51 +0000 UTC
