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My favorite song from the songwriting streak

Some of you asked me what my favorite song I wrote was from the streak, and the answers might surprise you - two of the less voted for songs speak the deepest to me, but I find it’s usually more because of the potential I as a writer see in it than anything else, and my relationship to the lyrics.

The three highest voted songs were “I choose you”, “I’m waiting in line” and “Stressed girl”.

The first two have the most built out productions, which probably means I’ve shared a bit more of my vision for those songs with you - it makes sense (and maybe they ARE also the best ones!). “Stressed Girl” seemed to speak directly to many of you, which I loved to see.

Additionally, all of those three songs were upbeat/faster and relatively happy - could it be that part of it is that you enjoy seeing me happy and want me to be happy? ❤️ And that happy music makes you feel happier? That’s definitely something I want to make more of it it gives you good vibes!!

Ok so as for my favorites, the ones I feel I can expand on and that speak to me - are two not very highly voted songs. “Waterfall” and “When it ends”.


“Waterfall” I like, because I have plans in my head on expanding the concept of experiences you’ve had with people in the past still running through you and being part of you - relatives that aren’t with you anymore, and perhaps even watching your own influence run like a waterfall through your future kids or something. Maybe even the idea of the love of a potential higher being running through you like a waterfall. I also just think that having the audience shouting the response “waterfall” back at you live would be really cool. I might experiment with using normal vocals instead of falsetto too, or at least layering an octave lower, having a chorus be more of a gang vocal situation.

For “when it ends”, I think I just really liked the message of that song, perhaps the lyrics should be put to another melody or at least we should try having more production in there, but I do really enjoy trying to share an appetite for life and nice experiences, I feel like myself and many people around me struggle with having an appetite for life outside of work, productivity and just fulfilling our responsibilities.

I am really happy to see what you guys voted for though, “I choose you” seems to be number one right now and I definitely want to finish that one.

I might revisit the lyrics of “waiting in line” - I guess looking back it feels a little banal and just lighthearted, compared to the other songs. Nothing wrong with that, i just feel like I could do better even with the happy theme.

I’m going to go through all of this with a music producer friend, and I want to see what we can do with all of them. no songs are out of the running and I appreciate you guys input a lot. I had so much fun, I’ll probably be back at it soon again. For now I just want to revisit some normal YouTube video making :)

So sorry for the massive amount of text, just wanted to share what’s up!

Appreciate you all immensely

Joel

Comments

As a listener I chose mostly based on sound & not lyrics. And I vastly prefer upbeat and FAST.

RhodiumMaiden

Thank you for sharing so much with us! Excited to see/hear some new releases when you get them done!

Amberlash

Didn't think about favourites, each sounded great in their own way. It be tough to pick from the bunch. Interesting take on what your favs were, tack for sharing Mate 🐺🐾

PhantomFidget

Can you add the songs as audio only so they go on Spotify please?

Lianne Conroy

Nice to hear your thoughts on this whole process, even nicer to hear you have further plans for these songs.

Adina

Yes its great, i think a lot of people liked that one. Your lyrics are very good i think

Snoodle

I feel like I’ve grown a lot as a lyric writer in the last few years and I still like that one!

Joel Berghult

Put that into the bowl of potential songs too!

Joel Berghult

A happy Joel is all we want 😊

Hayley

💜

Melissa Rogers

@Melissa I totally love this! It's refreshing to see you mention on here because it definitely gives Roomie some positive affirmation. Not that he really needs it but I'm sure it helps his mental health a bit, to know that he is a blessing and making such a positive impact on so many lives. God bless you Melissa and thank you for this🙏💯💞

Naomiskyyy

If you are happy, we are happy too. Thank you for sharing your creativity and talent with us. Have a great week🤍🤍

Jess Haggstron

@Naomiskyyy, honestly, I couldn’t have said this better myself. I agree with you 1000000%+!! For the poll, I chose a different song, but I love all of them!! @Roomie she’s right…whether you feel like it or not, in many different ways, you truly are and have been a blessing to us all. Even on your darkest days, somehow you always manage to help make our days brighter!! And just knowing that, I hope makes your days shine brighter. Thank you so much for _everything_ you do and for your hard work!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻 It does not go unnoticed…we all see you, Joel!!

Melissa Rogers

I will say that seeing you happy and wanting you to be happy is a huge part of it for me. 💗happy Joel makes me happy. That’s why I like the more upbeat ones. But really I loved all of them. I thoroughly enjoyed all the different levels of Joel ❤️ and you best believe I’m gonna awkwardly jam and dance to whichever one’s become full songs (still do even though they aren’t) because you’re my favorite and I’m so grateful that you share so much of yourself with us. I feel spoiled 🥰

Leah Miranda

Whenever you post a song snippet/demo, I've always wondered what's the inspiration, the meaning and your thoughts on it. Thank you very much for telling us. I understand a lot better now. We don't mind the long text really. After knowing your visions and plans, I want you to enjoy going through the refining process of your songs and not feel weighed down trying to make everyone happy and encouraged. I truly appreciate you too, Joel~~💜

♠️ Aslyn Jobry ♠️

1) No need to apologize for long text, love hearing from you! 2) Excited for what’s next. It was hard to choose just one! 🥰

Alle Engdahl

Are you going to finish What's The Point? Really loved that one x

Snoodle

Aww yes it makes us happy to see u happy!! 💜 I look forward to seeing which songs u decide to work on. It will be great to see what creative changes, if any, u decide to make from the original short 🙂

Miriam

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on your choices and ours. I think you nailed the reasoning for our preference (at least for me you did). Plus I can see me belting Waiting in Line in the car. Love the idea of hearing Waterfall in a lower vocal range. It really was hard to choose just one song since there were things o liked about each of them. I wonder what the results would have looked like if we could pick our top three (or five, or seven lol)

Dorie

Good to see your thoughts on the songs. Waterfall and When it ends were my favorites when it comes to the lyrics. Waterfall I personally think would be nicer with your original voice. And both songs have a potential to go in the same kind of direction like „Home“ that you shared with us before. So I am exited to see what will come out when you redo/update them. I really liked seeing you experiment with different styles!

Lebuwi

Yes, please 🙏🏻🙏🏻. It was too hard for me to choose just one song in your poll!! I do love them all, for different reasons. 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Melissa Rogers

Very infectious…just like his laughter!! Whenever Joel laughs (No matter which of his many styles it is…), he always brightens my day and makes me smile and laugh right along with him!! 😁😁

Melissa Rogers

It would be weird if we didnt want you to be happy. Do whatever that makes you shine! ✨

Marlene Sommer ☀️

Wanting you to be happy? Nah, I just really like to be chosen, especially in all dimensions(: And I was expecting the answer to be something like “It’s like choosing who’s your favourite kid, and these are all like my children, so I can’t pick one over the others”:) But seriously thank you for sharing these thoughts! It was very (*underlined 2 times) interesting to hear what The dad got to say! Ok, have a nice evening+sleep+rest of the video-making week📹

N M

Yes we do like to see you happy, its infectious 😁

Snoodle

I would love that too, if it's not too much of a hassle 🙂

JustSomeJK

Personally I would really like it

Lianne Conroy

When I listen to your songs it sounds like you are harshly criticizing yourself for example in So Selfish which is an amazing song.

ron store

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about writing these amazing songs and taking us on that emotional journey with you. 'When it ends' is also my favorite, along with 'I choose you', which seemed like a following concept.. first inspires what can matter most in life (or at least one of the most, since it's not forever), and the second puts to such peace, even happiness with that mood. 'Waterfall' hit definitely the most 💜 Think you're right about seeing you happy, and wanting for you to be happy can play a big role with these songs too. Loved reading this text! Really appreciate you Joel ❤️

Nina L

Thanks for sharing your favorite songs with us!! 👍 It was awesome hearing all the songs. Hope you enjoy your week😊

Bookdragon 43

If I upload them as audio only they go on Spotify! Let me know if you want thy

Joel Berghult

All of them have connection to me :) I don’t like to be explicit because I want songs to be able to mean something to the listener personally but I write based on my life for sure

Joel Berghult

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. I'll admit that I thought shouting "waterfall" was a bit odd (maybe because I was thinking in my mother tongue, so it seemed a bit funny), but after reading what you have visualized for it being chanted by the audience in a live show, that makes so much sense now Similar to what other people've said already, we want to see you happy. Happiness looks good on you, Joel ❤️ Looking forward to all that you have in-store for us: videos, music, secret projects and whatnot 😬 Please take your time and enjoy the things that make you happy (anything, doesn't have to be work hehe). Appreciate you tons! Now, take good care 🙂💖

Bua (mintteafortwo)

Can u write songs about ur hisrory? It sounds like you've been through a lot in ur life, we'd love it if you shared with us.❤️

ron store

Interesting takes on your part for sure. I’m finding myself leaning more into songs that are upbeat and have a happier message lately. Shows you’re very skilled in what you do when you’re able to write about such a wide variety of topics 😊

Becky Lorion

Is there a way to add these songs to the Spotify patreon playlist for us?

Lianne Conroy

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about these songs, it was really interesting to hear what u think of them yourself 🙂 I'm excited to hear that you are planning on working on some of these songs further (I wish it was all of them though 🫣, but I get it that it's a lot of work to make a full song out of all of them) and maybe doing this song snippet streak again too 🥰🎶 This two week streak showed how wide range u have in your vocals and what kind of cool "tricks" u can do with your voice and once again how relatable your lyrics are and how u deliver them in a way that it makes u feel them, appreciate u a lot ❤️

JustSomeJK

It would make sense that the songs you loved more are ones voted lower. I feel like that's usually how it goes with my writing as well. I can write about something really personal to me and it'll not be as well liked as something I wrote on a whim, that really isn't on a serious note, and people think it's amazing. Doesn't mean they are any less important or don't have an impact on anyone. I appreciate you shared them all and can't wait to see what you do with them or news ones in the future!

Melissa

This was beautifully written Joel! Thank you for letting us know what your favorite songs were and the reasons why. I think you're right about why a lot of us, including myself, upvoted the 3 most upbeat songs(I picked I'm Waiting In Line), because we do want to see you being happy and enjoying what you're doing. A lot of us have mentioned before that when we see Joel happy, it makes us happy. I think we can all agree that we are here to support you and always look forward to new experiments you do and also just the normal YouTube making videos. Thank you for always making my stressful days better and all the hard work you put into everything you do. Thank you for staying true to yourself, you are a blessing to all of us💞

Naomiskyyy

Ofc we want to see you happy. You deserve that.

Shauna

Appreciate you, Joel. Is that one of your “secrets” 🤔 always love to hear you write/produce/sing songs ❤️ can’t wait to see what you do next either with YouTube or writing ❤️❤️

Angela Lee

Thank you for explaining your thought process. All of the songs are really good and it was hard to choose a favorite. And yes we probably like the Happy songs because we like thinking that you are happy. But a lot of the time sad songs resonate more. If you can share an emotion with someone that's really special. You could finish all of them and make an album

Lianne Conroy

It is summer and happy songs are on trend. I am not a deep thinker and really appreciate songs that make me feel good. And, these are just short demos. Without a full song and production any of these songs could be great. Thanks for sharing all of them.

Cas


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