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Short: When it ends

This one took forever, hope you like!

I would say "see you tomorrow" but honestly I could miss any day with this, hoping I can keep the streak going! :P

Comments

* When it ends noises * A great deal of relatability on this one, might've take forever, yet the efforts paid off. Great melody Mate 🐺 🐾

PhantomFidget

That makes a lot of sense tho, if in songwriting, you would normally do the lyrics 1st , then the beats, instruments, or melodies, etc. At least that's also what I do too with my music lol. Great minds think alike huh Joel πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘ I would write out my lyrics 1st then make some chords on my keyboard/Guitar/Ukelele then I would have a melody going thru my mind then I would record of it it separately and somehow put it all together.

CK DeP

I write out the lyrics usually and then I make a backing track. People don’t usually write lyrics first but I like it a lot

Joel Berghult

This short song speaks to me coz I can relate to it very much and it's happening to me so yeah it's very taking on me kind of thing (idk if that's the word I'm looking for to make any of this make sense) lol I hope it makes sense but yeah lol, I would like to hear a fuller version of this & how do you come up with these short songs , do you make them up as you go or do you write it out before filming or recording it or just start filming / recording and make it to as you go on the spot? @Roomie

CK DeP

Awesome lyrics! πŸ’—πŸ‘

Bookdragon 43

❀️ LOVE

Dannielle O'Neill

Also, in this video, your slight smiles and glances at the cameraβ€¦πŸ« πŸ« 

Melissa Rogers

Joel, with _any_ of these songs (in their finished forms), if they get any negative (that’s not constructive) criticism/attention…well then, there’s something wrong with those individuals!! Your voice is beautiful and sounds great, like a warm hug. These songs are also great…with your vocal and visual delivery, we can really feel the emotion you are portraying. And that’s a powerful thing. Thank you so much!! Big hugs and lotsa #RoomanianLove always!!

Melissa Rogers

This is my fav so far🀍

Jess Haggstron

You’re on a roll. It’s good to see you so much doing what you love. πŸ€—

Adina

Just making it a habit at this point! Some of these might make it public eventually and then we’ll see how people react/what gets a positive response!

Joel Berghult

Backlight is real!! Good eyes

Joel Berghult

We are building up to a whole album here. It all sounds interesting and I would love to hear the complete song.

Kate Quantrell

Too short!!! I think I need more of this song ❀️ Also, I like how this room has natural light and it kinda slightly changes the mood and tone according to the time of day you film these clips (there's some natural light right? Or is it the work of color grading? Or am I just imagining things 🧐) Anyhow, very nice job. Keep it up, J πŸ™‚

Bua (mintteafortwo)

Love the vibe of this one. πŸ’• makes me want to go hang with friends.

Dorie

This is my favorite so far!

Trisa

So uplifting, I could listen to this forever πŸ’œ

Nina L

Fair!

Joel Berghult

Just my opinion. When you're sitting down holding the mic with your right hand while holding the cord with the left hand, just resting your arm on the table, it doesn't look as weird, looks more natural/relaxed because you're stationary.

Naomiskyyy

Really nice with the echo effect voices. The simple guitar accompaniment is spot on. Do you plan on making a longer song? Or is the short just a form of a moment to moment thought/emotion? Trying to let go. To work on NOT overthinking? Therapeutic, if any of that is true, I like/love the self help therapy concept. You are amazing and such wonderful music. Still enjoy your voice, your range is better in the higher range. You have been working on that and it shows. Beautiful Joel, really beautiful thank you. Love you trulyβœŒοΈβœŒοΈβœŒοΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Gayle

Aw I love these lyrics ❀️ FELT lol it seems you’re enjoying these as much as we are 😊 thank you for sharing. Joel!

Leah Miranda

Feels like a sunrise to me😌 Also, knowing what you want means already a big chunk of job done Thank you for your music!

N M

Its so the core doesn’t get stuck. Would have to switch filming locations prob

Joel Berghult

Haha how? The core gets stuck if I don’t hold it hehe

Joel Berghult

Instantly starting swaying to this, love the calming acoustic sound as it makes it super easy to take in and envision the lyrics 😊 Would love to hear more of this song as my only criticism is that it ended abruptly! Also, go run in a lake and watch the water ripples. Nothing is stopping you πŸ™‚

Jen πŸ¦™

Love the lyrics in this one! Kinda odd the way you keep moving the mic around with your hand and other hand holding the cord though.

Naomiskyyy

Very relatable again! So yeah, I like it. Good luck with keeping the streak going πŸ™‚

JustSomeJK

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♠️ Aslyn Jobry ♠️

I love the sentiment and the vocal layers in this song. I think you are ready for prime time. You set the rules so you can break them. If you need a recharge day, you should take it.

Cas

Loving the creativity atm, i think Sweden is good for you πŸ‡ΈπŸ‡ͺ

Snoodle

the non mic hand seems to be the only thing that seems awkward in this one. Not sure what else to do with it though

Lianne Conroy


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