Song Demo: Never Ending (From Songwriting stream March 2 2023)
Added 2023-03-03 06:02:04 +0000 UTCEdit: Thinking last lines may be:
"See my dreams speeding by on the motorway
Wish they would follow me"
As a juxstaposition of how we're always following our dreams, but it would be easier if they follow us. Also it kinda works in the context of a motorway, that the dreams could follow your car but instead they're just ripping by in a sports car you'll never catch up to if that makes sense. Deep lmao
/End edit
We might continue this one another time bc I really like it, but ye here's what we got! It's kinda short for the time it took to make but the lyrics are beautiful and Iove the melodies. Needs a good chorus :D (Perceptive people might notice I added a couple extra things before uploading this, like a high piano in the second part and a new ending line)
I feel like a snowflake in the sun
Slowly melting, no one helping
I don't like what I've become
Overwhelming never ending
Hellish week, but got nothing to show today
Put my all into things that I throw away
See my dreams passing by on the motorway
Just wanna feel ok
Comments
This is really beautiful β€οΈ
Snoodle
2023-12-24 23:51:46 +0000 UTCWow
Teagan Ostrow44
2023-07-12 01:38:49 +0000 UTCI am incredibly behind on this. This I love..simple focus on voice and songwriting. I hope this becomes a thing!!
Heather Skinner
2023-03-29 18:50:54 +0000 UTCThank you for this! I just wait for a version of some ballad from you, your soft voice is wow
Phoebe Grint
2023-03-08 02:33:26 +0000 UTC* Sick Never Ending Noises * πΊπΎ
PhantomFidget
2023-03-04 21:32:08 +0000 UTCOoh. Like the change to the last lines. Nice.
Dorie
2023-03-04 15:32:12 +0000 UTCI like the edited last two lines more because Iβm a sucker for deeper meanings behind lyrics π
Helga π¦
2023-03-03 21:47:55 +0000 UTCIt does sound really good for a start....thought about slowly adding some other instruments? Kind of to your notion how things add on and side track you away from initial focus? Like some strings, nice light jazz drums(the wide sweep sticks to sort of have shuffle drums)? You are very deep, you are amazing Joel. Though, the humility is very attractive π. Thank you for letting us in on all this, it's really interesting. Love you.
Gayle
2023-03-03 19:52:33 +0000 UTCVery pure, emotional and minimalistic - one voice only and the piano And I feel like singing without belting was the hardest part for you, Joel π
Franceska
2023-03-03 17:27:43 +0000 UTCThis is beautiful Joelβ¦your voice sounds soft and cozy.
Melissa Rogers
2023-03-03 16:43:58 +0000 UTCThis is lovely!
Sugary Magnolia
2023-03-03 14:09:08 +0000 UTCI like that you kept it soft and chillβ¦it definitely sets up certain mood π₯Ί And I definitely like lyrics so far βΊοΈ
Helga π¦
2023-03-03 13:38:59 +0000 UTCThe stream was fun. I enjoyed the participation and I really like the song. Lots of feels.
Cas
2023-03-03 13:31:53 +0000 UTCGlad to hear you wanna work on it more c: I fell asleep the last 15-20 mins of the stream oops π
MediocreAtBest
2023-03-03 12:59:25 +0000 UTCThis was one of the songs where I can also easily see a BEAUTIFUL visual for a music video in my head. That said...PLEASE, take this as sincerity/good thing: I also think you can easily have a good look for that. Not every dude can manage the specific mood balance for it. JS
Dannielle O'Neill
2023-03-03 12:45:04 +0000 UTCLove it so much
Melinda Young
2023-03-03 12:09:38 +0000 UTCLove the song lyrics!! Very relatable, Thanks for the awesome stream, enjoyed watching the song being created with ideas from everyone!!π₯°πππ₯πΆ
Bookdragon 43
2023-03-03 11:13:23 +0000 UTCI went to bed knowing you were singing about diarrhoea at IKEA and woke up to find this beautiful demo...
Sarah
2023-03-03 10:24:50 +0000 UTCStill working on it? You would have to pronounce me as may to rhyme it with motorway. It could be ok
Lianne Conroy
2023-03-03 10:15:12 +0000 UTCReally love how this is turning out. The melody is really lovely and love how it sounds with your voice. It was fun watching it come together. π
Dorie
2023-03-03 08:49:43 +0000 UTChttps://www.instagram.com/reel/CpDxmYcM0Xw/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y= here is the link if youβre interested Joel
Stephanie Bruso
2023-03-03 07:05:09 +0000 UTCDamn it Joel, now u just like to mess, play around with my emotions don't ya!! Haha! But I love it!πππΆπΆ Can't wait for fuller version!π Lyrics hit hard, I felt that emotion!π
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:59:02 +0000 UTCYeahhh, gonna needs more of this please!ππΆπΆπππ€£
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:57:24 +0000 UTCEven tho it's a demo clip & it's only 33 seconds long, I can't even wait for the fuller version!ππΆππ
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:56:39 +0000 UTCDamnnn, those lyrics hit me hard in my gut, heart, soul, felt that so much lol It's amazing but damnnn, I can feel that! Love the way you showing that emotion in your voice & tone I can hear it.πππΆπΌπΉ Now I wanna hear the rest!ππΆπ
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:52:39 +0000 UTCBeautiful. I like it a lot. Very excited for a full version π
naschpanda
2023-03-03 06:52:15 +0000 UTCI keep going back to when you first released your first song you posted on Patreon here, so on , to now, even tho some or half of those songs you've made or written - even if it was/is for fun , jokes, etc. To now more "serious" singing, vocals , storytelling , etc. I do like and enjoy those types of music. Even if there's some ones that doesn't make any sense or just made up on the spot or the lyrics doesn't match up or there's not really any storyline just a bunch of those "repeating" type of words like hey or yeah/oh/baby, etc. But yet enjoy that! Does that make me feel dumb or stupid or even weird to listen back on those but enjoy them if they make no sense? @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:49:36 +0000 UTCRandom thought/question here but , I know this has nothing to do with this song clip but, however, just randomly thought of this - if ever Joel's song "Burn" that he posted/released for his challenge video that he did with Daniel Thrasher, Jacksfilms , will that ever get finished or released, or be made fuller or never to see the light of day so I'll just have to keep putting that mini song on like a loop coz it's sooo damn catchy, and now I wish I could hear what the rest of the Burn song sounded or would sound like. @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:40:55 +0000 UTCJust woahhh !!! π
Magalie Leplus
2023-03-03 06:37:14 +0000 UTCYeahhh!! Exactly!! Thank you! At least someone around here gets what I'm saying hahaha!!! Yeah, same here, can't be in a room or anything or if I'm doing something like writing or reading or doing chores around the house I can't have just silence, I feel very awkward, too quiet for me , so I just blast music haha! And it's 90% of Roomie or Lil Pitchy music too! Haha!π€£πππππ
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:36:09 +0000 UTCawe, that's so sweet Steph! I'll go looks at it! But would've wished you'd told me sooner or let me know u were doing an fan project, I would've loved to participate in it.ππ€£π
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:33:07 +0000 UTCIt's normal for me.... I use music to work through my emotions all the time. I always have music on. I'm uncomfortable with silence. It's pretty easy to tell how I'm feeling just by what play list I'm playing at the time πππ
x0_Kristin_0x
2023-03-03 06:33:05 +0000 UTCI made you a fan made project. Itβs on Twitter and Instagram if youβre interested. Poor Lil Pitchy had a sleeping problem and I tried to help him lol
Stephanie Bruso
2023-03-03 06:31:32 +0000 UTCWhy can't I get Overexposed, Early Days & Whatcha Doin and now this 33 seconds song out of my head???!! Oh yeah, I know, coz it's soo freaking damn good hearing that s*** that I just keeping on replay the songs!!ππππ€£ππ€£ Joel I blame u for making me repeat your music haha! What are you doing to me!!πππ€£ππ€£π @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:31:29 +0000 UTCYeah, same here I missed it too, haha, didn't even know he went live. Oh well maybe next time my dum dum phone would give me those notifications lol surprised it didn't even show up even tho I do have the Twitch notifications on.
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:29:21 +0000 UTCWhy is it that I can really relate to these songs you're putting out, whether it's demo or full length versions, still I can really picture the storyline , can relate to the lyrics alot and it also messes with my emotions as like as I'm the one who wrote the song lol Isn't that a strange "feeling" to have or is that normal to have that feeling? (Bc I'm still trying to learn on music theory, etc.) Tho I'm getting better at it , so I must be calling myself an "music nerd" by now, plus thanks to you for 90% of those music knowledge that I've learned over the years of watching/ listening to your videos & music. @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:27:59 +0000 UTCI missed the stream so this is my first time hearing it.... Its beautiful
x0_Kristin_0x
2023-03-03 06:24:35 +0000 UTCWhy does it seem like now when you post things in here it's when I'm trying to get to sleep coz for me it's 11:20 pm (MST , AZ time) Do u know I have work in the morning? I have to be up by 4 am ish, and I don't get my ride to work until around the 7am hour. Lolπ€£π€£π€£π€£πππ So, if my workers are asking me why I'm soo tired or sleepy looking, I'll say it's on your fault Joel haha JK JK!! Haha, U know I love ya Joel!π€£π€£π€£πππ€£ @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:23:28 +0000 UTCEven tho you just put this 33 sec. Song clip out, I'm hooked on it now haha thx Joel haha! Also now I'll give some of my peeps at work a mini hearing at this amazing clip! Btws, even my friends at my work are loving them songs (even tho they know that they're only just demos or something for now!) But yeah!! I think I made more Roomie fans for ya haha! And that's only just from my work place!π€£π @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:19:43 +0000 UTCBeautiful melody and lyrics, love your voice. Feels relatable- love it!
Shiny
2023-03-03 06:17:48 +0000 UTCHmmmm been wondering why for some time now that whenever you post or upload anything like on here Patreon, etc. I get the notifications early or on time or a bit ahead like few Mins after it's been posted/uploaded, etc. Tho, bc I think of those different time zones, whenever you post things on here i get notifications quicker than other platforms you post/upload on. & also the fact that you're like an hour behind my time lol my time is AZ (MST) so for me it's 11:14 PM (MST) , for you it's 10:14 PM (PST) Funny how I tend to be awake for your "good timing" on posting things on here when I'm on or awake! Haha!π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:15:23 +0000 UTCIt was really fun watching the process thank you.
Lianne Conroy
2023-03-03 06:14:28 +0000 UTCI loved seeing you stream today! ILY π! & watching you make songs is exciting and this one is already so good, hope you finish it!
xtina π€
2023-03-03 06:13:41 +0000 UTCOmg, Early Days is constantly in my head these days!
Hayley
2023-03-03 06:11:01 +0000 UTCYayyy! Hope so, even my friends at my work are loving them songs (even tho they know that they're only just demos or something for now but yeah!! I think I made more Roomie fans for ya haha! And that's only just from my work place!π€£π
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:09:41 +0000 UTCI love the snow lyrics because it recently snow where I live. I can relate to this. Iβve been going through a hard time and I donβt like who I become either.
Stephanie Bruso
2023-03-03 06:09:21 +0000 UTCI love the beginning, takes me back to ca 2010 when Songs like 'fireflies' came out, it's so smooth and calm while also sporting some clean, modern melodies. I like ππ₯°π
Nataliekey
2023-03-03 06:07:58 +0000 UTCYeah this will be good, like it a lot so far π Unfortunately too relatable as well.
JustSomeJK
2023-03-03 06:07:53 +0000 UTCAhhhh, why is this so short???!! I needs it to be longer than 33 seconds!! I think this is the shortest song I've heard from you lolππ€£π€£ππππ @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:07:36 +0000 UTChaha I wanna finish as many as possible! Hopefully in videos
Joel Berghult
2023-03-03 06:07:28 +0000 UTCAmazing job as always Joel!!πππππππ absolutely loving it!!! But awee kinda wished it wasn't 33 seconds lol haha! I needs more of this! Also is your other demo song "Whatcha Doin" " Overexposed" is those going to be released anytime soon like on Spotify, YT , etc. Or just only be demos on here? Loving those two aswell and also "Early Days" idk which ones I love mode haha each day it's like I have to pick a new "top fave" haha! Can't get enough of these songs!!ππππππΆπΌπΉππ @Roomie
CK DeP
2023-03-03 06:06:29 +0000 UTCThis fits your voice so well!! Canβt wait to see where you take it! Move over John Mayer π ππ»ππ»
Aubrey Danielle
2023-03-03 06:06:28 +0000 UTCWhy does it feel so relatable? It's very soothing tho! Thanks for sharing it π
Magdalena Slodczyk
2023-03-03 06:05:57 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean ??? Vikki and I use it constantly lmao
Mari
2023-03-03 06:05:50 +0000 UTCAhh, I missed the stream π But this is beautiful x
Hayley
2023-03-03 06:05:26 +0000 UTC??
Joel Berghult
2023-03-03 06:05:10 +0000 UTCNow you're using ye? We've rubbed off on you πΉ
Mari
2023-03-03 06:03:36 +0000 UTCOoooooh, I can't wait to see/hear where this goes. π
Kat
2023-03-03 06:03:34 +0000 UTCthanks!
Joel Berghult
2023-03-03 06:03:20 +0000 UTCfixed!
Joel Berghult
2023-03-03 06:03:17 +0000 UTCOr = not
Airyckah Lane
2023-03-03 06:03:15 +0000 UTCYour voice sounds so smooth! Love it!
Ave Castruita
2023-03-03 06:02:59 +0000 UTCMarch.. or February π
Airyckah Lane
2023-03-03 06:02:43 +0000 UTC
