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EXTENDED FEEDBACK: Writing The Coolest Song Ever

Just like in the last songwriting video we couldn't keep all the feedback we had for each other in the main video. We hope you guys enjoy the extended deeper dive :)

EXTENDED FEEDBACK: Writing The Coolest Song Ever

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Do we only get a poll if Joel loses? 🤔 cool cool cool Enjoying these extended cuts with a greater level of detail in the critiques.

MediocreAtBest

This series is fantastic. I know it’s probably super stressful to create, but the results are incredible. Love love love Jonas’s song! Kinda funny how Joel thinks his accent is getting in the way of a decent rap but I personally think it’s unique pronunciation, which is COOL. I’m relatively sure August could produce any BS into something that vibes. Super way to showcase everyone’s talents.

AnovaSig

So fascinating to see the extended clips like this. This kind of creative collaboration reminds me of the creating writing groups I was in when I was younger. I would imagine this really helps stretch you in directions you wouldn’t normally and think of things from different perspectives. Thanks for sharing these with us! Side note: did you just say “script kitty”?

Shannon Kraushaar

This was really entertaining to watch! Love the little bits of vlogging throughout too. Well done guys 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Aubrey Danielle

This was amazing, the 3 of you are so talented. Love listening to you go in depth as well. I feel cooler already 😎

Becky Lorion

I can really see how much effort is going into these new videos from everyone involved, and it’s so fantastic!! Also, my cool factor went up 1000% watching all this new Patreon content. 😎

loonylovesgood

It’s just crazy how freaking talented you guys are. Those songs are awesome! (:

Franzi R

Awesome!! Joel nailed the "like a boss" style song for sure! I think this was really interesting, 3 completely different takes on "cool" songs and not 1 was bad at all. I love that Jiva let his boss win with a "I'm gutted I really wanted to give it to August!" comment and poor Jonas is like "eeeckhmmm, what about me!" Diss tracks next please, I want you all to diss a video game you dislike!

Clair (Teampanda)

Thank you!!!

Airyckah Lane

They are posted now :)

Joel Berghult

These Patreon deep dives into the songs are amazing. I love to hear more about your critiques and what goes into the music. More please.

Cas

Really got sucked into this one. Maybe it's just the "super-not-cool nerd" part of me, but I love listening to y'all talk about all of the elements just as much as listening to the song itself 🤷‍♀️. Other people: That song is awesome. *quickly runs to loop it* Me: PLEASE SAY SOME MORE NERDY THINGS!!! 🤓

Dannielle O'Neill

* Epic & Cool Noises * 🐺 🐾

PhantomFidget

Thank you for these! Do you plan on posting the song stand-alone on the clips channel like you did with the other challenge video?

Airyckah Lane

This was fun to watch!

AttacKat

Thanks thanks thanks a lot!! This is the best way to start the weekend 🤩🤩🤩

Sofía Reyes

I love it how your videos are scheduled, tho I still miss the daily videos but whateves the bestest for you I'm all for it! :) Also love it when you bring along Jonas & August or Jiva, Rikard, Chance in these types of videos.💕👏👍

CK DeP

I really do enjoying these deeper type videos! Yayy for being an Roomanian Patreon! :)

CK DeP

Yayyy, thanks for this Joel! Happy Friday!!😀👍💕👏

CK DeP


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