Song Demo: Lemme Tell U v2
Added 2022-04-21 17:15:32 +0000 UTCHey Patron gang,
Made this demo a while back during my peak of mumbling lyrics lol - really liked the melody and vibe but could never figure out lyrics that worked, so it never became anything. Alex even did some preliminary production on it. Also gonna post my original demo I made for it. right after this, so you can hear what it sounded like when I recorded it.
Comments
The lyrics aren't that bad....such a perfectionist. The vibe is good, the melody, and the tune all so pleasing to the ear. Sticks in the mind a little after it's done in a good way. Wonderful little ditty✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂
Gayle
2024-07-12 13:14:48 +0000 UTCThis one is much better. Sometimes the synth is too loud at the beginning. But loved it.
Florencia Fazzini
2022-05-11 01:51:09 +0000 UTCWell, i'm late on this demo, but dang, every frickin time you collab with Alex, i'm in love with the result. He brought dat nostalgic vibe, that fit perfectly with your melody. When I heard the ragga beat , i was like "ok, not my usual jam, but i do agree with him, it works"...but then hearing this one, it's just perfect (to my taste ^^). I also highly like this range of your voice, feels chill for you, and very confy to listen. And for the lyrics, as a french person, i really don't listen to what it means, i just like how it sounds. Anyway, might be a demo, but I'll loop it at work, cause to me it works as is :) ps: le moment at 2'20, can't not sing on it
Pouet
2022-05-01 19:08:00 +0000 UTCOfficially already have this stuck in my head. My brain wants the rest. Lol
Dannielle O'Neill
2022-04-24 18:06:33 +0000 UTCThe other one you posted I like the chorus beat. I like the sound of the verse having room to bring and then maybe letting it build throughout the verse to make it more interesting and then breaking it up with that beat in the chorus sounds amazing.
Lisa Jasperson
2022-04-24 01:27:15 +0000 UTCI definitely approve of this song. It has radio vibes 100% this one and the one you’re currently working on
Lisa Jasperson
2022-04-24 01:24:17 +0000 UTC❤️ distortion! The only thing that irks me is the long vowel on ‘clearly’.
AnovaSig
2022-04-23 13:21:35 +0000 UTCThis needs to be released on Spotify xx
Rosann Taylor
2022-04-22 12:24:45 +0000 UTCLove this 🤩 x
Rosann Taylor
2022-04-22 12:23:42 +0000 UTCI like them both... Just personal preference wise I like the vibe of this version better, but I do get more of an "excited and in love" vibe from the beat on the first one, which makes more thematic sense, obviously.
Sarah Faire
2022-04-22 04:56:57 +0000 UTCI’m very surprised that I honestly really liked this one. That slower softer “cheesier” (if I can say so) beat made me feel a lot more than the other one 🤷🏻♀️ And it’s one of the first “criteria” of a good song for me (to feel the song or relate to it). Anyway thank you for sharing, I appreciate that 😊
Helga 🦊
2022-04-22 03:42:30 +0000 UTCI like this version better… unpopular opinion i guess
Adina
2022-04-22 02:32:26 +0000 UTCJoel, I listened to this on my way home from work. I said to myself “this song is so beautiful, I really hope that he finishes it because I really want to put it on replay!!” Not even gonna lie!! “Lemme Tell U” is honestly, really nice and satisfying and beautiful to listen to!! Please finish and release this one, Joel 🙏🏻🙏🏻 I also love the way you sang “soo gurl”, as opposed to “ so girl”…your accent is another part of what makes this song so beautiful to me. No, I’m not just simping, I’m being honest. Very lovely, please finish and release it!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Melissa Rogers
2022-04-22 02:26:00 +0000 UTCI like this version better, I like the auto tune voice thing too, makes it fun. Ahhh! You have so many good things in the works and bummed that some wont be released lol. Looking forward to the finished new songs!!!
xtina 🖤
2022-04-21 22:16:57 +0000 UTCOoh I think this one kinda slaps. The other version didn't really speak to me. But I'm also happy if you're moving away from the mumble style lol, I really love your open and clear sound 📣
Christa
2022-04-21 22:06:41 +0000 UTCThis gives me aaaallll the chill summer vibes .. Love it! It immediately drags me into another world if that makes sense lol
Cheekii
2022-04-21 20:39:24 +0000 UTCLove, love, love this so much!! 🔥🔥
Becky Lorion
2022-04-21 19:55:44 +0000 UTCNo you should finish it! I'm interested to hear a final cut. I'll be nice, I promise! 🤞
Sugary Magnolia
2022-04-21 19:48:50 +0000 UTCLol you're good! Makes sense! I don't think I'll finish it
Joel Berghult
2022-04-21 19:21:27 +0000 UTCI think I do too actually! If I were to finish it I might go to the dancehall beat vibe
Joel Berghult
2022-04-21 19:21:15 +0000 UTCThanks! I think it's unlikely this will be finished, I really like the verse tho :D
Joel Berghult
2022-04-21 19:20:35 +0000 UTC* Conductor Tell U Noises * 🐾
PhantomFidget
2022-04-21 18:18:05 +0000 UTCI like this one the best, I unexpectedly vibed... good job!!
Ave Castruita
2022-04-21 17:59:08 +0000 UTCI really like this version, even if the first is good though. This beat speaks more to me.
Magalie Leplus
2022-04-21 17:47:51 +0000 UTCI like this version too, although it's slower, I think I prefer the original a little more 😅. But both versions are great, the original can be the remix 😛
Phoebe Grint
2022-04-21 17:45:00 +0000 UTCIt has a really nice vibe, I like it. The beat is great too
Veronika Troll
2022-04-21 17:40:54 +0000 UTCI like the faster beat too! 🤔🎶
Aubrey Danielle
2022-04-21 17:35:24 +0000 UTCI do like the melodies too but agree it's a little plodding at times (sorry if that sounds mean!) Also... why the random synthesized vocals? They don't make much sense here. I'm not a total synth hater - for example in "Worth It" those parts sound very relevant and organic rather than just throwing it in because you can. I always hate critiquing because I am in no way a professional and I know how much hard work goes into music creation/ production. So my feedback comes solely from an audience view and what I like/ don't like subjectively.
Sugary Magnolia
2022-04-21 17:32:32 +0000 UTCProduction is fire 🔥 The Vibes Are Immaculate
AttacKat
2022-04-21 17:28:33 +0000 UTCI think I prefer the faster beat on V1? Idk what it does 🤷♀️ but I like the vibe better... I was sitting here trying hard to find the difference the 1st time thru when they were both 1:20, confused, then more confused when they were both 2:53 and playing at the same time 😅 The Patreon app does some weird caching for me so I thought it was that, but thanks for the note on the fix lol.
MediocreAtBest
2022-04-21 17:28:15 +0000 UTCThe song is a little slow. Slow tempo songs are not my favorite though. Whoever you wrote the song for is so lucky.
Stephanie Bruso
2022-04-21 17:27:09 +0000 UTCThose melodies 👌❤️
Calize
2022-04-21 17:27:02 +0000 UTCOh I thought I was being dumb and couldn't tell the difference 😂
Juniper loo
2022-04-21 17:26:07 +0000 UTCI was getting dancehall vibes too!
Jessistache_73
2022-04-21 17:24:46 +0000 UTCMore content?? 😱 Nice vibe on this one.
loonylovesgood
2022-04-21 17:23:36 +0000 UTCWeird fun fact: It's raining rn and for some reason the vibe fit. (I like rain btw. Lol) idek what this means. Lol 🤷♀️ Mood music.
Dannielle O'Neill
2022-04-21 17:23:35 +0000 UTCI really love this track so far! I really enjoyed that one ad-lib (if that's the right term) that echoed and faded out. Such a vibe
Jessistache_73
2022-04-21 17:21:01 +0000 UTCOhhh this is good… I like the way it’s forming
Airyckah Lane
2022-04-21 17:20:06 +0000 UTCIt's a bop! Could feel holiday dancefloor vibes.
Jenni Bonifacio
2022-04-21 17:19:48 +0000 UTCHehehehe 🔥🍾🌟
Joel Berghult
2022-04-21 17:19:27 +0000 UTCSorry I acceidentally posted the same thing twice I think, this one has the one with Alex' prod now!
Joel Berghult
2022-04-21 17:18:16 +0000 UTCSo much content today, my little Patreon heart is happy 😆🙋🏻♀️🎶
Aubrey Danielle
2022-04-21 17:17:32 +0000 UTC
