Song Demo: Bit By Bit (Explicit)
Added 2022-01-31 21:32:07 +0000 UTCA melody/lyric idea I got in the shower the other day and had to record lol. Let me know if you think it's worth continuing!
Comments
Oh my… I like it a lot 👍
Barbara Čičak
2022-02-04 21:31:31 +0000 UTCWould love to hear more of this. Something that I've noticed is that your voice often sounds quite "in the back" or echoy. Which I don't think it needs to.
Maria
2022-02-03 17:13:30 +0000 UTC* Bit By Bit Conductor Noises * 🐾
PhantomFidget
2022-02-02 06:00:24 +0000 UTCI'M IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!
Mordecai Russell
2022-02-02 03:59:07 +0000 UTCI feel conflicted because I selfishly want you to finish it. I’m loving the edgier lyrics and the synth vibes, but I don’t know what sells. I feel like I have a weird ear (or at least an unusual one), so personally? Yes, plz to be finishing. Mainstream? This might be a hard sell.
Shannon Kraushaar
2022-02-01 12:15:34 +0000 UTCIt’s so catchy! I’m already walking around home singing “Bit by bit”
Jolanta Glas
2022-02-01 07:51:32 +0000 UTCThis is so good!
Brandt
2022-02-01 06:57:55 +0000 UTCMaybe he'd listen to it, while bathing 🛀 😅
Magdalena Slodczyk
2022-02-01 06:33:37 +0000 UTCOh man, I love when you try new things! It sounds so fun, I wanna hear more so I could vibe to the fullest 🔥 I think that sometimes the best creative ideas come to us, when we're doing the most basic things (or just not related) and that's awesome. Like the other day I had a dream with some weird dangerous creature, that I had to sketch quickly right after I woke up, so I don't forget how it looked and could make a proper concept art later 😅 I really hope you're gonna finish it! 💙
Magdalena Slodczyk
2022-02-01 06:27:46 +0000 UTCHope we’ve convinced you to continue! Possibly my Favourite so far! Your Vocals. Those lyrics. 😉
Kenze
2022-02-01 05:24:28 +0000 UTCIt sounds awesome, please continue :) (Btw, the upload had perfect timing and gave me a great start into my birthday despite having to work, so thanks 😄)
Franzi R
2022-02-01 04:13:41 +0000 UTCI loved it... One thing the high soft part not so much...
BellatrixBerghult
2022-02-01 02:19:14 +0000 UTCThis sounds like something I’d workout to. Catchy music; lyrics that make me want to run faster.
Tonya Davis
2022-02-01 01:47:42 +0000 UTCIf I said it summed up my day would that be too dark?
Dorie
2022-02-01 01:28:43 +0000 UTCI have a vivid imagination and telling me you created this 28 second masterpiece in the shower 🚿 makes me think you were actually stood in your birthday suit with a whiteboard and marker, bopping, writing chord progressions and lyrics instead of actual showering 😂 It's up beat, catchy and I can see this becoming a single.
Clair (Teampanda)
2022-02-01 00:56:00 +0000 UTCGroove* autocorrect is such a hater 🙃
Chauchie Cortez
2022-02-01 00:53:03 +0000 UTCMOST DEF!!! I like the up-tempo grove!
Chauchie Cortez
2022-02-01 00:52:37 +0000 UTCWow, I really enjoyed this
Tasha Wright
2022-02-01 00:39:12 +0000 UTCOhhh. I love this! Very catchy~
Lian Lopez
2022-02-01 00:37:58 +0000 UTCContinue on, bro! I will never not be sucked in by your upbeat, funky self paired with those sad lyrics...I find it super relatable...
Whit-EbullientShrub
2022-01-31 23:55:46 +0000 UTCUm yes, I'm super vibing with this
Mari
2022-01-31 23:47:50 +0000 UTCThe shower is a magical, musical place lol. I love it! ❤
Leslie Noel
2022-01-31 23:38:07 +0000 UTCYes, yes, yes, finish it please, I really liked the rhythm and your voice 🤌🏻 uff. I love it!!! Now I have one question, how can I get this out of my head?
Phoebe Grint
2022-01-31 23:24:14 +0000 UTCLove the beat! Keep on going! 🔥
Pearl Paisley
2022-01-31 23:03:03 +0000 UTCSounds really catchy love all the transitions into falsetto. Go for it!
smth positive_
2022-01-31 22:52:00 +0000 UTCI really want to listen to the final version of this song - this song is definitely worth continuing. I'm not sure how it makes me feel though, the lyrics are a bit dark and depressing - but then again a lot of great songs have dark and depressing lyrics, and a lot of people can relate to that kind of lyrics at one point in their life or another. I'm just hoping those lyrics aren't reflecting your current state of mind, but if it is I hope you have someone you trust to help you through rough times.
Sigga
2022-01-31 22:45:26 +0000 UTCDefinitely like it! Had my head bopping to it and the lyrics are good too. You should keep going!
Courtney Walker
2022-01-31 22:39:05 +0000 UTCFavorite song demo song so far I listened to your song demo, you promised me you would listen to mine?
Stephanie Bruso
2022-01-31 22:31:00 +0000 UTCI'm here for this. Would love to hear the rest of it!
Kat
2022-01-31 22:30:18 +0000 UTCLove hearing your music, you are so talented x
Rosann Taylor
2022-01-31 22:27:34 +0000 UTCOH this is catchy 👍👍👍👍
thewelshwitch
2022-01-31 22:19:27 +0000 UTCYou are not a weirdo, well if you are than you are not the only one. I love upbeat songs with dark/sad lyrics. I usually have more than just one emotion and these songs feel like they are reflecting it so well. Also I the song is amazing. Ou shower, the magical land of inspiration. 😂
Arinion
2022-01-31 22:18:34 +0000 UTCNow I need the list of those songs 🤣
Helga 🦊
2022-01-31 22:12:41 +0000 UTCMuch better than the songs I sing in the shower, that’s for sure.
loonylovesgood
2022-01-31 22:06:15 +0000 UTCI like it! I would continue with it if you want to
Kayla
2022-01-31 22:04:37 +0000 UTCLove it, definitely worth continuing! I really like how you’re able to take inspiration from a not so great situation but manage to give it vibe and make it edgy. Gotta love a good dose of shower inspiration, right?!
Becky Lorion
2022-01-31 22:03:42 +0000 UTCThank you for sharing… Love the “I’m sad af but let’s dance anyway” type vibe, definitely a mood!! Catchy and doesn’t sound generic (for lack of a better word) It’s cool, I agree with everyone, this is one to finish.
Suzanne Collins
2022-01-31 22:00:50 +0000 UTCWow I REALLY like it! I think it's definitely worth continuing :)
Veronika Troll
2022-01-31 21:58:52 +0000 UTCI feel like this song really fits and suits your voice , vocals! I mean all of your music is amazing, but honestly this one's takes it! Kinda deep and dark vibes but can relate to it and see the visual for the mood for the song and your voice. Very catchy! I think this side of you and showing us your own thoughts or own way of sharing these things to us really shows us how far you've came through and you're more comfortable with us sharing these stories, music , etc. Haha, nice! Those shower thoughts/ showerspirations do the trick don't it! Crazy how it works out that way haha , tho for me it's complicated coz I would get some much things pilled on me but also some ideas for songs I write down after my shower , it usually helps me alot more for some reason. I have no idea how or why that does help but it really does , so I can really get it lol Idk if you see this or will see or read this but if ya do see or read this , let me know what you think / share me your opinion, thoughts on abouts my comment. Much appreciated support from Arizona Joel! Stay safe and stay Pitchy and sipping on some Apple juices!💕👍🤗👏🙌🎵🎶🍾🧃
CK DeP
2022-01-31 21:58:19 +0000 UTCMaybe I’ll sound as a weirdo but I like that kinda dark/sad lyrics that I’ve heard 👀
Helga 🦊
2022-01-31 21:53:16 +0000 UTCWow! That was dark but I feel like is relatable to many. My favorite bit is the melody (I think that's the term) of "little by little". I could see that in a video game or show. I'd like to see where you take it. Thanks for sharing your shower thoughts!
Jessistache_73
2022-01-31 21:50:06 +0000 UTCLove this. Your voice sounds amazing (I actually think this is my favourite)
Christina Lynn Jones
2022-01-31 21:47:53 +0000 UTCIs the last line “I wish I hadn’t survived”? If so that is DARK. It’s great and the singing sounds so good and like, visceral.
emy
2022-01-31 21:45:14 +0000 UTCNGL my first thought reading the description was "But not SINGING in the shower." 🤣 ETA: Reference to the video! Lmao Ok...then I listened. Totally relatable, but there's a disconnect between the lyric and your tone. (NOT saying you don't sound great. Opposite, really.) Idk if that's intentional or I'm just "reading" it wrong 🤷♀️. Take that for what it's worth, but it's definitely worth continue to see where it goes.
Dannielle O'Neill
2022-01-31 21:44:49 +0000 UTCit's catchy! interested where it's going. continue pls
Jean
2022-01-31 21:43:30 +0000 UTCOoo yes really like this! Your voice sounds amazing in this 😍
Rhiannon
2022-01-31 21:43:29 +0000 UTCuse the showerspiration and continue! Cool vibe
Juniper loo
2022-01-31 21:42:29 +0000 UTCI like it, I got a Bruno Mars type vibe to it. Definitely want to hear more, in fact I was a little disappointed when the clip ended...I was really digging it!
Elaine Williams
2022-01-31 21:42:20 +0000 UTCIt’s very catchy! “Bit by bit, little by little, I’m f*cking losing my mind” because of you spoiling us with this short umm demos (?) that I like so much! <3 And it’s definitely worth continuing imho!
Helga 🦊
2022-01-31 21:41:37 +0000 UTCAlso, I always wonder if these are auto-tuned 😄 And if you just have a collection of these recorded ideas - where do they go? Is there a DNF file?
Sugary Magnolia
2022-01-31 21:38:48 +0000 UTC1) Love the music part, but... 2) The voice needs something extra. It needs to be somewhat robotic for something like this. Kinda like Nicki Minaj's voice in David Guetta's "Turn Me On" where it had more of a square-synth to it for most of the song, and at some point she does a rap with some triplets giving it more of a broken robot thing. For me, the voice is too clean for an almost-electronic song called "bit by bit." (I know. I should have kept it to my 2 cents worth and yet I'm giving more of a dollar's worth here... My bad...) (Don't hate me. It's the caffeine.)
uDOronRON Ltd.
2022-01-31 21:37:20 +0000 UTCSuper vibe!
Cas
2022-01-31 21:37:12 +0000 UTCI’d love to hear his continued! Definitely think it’s worth it.
Alle Engdahl
2022-01-31 21:36:50 +0000 UTCYeah, I want to see where you can take this. It's catchy for sure! Is there a storyline you're thinking lyrically or just a cool sound?
Sugary Magnolia
2022-01-31 21:36:33 +0000 UTCyeah... this is catchy and relatable
Airyckah Lane
2022-01-31 21:36:31 +0000 UTCThe lyrics are a bit too sad for me…
Adina
2022-01-31 21:36:12 +0000 UTCmust continue,good song to play on the way to work.
Erin Kinraid
2022-01-31 21:36:08 +0000 UTCI'm vibing 💃
MediocreAtBest
2022-01-31 21:36:04 +0000 UTCAbsolutely worth to continue it.👌 I love it. 😊
Kinga Konyecsik
2022-01-31 21:35:42 +0000 UTCNice.... Ngl, you peaked my interest at (explicit)... Lmao
x0_Kristin_0x
2022-01-31 21:34:35 +0000 UTCDefinitely worth continuing. Great vibes!
AttacKat
2022-01-31 21:34:21 +0000 UTCSounds like a bop; definitely finish it! 💜💜
Miranda Kelly
2022-01-31 21:34:12 +0000 UTCSounds great!! Unexpected vibing on my side... Please, continue.
Ave Castruita
2022-01-31 21:33:43 +0000 UTCLove it 😊
Misty Mitchell
2022-01-31 21:33:24 +0000 UTCLove the funky beat and falsetto!
spinach
2022-01-31 21:33:16 +0000 UTCLoving the 80's influence 👌
Jenni Bonifacio
2022-01-31 21:33:06 +0000 UTCAmazing amazing amazing, thank you Joel
CK DeP
2022-01-31 21:32:52 +0000 UTC
