02_138 (revised for clarity)
Added 2022-09-18 07:08:32 +0000 UTCUPDATE: I fixed panels 2 and 3 because the old version (listed 2nd) was super confusing. Thank you for your feedback!
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please let me know if those two middle panels on the top row are unclear. It's not something I have a whole lot of experience in drawing, and if it's confusing it would be super helpful to know ahead of time so I can try to fix it before it gets published properly.
Comments
Those are much clearer panels.
Kontakr
2022-09-30 13:48:17 +0000 UTCThat 'hero shot' in panel 6 is badass. Edit: I just remembered that Locke was threatening to cut off Trish's hair, last page, so I love her full She-Ra hair in this panel even more.
Spike
2022-09-30 09:17:14 +0000 UTC
