Pink among Blood Red Roses: Chapter 16- Bell Hill
Added 2023-10-24 11:41:54 +0000 UTCIt's funny how my best chapter yet is followed by my worst lol
I apologize for anything that looks or reads weirdly. I tried my best, but I was feeling very disheartened
Comments
Thank You so much!!! I am very glad you enjoyed it! and also that you got the Gaga ref, it was made with you in mind heh. My biggest influence for Dolos would be Chucky lmaooo, and also Funny Valentine. I'll do my best next chapter!
Fabian Vintila
2023-10-24 19:56:39 +0000 UTCFinally got time to give this a read, I really enjoyed it!! I like how the whole thing almost felt like a documentary, and how the scenes where we were hearing the story from Dolos’ mouth were illustrated in a more childish way. I’ve only seen the first 20 episodes of the anime Monster, but he really gives off the same vibe as Johan!! Speaking of Monster, I love the lady gaga reference at the end hahah Btw, I’m sorry you had a rough time while working on this. If it makes you feel better, it honestly didn’t really affect my enjoyment of this story anyway, it was so intriguing to have such a close look at Dolos’ life, I really liked it & I’m looking forward to what’s next :D
Moonbow
2023-10-24 18:50:05 +0000 UTCOh, I'm glad the twist worked lol. And yeah, Dolos is a little androgynous. It helped him a lot when trying to look innocent. I'm also glad you liked this chapter!
Fabian Vintila
2023-10-24 16:04:15 +0000 UTCYou might have not fully realized what your original vision was but I really liked this chapter, I think it gave a very good look into who Dolos is and I was genuinely surprised by the plot twist lololol. Btw is Dolos meant to be slightly Androgynous?
Jabouly Marouly
2023-10-24 15:05:15 +0000 UTC
