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Carousel Book Eight, Chapter 41

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Does anyone else really want the hatching house story? Because I really want the hatching house story. That house on haunted hill set up sound great

Ignantsage

I mean, as always it depends on the level of the story, but nobody is horribly under levelled, Ramona I think would be the lowest. There's a final girl, a wallflower with comic relief, a hysteric and a comedian. It likely will hinge heavily on Kelsey to pull through. I think Isaac has a few combat tropes, but for the most part the party seems to be built to die dramatically and in Bobby's case to make it so that they can't leave the house when they realise the money's not worth it...

Nicholas

We met up with Cassie on the shore across the cover. -> across the cove?

Sam Maloney

The gently lowered until their ends were barely in the water. -> They gently lowered would probably read better.

Sam Maloney

How well built is the other parry? Hopefully enough to survive.

Kain01able

Atleast they are together and the storyline doesnt seem very oit of their league. Hopefully they all can get a place to stay and can get a safe place to rest at

Gorane

Thankfully they are all together.

Stephen McLaughlin

Nicely foreboding house mystery. Hopefully their group had time to reshuffle their tropes before activating its Omen rather than surfacing into its activation zone blindly.

Warren (Stephen) Rose

No Michael. I guess he never fell into the water. Most likely him who was the sniper, so he must have killed the zoms.

Slightly Morbid

Well nice to know Ramona and co are still alive. Will we see their point of view? Or just Riley’s group?

jacob joseph


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