Update
Added 2025-11-22 03:38:13 +0000 UTCAlright. You will receive the rest of your chapters this weekend. I will be getting back to the Tue-Fri schedule ASAP because this unpredictable one is a bit hectic, I'm sure.
In the meantime, I am working on getting book five ready for book form. If you could tell me your opinions on The Final Straw I, Itch, and Stray Dawn, I would much appreciate it as I start editing.
Comments
Itch and Stray Dawn were favorites by being the start of true improvisation by the party. Stray Dawn impressed me as well by making me interested in werewolf lore, and that's a big hurdle.
Alkahest
2025-11-24 13:43:08 +0000 UTCI probably late but i must discord on what people are saying about itch i found the pace of the story good i just think the accord the navy made with carousel too sundely on the story and should have being better explored/explained because you dont get the sentiment that the navy care for it crew if ryan dont explain in the narration. And maybe this cand aliviate the sensation to the people that dont like the pace putting more information the failed attempts than just they failed again.
Nathan Borges Goncalves
2025-11-23 23:22:05 +0000 UTC
