So here is what is happening
Added 2025-07-05 20:48:41 +0000 UTCI've decided to add more Interludes from Daphne's POV so that the readers won't have to juggle so many unanswered questions. I will also be editing down some of Riley's speculation, as it isn't needed as much when the readers know more than he does. The Patrons will have to read these all at once, but RR will get them sprinkled in where they fit.
Keep in mind that Daphne is the main character of Homibridal, so it does make some sense to see what she sees.
This might be a little backtracking for you all, but it will clarify things.
Comments
Him having his curiosity suppressed heavily by Daphne's tropes is something he would look back on with utter horror, no doubt.
Chronische
2025-07-09 15:47:23 +0000 UTCFor me the tension in the storyline isn't what the reader doesn't know, it's what we DO know that the players don't. I'm wondering if the players will be able to beat Daphne through her mind control tropes, so having the blackmailing plot/Daphne's actions more spelled out doesn't lower the stakes for me, since we already know she's the antagonist seeing her antagonising raises them for me if anything
Jones
2025-07-05 22:41:20 +0000 UTCI honestly think you should put her scenes at the end of the story if you include them at all. They explain too much. Everything has already been perfectly clear and understandable without including her point of view. If you also add these scenes before the big reveal then there's really no mystery left.
Nqvgz
2025-07-05 22:30:38 +0000 UTC
