Let It Rip Chapter 4
Added 2020-11-13 22:49:02 +0000 UTCChapter 4: Spin forward
The next ten months for Izuku were fast for Izuku. Everyday Izuku would wake up and go to school accompanied by a hero and afterwards escorted home, though most of the time taking a detour or a different path so the heroes could arrest any of the idiots that tried to arrest him. The worst part was avoiding the press, they hounded him constantly and quite a few of them were more persistent then he would like. After he got home he would hang out with his mother, upgrade some of his parts, or spare with All Might. All Might actually became a saving grace for Izuku as he was pretty much the only hero that would give him permission to use his beyblade.
On the weekend he was given permission to use training areas for practice, though unfortunately he would also have to deal with the police and their endless questions. Every since he had given them the information about his dad they have been working non stop to not only confirm the information, but also to follow them to see if they could find any leads. The only one he actually liked to talk to about all of this was Nezu, he felt a bit of a connection to Nezu, also he was the only one that actually was able to keep up with Izuku without too much explanation.
Though two incidents did happen over the months that did have some impact.
~o~
Izuku was waiting for Death Arms to get done talking to the police so that he could get home, when a reporter noticed him. “Izuku Midoriya, I’ve found celebrities easier than you. I’m-”
“Chitose Kizuki, I know.” said Izuku, finishing her intro. “You’ve been following me for awhile now.”
“That’s because your still one of the biggest stories around and everyone wants to know about you. The mysterious top, a vigilante that technically was never seen for nearly ten years. Not to mention your age, that alone could be a page turner.” explained the reporter. “But you don’t want to talk do you?”
Izuku then gave her a stare. “You're talking to me yet you know I’m not going to say anything, so that means you have something for me or you want to make some sort of exchange.”
Chitose smiled. “You are smart.” as she dug through her purse, pulling out a small letter. “An exchange for an exchange.” she held the letter out for Izuku. “Apparently I’ve been chasing you too long and my people are practically begging me to find a different story, because you aren’t talking and neither are the police, because of your agreement. So I was able to get an interview with the CEO of the Detnerat Corporation. Though his odd price was to give you that letter.”
Izuku looked at the envelope in his hand. “He asked you. A reporter to give me this letter.”
“Well he said if he sent one of his assistants they may scare you off and it gave me an excuse for one last chance to ask you some questions.” as she pulled her phone out and hit record. “So Izuku Midoriya can you at least tell me what's on your mind, or what you're going to do about that letter, anything?”
“Detnerat” as Izuku remembered where he had heard that name before. He thought for a moment. “I’m not going to read this.” Chitose kept a straight but inwardly she was screaming with fury and rage. “Yo Death Arms, we got to go somewhere.”
“Huh?” Death Arms was now getting tired with these surprises. “Okay and where do we need to go?” as he separated himself from the police.
“Need to meet with a CEO,” said Izuku as if he was simply going to the convenient store.
“Wait, What?”
“Hey could you call the guy up and tell him me and Death Arms are on our way.” he asked Chitose.
“Izuku.” as Death Arms got Izuku’s attention. “What the hell is going on? My orders are to make sure you get home.”
“Yeah well this is needed. Trust me.”
“Look kid, I hate to tell ya but no can do, I don’t even have my car right now.”
“Oh don’t worry about that, she’s driving us.” as he pointed at Chitose confusing everyone. “An exchange for an exchange. A drive to Detnerat and on the way you get an interview.”
Chitose stood there wide eyed for a moment before she brought her fingers to her mouth and made a loud whistle. Then in a flash her assistant appeared. “GET THE CAR GET THE CAR GET THE CAR.”
Death Arm saw this and groaned. “You know I’m really starting to regret taking this job.”
“Ah don’t say that,” said Izuku seemingly trying to reassure him. “The worst part has yet to come.” Soon Izuku found himself in the back of Chitose’s car having an on the go interview with Death Arms riding shotgun and Chitose’s assistant was driving. Izuku made sure she understood that he couldn’t answer some questions as it was classified with the police but he would try to answer as best he could. Chitose didn’t like that but she took anyway as she was now the first person to interview Izuku. During the drive they talked about his activities, the people he knows, and even some of the people he’s fought, she wasn’t able to get as much as she wanted, but it was a lot more than anyone else had gotten. Though their time came to an end when they arrived at a big corporate building. “So this Detnerat corp,” as he looked up at the building. “It’s big.”
“Yes it is,” said Chitose. “I’ve called ahead, Yotsubashi’s assistant will meet you and lead you right up to him.”
“Hey kid do you know this guy?” asked Death Arms as he remembered Izuku mentioning in the car ride he knew some powerful people.
“Nope, I’ve barely heard of him.” clarified Izuku.
“Do rich people ask to meet you often?”
“No, though when they do, it's usually a pain in the ass.” said Izuku, earning looks from the others. “Though when I don’t show up it's usually a lot worse.”
Chitose coughed getting his attention. “I see Yotsubashi’s assistant,” as she pointed to the man with a panda looking head. “This is where we part ways, if you have to do an interview anytime soon, call me.” as she gave him her card. Izuku and Death Arms watched as she and her assistant drove away.
“Lucky brat.” Death Arms said under his breath, though loud enough for Izuku to hear it.
“You want it?” as he held out the card.
“Come one let’s get this over with.” as he and Izuku followed the assistant up to the CEO’s office.
It didn’t take them long as the assistant was able to walk them right through security without any form of check or search. Soon the two found themselves in a big lavious office that screamed CEO, in the center of the room was a desk where a man, Rikiya Yotsubashi was sitting with a big grin on his face. “Welcome, Midoriya it is an honor to meet you.” as he got out of his desk to walk around and shake his hand. “I honestly wasn’t expecting you to show up let alone to meet me today.”
“Neither did I,” said Izuku honestly. “I hope you didn’t clear your schedule for me.”
“Oh don’t worry about that,” he said as he noticed the hero in the room, he knew he was coming but still didn’t like it. “Oh my apologies and you are?”
“Death Arms,” as they shook hands. “I’m the hero assigned to this kid for today.”
“Well I don’t mean to interfere with your work but if you would like to take a break my assistant here can show you where the break room is.”
Death Arms narrowed his eyes at the CEO. “I think i’ll stay.”
“Whoa there, I wasn’t trying to say I was going to do anything shady” said Re Destro ‘How do I get rid of this moron?’
“He can stay,” said Izuku, getting their attention. “He’ll make sure we stay on topic cause I do have a curfew I have to keep.”
“Of course,” said the CEO “Please both of you take a seat.”
As Izuku sat down he made sure to notice and analysis each and every detail of the
CEO’s actions. “So what is it that you wanted to meet about, you want information on the Hiwatari family and Biovolt, or how about the Zagart labs?”
The CEO froze for a moment, he looked at his assistant who was equally shocked. “Do you have info on them?”
“That’s usually the first thing I get asked.” said the boy which made the adults wonder what the hell was this kid's life. “But you did send a messenger so please tell us what's going on.”
“Well I will not deny this is somewhat business related. Me and few others did notice how you interacted with a few big name people, and with everything you’ve said so far it's clear I’m not the first exposure to the corporate world you’ve had. To be honest there’s much I would love to discuss with you, mainly about your future, not only with hero work but also about your place in our society.” said the CEO as he waited for Izuku’s reaction. “If you don’t mind me asking what do you think of our society?”
Death Arms raised an eyebrow at the question, but didn’t interrupt as he was also curious at what Izuku was going to say. Izuku said nothing as he took out his phone. “Do you mind if I get your contact information?”
This caught Rikiya off guard. “Of course, but may I ask why?”
“You're getting political,” this honestly confused the CEO. “Oh you don’t have to make that face, I can already tell the reason you don’t want Death Arms here is because while the conversation itself might not be bad, the topic might get you in some hot water. Even though our society says government and business are separate, they often rub elbows with each other. You either want to make a deal with yourself or for a friend and this letter was a long shot that actually worked. To be perfectly honest I’m not the high society type of person, but I can’t deny I’m most likely going to be involved in it for awhile. So I’m willing to play ball, just not right now, I can’t walk on these bridges right now but I also don’t want to burn them if that makes any sense.”
“Oh it makes perfect sense.” said Yotsubashi. “To be honest that works perfectly for me. I do admit I wasn’t fully prepared for your arrival.”
“It's alright,” said Izuku as he got up. “We can finish this another time, when I’m not being watched like somewort of A-list celebrity.”
“Of course,” said the CEO, happy by the turn of events, they quickly exchanged information before he watched Izuku and Death Arms leave the building. ‘Ether I’m really dealing with a kid or something else happened during that talk. I’m going to have to keep an eye on him, that's for sure.”
~o~
“Ooookay,” said Death Arms as he was driving Izuku home, he called his sidekick to bring him his car. “Mind telling me what the hell that was about? I may not be a salaryman but even I could tell that was not normal.”
“I wanted you there so I wouldn’t launch my bey into his face.” said Izuku with anger in his voice. “I went there today to confirm he was related to Destro, the former leader of the Meta Liberation Army.”
Death Arms was now alarmed. “Wait you mean the guy who was ahead of those fanatics that wanted to get rid of the laws!”
“Yep,” said Izuku as he pulled out his phone, ”Merci, analysis report.”
“Oui, I can confirm that the DNA taken from your data ring shows that it had a 50% percent match with Chikara Yotsubashi aka Destro.” said his french AI companion.
“What the hell is that thing and what is a data ring?”
“Merci, is my french AI. Found him when me and Ryuga were searching one of my dad’s old buildings. He recognized it as the old AI used in an experiment, but when they deemed the experiment a failure they just shut him down and left him, and he didn’t want to be left there and I couldn’t keep asking Dizzi as she and Kenny live in America. So I asked if he wanted to help me out and he said yes.”
“That gives me way more questions than answers.”
“Well to answer your other question, a few years back I was hunting a villain that had a quirk that could poison people, he went around and poisoned crowds of people without them knowing about it until it was too late, deep in his poison was his DNA, since I was still a kid they ignored me if I bumped into people, so with Merci’s help I made this ring, that not only monitors my vitals but also scans for others, it also doubles as a spare rip cord if i need one.” as it unraveled into a rip cord to use with his launcher.
“What the hells with the gadgets you James Bond now.”
“Please,” said Merci “Bond wishes he had moi.”
“We’ll when you get tossed into the dark criminal underworld at the age of 4 you learn quickly and take every advantage you can.”
Death Arms began to shake his head. “Okay what does that have to do with the CEO guy?”
“Destro and his meta liberation army for years tried to stop laws controlling quirks, even experiments or the production of equipment that would restrict or alter someone's quirk. Though being the hypocritical organization they were, they stole a lot of the research and tried making it their own, to help make them stronger. This research went missing when they all got arrested, well most of them got arrested. Some escaped arrest and that research wasn’t seen until my dad got his hands on it, and since my dad got his hands on it, I went looking for it and I think I just found it.”
Death Arms followed where Izuku was going. “You think the CEO was the guy who gave it to your father. Kid that just sounds insane. For one if that guy is related to Destro that doesn’t mean he is a criminal.”
“True, but then tell me why Detnerat has been buying out remote locations and been purchasing the remains of villain equipment under the table. I didn’t just start suspecting them today.”
“Also, Monsour Death Arms,” said Merci. “Why does a clothing company have security rivaling a government facility and a cyber network that is off the grid.”
“YOU HACKED THEM!” yelled Death Arms
“WATCH THE ROAD,” Izuku yelled back as Death Arms almost swerved into the other lane.
“Kid do you have any idea how many laws you’ve broken?”
“Merci.”
“Would you like that list numerically or alphabetically.” responded the AI
Death Arms didn’t know what to say, he wasn’t used to dealing with a kid like this. “This is ridiculous, you know I have to report this, right.”
“I’ve already told Nezu, and Merci just sent the data to the police.” said Izuku as he held his phone up for the hero to see. If Death Arms wasn’t currently driving he would have been losing it. “Let me guess you're wondering what the hell I’m doing.” Death Arms didn’t respond as he had given up. “My agreement also states that if I ever get into a situation that involves my history that I have permission to investigate, and even if they don’t allow me to continue past today, I have a few friends that can cover that.”
Death Arms raised an eyebrow. “Friends?”
“You might meet them someday.”
~o~
Turns out that day wasn’t too far away as the second incident happened. Though after the incident with Deternat Co, the police decided to undergo an investigation, though it wasn’t as big as Izuku wanted but he was able to have his friends to help especially after they helped a dozen or so more investigations.
Izuku was currently watching as MT Lady had some trouble with a biker gang, she had volunteered to be his escort but Izuku could tell she was trying to get more attention, though part of him knew she was trying her best. “Hey you might want to switch from being big and being small.”
MT Lady was ignoring this as she tried to continue to stomp on one of the bikers that had a quirk that allowed him to bounce physical attacks back at her. The stomb back fired as it sent her backwards off balance, lucky she was able to shrink back down to her normal size before causing collateral damage. “Don’t worry kid I got this I’ll protect you.”
Izuku really wanted to say something along the lines ‘Yeah sure you are.’ but he couldn't deny she nailed the reassuring smile. ‘If she actually tried she could be a good hero.’ so instead he gave her a thumbs up. “Okay keep up the good work, if you need any help to hesitate to ask.”
“You're the ones that’s going to need the help.” said one fo the bikers as a few bikers surrounded Izuku.
“Shit,” said MT Lady as she saw this. “Kid I-”
“Don’t say it,” said Kamui Woods as he and Death Arms showed up. “The heroes have arrived.”
“Time to start knocking heads.” yelled Death Arms as he began punching bikers.
“Hurry up and kill the kid.” yelled a biker to the ones surrounding Izuku.
Izuku held Tanku in his hand as he sighed. “Sorry buddy. Looks like we're doing this a different way.” He then jumped over a few of the bikers. “Hey numb skulls follow me.” as Izuku walked down an alley.
“AFTER HIM,” yelled one of the bikers as they disengaged the heroes and chased after Izuku. They chased Izuku through the allies until they found him sitting on top of a box in a dead end. “Gotcha now brat, your going to pay for smashing our rides and crashing our hideouts all across town.”
“You guys are morons.” said Izuku, not at all scared. “You have less intelligence than a rat.”
The bikers did not like that. “What did you say?”
“I found all your hideouts, do you know how I did that? I’ll give you a hint it's why I dragged you here.”
The bikers were confused by this and looked around seeing nothing in the alley. “What the fuck are you talking about boy?”
“I have friends,” said Izuku as the heroes arrived behind the bikers but stopped when they began hearing something all around them. “Friends that inform me what's going on all around town, they find criminals for me and I pay them back with food like cookies or candy.”
The bikers began to turn their heads scanning all around them as they could feel that they were now surrounded. “Wha...what’s happening?”
Izuku looked at Tanku in his hand. “You know I don’t know why but ever since I got Tanku I’ve just felt a connection with them. They’ve become good friends.”
The trash can lid was launched off of the can, causing the bikers to stare at it as a small fuzzy head popped out of the can. “A raccoon.” the bikers began to laugh. “I can’t believe we got scared of a small raccoon.” They continued laughing until they saw the raccoon point up. They followed the raccoon’s finger upward where they saw the fire escape, the rooftops and windows all filled with raccoons. “Ra...ra….raccoons.”
“Yep,” said Izuku as the raccoons swarmed the bikers engulfing them in a sea of black and gray as they scratched and clawed at the bikers. The heroes stood petrified by the sight of the horde of raccoons. “See I told you someday you’d meet my friends.”
All three heroes turned to Izuku with eyes as wide as dinner plates. “Kid, what the hell?” asked Death Arms
“These are my friends,” said Izuku. “Raccoons are everywhere, with their help I can keep track of any villain who is trying to get away or any civilian that's in need of help. Even if my eyes are good, I can’t keep track of everything alone, that’s where these guys come in.”
“You trained an army of raccoons,” said Kamui Woods. “Is this your quirk, how?”
Izuku tilted his head as he thought of a good response. “I didn’t really train any of them, they just listen to what I have to say or at least to what Tanku says.”
“UUuhhh hey are they going to be okay?” asked MT Lady
“Oh yeah they’ll be fine, you got this Sly?” a raccoon stood up on top of the pule and gave Izuku a thumbs up. “Yeah they’ll be fine.” Though one raccoon stepped out of the crowd with a phone under one of its arms. “Oh hey Otto, is something wrong?” The coon then showed the phone, on the screen was the map of the city with a flashing red dot on it. “We need to go, right now.” he yelled at the heroes with urgency in his voice.
The heroes snapped back to reality. “What’s wrong?’
“The Crawler’s in trouble.”
~o~
Koichi was not having the best day, what started out as a usual night just helping people find directions became a life or death match of cat and mouse as he saw an office explode in one of the business buildings. Koichi saw a man jump out and run along the rooftops with a briefcase and it seemed like this was a job for the crawler. He activated his quirk and gave chase and cornering the man inside a warehouse but before he could even get a good look at the man, he vanished. Now koichi was trapped in a warehouse with a guy shotting at him from above.
‘This guy is good,” as the Crawler dodged several bullets rolling and returning fire with his Shooty go blam. Though the shoots only went through the roof. ‘Where the hell is he, I can’t tell his location at all.’
“What's wrong?” came the man's voice. “Having trouble? Do you need your mommy?”
Koichi tried to follow the voice. ‘Where is he? How come I can’t find him?”
“So you're a vigilante huh?” said the voice. “HA that’s a riot. I thought you were some hero, looks like I don’t need to hold back then. I didn’t want the heroes getting wise to me, but now I can off you without worry.”
Koichi was now borderline freaking out. Then he heard a familiar sound, the rapid spinning of gears. “YOU’RE A BLADER.” as he limboed under the flying beyblade.
“Huh? You know my weapon. You must be friends with that damn boy.” said the man as he started getting angry. “Of course you are, but that will making killing you so much better.”
Koichi was putting every trick he had to dodge the bey as it bounced and jumped around the warehouse. This wasn’t the first time he had tangled with a bey but this was the first time he could clearly tell this bey was shooting to kill. ‘This is bad, I need to stop it. If only it would stop bouncing.’ Koichi kept his eye on the bey and waited for his chance. After several minutes it came, the bey charged at him straight while staying on the ground. “GOTCHA” as he put both hands on the ground.
The bey then began to grind to a halt before digging straight into the ground. “WHAT?”
“You ain’t the first blader I’ve fought,” exclaimed Koichi. “Lucky for me my quirk works well against beyblades.”
“Oh does it now,” said the voice. “Lynx extend.” as the bey glowed and jumped out of the ground it flipped before bouncing off of the ceiling before heading straight at Koichi. “Kill him.”
“Oh no you don’t” as a grappling hook was launched intercepting the bey before hitting koichi.
The Crawler looked and saw his friends. “Knuckleduster, Popstep, you guys came for me.”
“Of course you idiot” said Popstep “We ain’t going to let you fight alone.”
“CRAWLER” the vigilante turned to see Izuku and the three heroes behind him.
“Well look you decided to show,” said Knuckleduster. “You sure you ain’t too famous to help us out.”
“I couldn’t leave you guys behind,” said Izuku as he saw the bey bouncing around. “That bey, JOHANNES.”
A man in a white coat with a yellow cap. “Well look what the cat dragged in. I should have known you were the vigilante around town after I saw you palling around with that annoying a hole Daichi.”
“How the hell are you here? Last I checked you should be rotting in a South American prison.”
“Oh I called in a favor from the Garcia family.” said Johannes with a laugh. “Honestly they act like cats with catnip for even a little bit of dirt on Ginga. They hate him more than cats hate water.”
MT Lady staring at the guy in disbelief. “Okay what’s with this cat-guy-thing?”
“Hey I have a name you know.” said Johannes.
“He’s name is Johannes,” explained Izuku as he loaded his bey. “He’s a criminal that specializes in finding and stealing ancient artifacts. Also I’m going to need permission right now to fight.”
“Why?”
Johannes grinned. “Let me show ya, LYNX.” His Bey shot out of the shadows at high speed at the heroes. The heroes ducked for cover and dodged as the bey began bouncing around the warehouse.
Death Arms stuck his head out to confirm what he saw. “This guy is using a TOP!!!”
“BEYBLADE!!!” said Izuku/Johannes/and the vigilantes.
“Whatever,” said Death Arms dodging from another attack. “I thought you were the only one with one of those things.”
“I never said that, now give me permission to fight so I can take this guy out.” yelled Izuku as he got ready to launch.
MT Lady began to grow. “Don’t worry I got this.” as she got so large she went through the roof, causing the heroes and Johannes to run and avoid the falling debris. “Oops sorry.”
“MT Lady what are you doing?” asked Kamui woods.
“Ending this quickly.” she said as she lunged at Johannes.
Johannes looked insulted. “Do you really underestimate me that much? Lynx” Johannes’s bey shot up at MT Lady, hitting her arm and slicing it open causing her to scream in pain.
“MT LADY.” yelled the heroes as they saw the bey spin around her arm like a cork screw cutting it in the process. Koichi reacted first launching himself into the sky timing his hit just right intercepting the bey on her arm and blasting it off with his quirk.
MT Lady fell as she shrunk down, to be caught by Kamui woods. “MT lady are you alright.”
MT lady slowly tried to raise her arm, but was in too much pain. “My arm, damn this hurts. Aaaaahhhhh.” Everyone could see her arm was shredded. “Shit that was a bad idea. I may have to tap out.”
Johannes raised a bag as his bey landed in it. “Oh don’t tap out yet.” the bag with his bey began to expand rapidly. “The fun is just getting started.” The bag now was his size and looked ready to burst. “Eat this Schrodinger's Bey” The bag exploded as several dozen beys were launched at the heroes.
The beys came flying and bouncing off of everything and some almost hit the heroes. Knuckleduster started to intercept some of the beys with his fist, Crawler did the same with his air shots, and Kaumi Woods was covering the others with his quirk. “Hey,” shouted Izuku, getting their attention. “Unless I fight we’re going to get screwed here.”
“Dammit,” said Death Arms “Fine I give you permission to fight.”
“Finally” Izuku jumped in the air and “LET IT RIP!” as his bey launched, intercepting the other beys. “Tanku Go!” Tanku began to glow as it became faster, hitting beys left and right, shattering them into shards before they faded away.
Popstep used her mic/whacking stick and hit a few of the beys shattering them. The same with knuckleduster and Crawler “What are these? They shatter on contact.”
“It's his quirk,” said Izuku as he dodged a few beys. “His quirk is a weird one, I don't really get it myself but it allows him to somewhat bend the laws of reality.”
“Bend the laws of reality, you’re kidding?”
Tanku then in a blur of speed destroyed several more. “Ever heard of Schrodinger’s cat?”
Crawler paused as he remembered hearing it in a lecture. “Wait you mean the whole dead cat bow thing?”
“Yep, as far as I can tell he can mess with objects as long as no one can see the object being mess with, though the objects created or mess with aren’t as durable as the original.” said Izuku as his eyes darted back and forth between the beys on the ground trying to find the real one. The one that wasn’t acting like the rest, the one that was just bouncing from place to place and not attacking. “There, Tanku.” Tanku bounced off of some beys as it made a b line to the one Izuku was targeting. They collided causing Lynx to fly back to Johannes. “Found you!”
“LYNX!” Johannes growelled in frustration, though quickly calmed down seeing that Lynx was still spinning strong. “You're going to pay for that, huh?” Johannes looked to see Izuku was gone. He darted his eyes left and right but couldn’t see him. “Hey where did he go?” Lynx then got hit again by Tanku, “Lynx! Time to mov-” He wasn’t able to finish as Izuku punched him in the face causing Johannes to stagger for a bit. “Why you.” as he whipped his hand out of his sleeves showing bladed claws on his hand. “I’m going to cut you up like a cat toy.” Izuku didn’t say anything as he got into a fighting stance and signaled for Johannes to come at him. “RRRRAAAAA” Johannes began to try and slash at Izuku who dodged each strike and then countered the last one but Johannes dodged himself and used it to strike at Izuku’s arm. “Gotcha,” Ting “What?” Johannes then saw Izuku was holding something that ran across his arm, “A Tonfa!”
“Here take a closer LOOK.” as Izuku began to go on the attack, he expertly wielded his tonfa spinning it back and forth hitting Johannes several times. ‘I got to thank Garland for the tonfa lessons.’
“Shit LYNX” as he tried to get his bey for back up.
“Tanku,” Tanku stopped Lynx and sent it back to where the heroes were. “Crawler stop it.”
“Way ahead of you.” as Koichi used his quick to control the friction of the ground making the bey go to a grinding halt.
“Lynx! NNNNooooooooo” as Johannes was distracted Izuku took the opportunity to hit his arm right into the path of Tanku destroying his cat claw. “My weapon.” Izuku then gave him a tonfa back hand sending him to the ground. Johannes looked up at Izuku. “This isn’t over yet. LYNX show them your claws. EXTEND.” Lynx’s base then extended upward giving it enough power to escape Koichi’s trap. Lynx then began to glow bright yellow, the light began to grow and take shape. The shape of a giant…
“CAT!!” yelled the heroes at the sight they were seeing.
“Is this the first time you've seen this?” asked Knuckleduster.
Tanku shot up blocking Lynx from attacking Izuku, Johannes saw this and saw a moment to escape as he made a dash for the exit. “Oh no you don’t. Tanku Vortex” Tanku glowed and began to create a small tornado.
‘Ha I’m too far away, that won’t get me.’ thought Johannes. Izuku then jumped over the beys that were locked in combat. Tanku then disengaged and jumped right behind Izuku tossing Izuku with the small tornado. “He’s using the tornado as a big jump.” Johannes could do nothing as he saw Izuku coming right at him with Tonfa in hand.
Izuku spun with the tornado giving him more momentum “Lights out Johannes.” as he hit Johannes with his tonfa knocking him out. Izuku did a flip to help catch himself from landing face first. He looked over to make sure Johannes was down and then looked to see Lynx spinning out. “Looks like that's it, you guys okay?”
“We’re fine,” said Knuckleduster. “Crawler here only has a few cuts on him and Mt Lady’s arm is the worst injury we got but it looks like it should recover quickly.”
“How the hell do you know,” yelled MT Lady. “That thing hurt like a bitch. I won’t be able to wear T shirts now.”
“You’d still look fine.” said Kamui Woods “It will heal, but you should go easy on the arm.”
“Injuries aside I got a few questions,” said Death Arms. “For starters who are you guys?”
Koichi and Kazuho flinched a little. Knuckleduster just grinned. “The fists of justice.” This caused Koichi, Kazuho and Izuku to facepalm. “What?”
“Oh meow, meow.” came a feminine voice. “It looks like the little jerryies got the best of the big tom cat.” They all looked up to the whole in the roof MT Lady made to see a woman standing in the moonlight, she was wearing a yellow top, and gray skirt both with cat paw print patterns on them, she had a choker with a bell on it, long brown hair and looked to be in her mid twenties. “Looks like Motti will have to come and save the day again.”
“Hey who’s she?” asked Kazuho.
“Excuse me ma’am are you by chance a hero?” asked Kamui Woods
“Motti is Motti,” she said as a beyblade dashed on the ground hitting Lynx up in the air for Motti to catch. “And Motti is here to get Johannes back.”
“She has a beyblade too!” yelled MT Lady. “How many of you guys are there?”
“We can ask that later, surround her.” yelled Death Arms.
Motti put a finger on her cheek. “Motti sees an old guy, a scary guy, a cute guy, a cute boy, and a woody guy.” she looked right at Popstep and MT Lady, “A flattie and a fatty.”
Both MT Lady and Popstep got massive tic marks as their anger grew. “WHO ARE YOU CALLING FLATTIE/FATTY”
“Seven against one is not good odds for Motti,” as her bey began to circle causing a smoke screen to cover everyone. Izuku and Koichi used an air blast to clear the smoke. When they did they saw Motti on the roof again this time holding Johannes and the briefcase. “Motti will take her leave now, be careful boy and bye cute guy.” as she jumped away.
Izuku, Crawler and Kamui woods jumped to the roof, finding no traces of them.“That ain’t good,” said Izuku. He wanted to give chase to see if he could track him but was told against it. Shortly afterwards Engenium showed up and said that Crawler, Popstep and Knuckleduster worked for him. Getting them out of trouble, Izuku would owe him for that.
~o~
Izuku would try later to find out anything more about Johannes and Motti but couldn’t find anything but soon his ten months were up and he found himself standing in front of his future as he looked at UA’s gates. “We’re here Tanku, it's about time.”
Comments
It appears I wasn’t clear what I was trying to say was I noticed you seem to write scenes in your story’s that I would think would need more explanation. The death arms scene was just the most obvious one which is why I spent so much time talking about it there are other examples but I don’t have some notes in another window right now.
Re the novice artist
2020-11-15 20:29:14 +0000 UTCOkay I'll make sure o cover it the flashbacks more.
Lorenzo
2020-11-15 04:59:55 +0000 UTCAlright this is officially my third favorite story of yours. I’m loving all the Beyblade characters that are being mentioned (Manley grow up with the Metal Saga series but I do have vague memories of re runs of the original series so I know what a bit-beast is, as anyone would it’s the coolest part.) I also want to say although this is a less serious story it doesn’t mean you can go crazy, the raccoon army I think is a bit much. Also I think this is a bit of a problem with your writing or this is something I really don’t like I can’t tell but in general you seem to write many scene’s were someone is taking/“explaining” something but the incident is left super vague one example is in this chapter were Izuku is talking with death arm’s and Izuku is “explaining” how he found merci now I don’t know about you but when I read a scene like this my thoughts are more like who are these people and what exactly were you doing Because it doesn’t seem like the heroes have been briefed on everything (I think death arms would be thinking/asking this just to clarify.also when I read this part I thought maybe a flashback was coming because this mission sounded important to the story and foreshadowing and all that.but no again you write what seems like could or would be some very interesting backstory/infodump/flashback scene that seems important but you gloss over it. But thinking about this some more i’m probably just projecting my expectations now or something.i don’t know it just feels like I’m missing some information when I read scenes like this sometimes.it also doesn’t help that you seem to write more than one of these scenes when they do show up in a chapter.
Re the novice artist
2020-11-14 02:16:59 +0000 UTC