Another Story Edit.
Added 2021-09-01 00:04:57 +0000 UTCHere's the next Konan chapter. I left the changes I made highlighted so you can see how much of the story I changed. I know many of you did not care for the last one very much, I think Stray Cloud took that to heart when he write this one. As even before my edits, it was a night and day difference compared to the last edit I did.
Comments
Sometimes you need a kick in the balls to straighten you out. That last story was LAZY, and that's being polite.
Don Hernandez
2021-09-01 00:20:02 +0000 UTCHope he didn't get discouraged.
Jinchuuriki Jay
2021-09-01 00:18:26 +0000 UTC
