Elephant Town Chapter 11, page 8
Added 2022-04-25 04:15:41 +0000 UTC
(Not to ruin the lovey moment, but: this is one of those pages that I spent all week drawing and redrawing, only not know how to color it in the end. I'll almost certainly recolor this at some point, but for now, finished is better than perfect!)
Comments
Aw thanks buddy!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-30 16:52:51 +0000 UTCThe effort shows! Love the page panel composition as it relates to the story.
2022-04-30 16:08:52 +0000 UTCThat is SO reassuring to hear, thank you! I didn't have a direct reference for that one, I just perused a bunch of "wedge sandal" ebay listings and asked my boyfriend to take a picture of his shoe rack!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-28 19:19:07 +0000 UTCLove it! The shoe portion looks so close to a photo it’s amazing!!!
2022-04-28 17:09:29 +0000 UTCHa, like the draft of my novel... I have ideas about needing to change some things for the better, but the how to do it is the real trick! - - Neal
NJGR
2022-04-27 21:23:06 +0000 UTCYeah, I think the direction is right, I just need to tweak values and saturation... and of course I have no idea how to do that. ;) Thanks, Neal!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-27 15:44:51 +0000 UTCLove the tumbled unfolding of panels from top to bottom. Since you're mulling over the coloring, maybe something similar so it feels like a spectrum? Or a hint of the last panel's color in the first, and vice versa, since they inform each other? Just random thoughts on a first viewing. - - Neal
NJGR
2022-04-27 04:57:49 +0000 UTCBeautiful. Also, aww, so sweet...
Hugh Eckert
2022-04-25 16:20:39 +0000 UTCI still have a lot of these in my office, but to me they scream COLLEGE NIGHTSTAND. :)
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-25 15:53:06 +0000 UTCI agree. :)
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-25 15:52:30 +0000 UTCI hope they have his nose. That's some sexy jawline, Danielle.
Ruth Merriam
2022-04-25 13:50:03 +0000 UTCI like the detail of the two pairs of shoes, side by side, together.
Steve Boyko
2022-04-25 12:05:32 +0000 UTCBeautiful. Just beautiful. The darkness, the light - wow.
Julie Howard
2022-04-25 11:40:03 +0000 UTCThis is really sweet.
Gary Walker
2022-04-25 11:27:37 +0000 UTCI love the specificity of that nightstand. Great choice!
Andy Ihnatko
2022-04-25 05:20:46 +0000 UTCI love the dress, tossed aside. Since we got to see it so much last week. And there are no panties. :)
Laura J Testa-Reyes
2022-04-25 04:56:49 +0000 UTC
