Elephant Town Chapter 11 (pages 1-2)
Added 2022-04-04 04:02:10 +0000 UTC
Props to all the former Maria's workers who filled me in on kitchen details so this would feel like, y'know, a kitchen.
I'd say "never again" to drawing shelves of to-go boxes and bags of onions, but... well, next week's pages. *falls to the floor*
Comments
I was REALLY happy to send this to my friends who used to work at this restaurant, and my friend Jon was like "nailed the busted ipod." I pulled that one out of my ass, I didn't even know they used an iPod!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-11 02:05:44 +0000 UTCI love the detail of the ancient iPod with the cracked screen. So many little touches like this.
Steve Boyko
2022-04-11 01:54:24 +0000 UTCTHANK YOU that means a lot! Next scene is an actual cafe, so I hope that one meets your approval too!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-07 16:13:51 +0000 UTCAs someone who worked in a cafe kitchen, you succeeded 😁
Sky
2022-04-07 14:42:33 +0000 UTCbecause you have to DRAW EVERYTHING (or not, but too late to go full minimalist and not have the abrupt style change look weird haha)
Minzoku Bokumetsu
2022-04-05 04:11:57 +0000 UTCYeah, that's the Mathew. Thank you.
Mitchell Sealy
2022-04-05 02:00:27 +0000 UTCMatthew who used to be Paul? He doesn't work in a restaurant, he's a phone tech support rep.
Dean Reilly
2022-04-05 01:36:02 +0000 UTCBeat me to it, thank you!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-04 23:44:04 +0000 UTCGARRR!! You strike me through the heart, bringing to mind my much-missed 2nd gen iPod Nano! I doubt I will see its like again, outside this comic. :-(
2022-04-04 22:10:02 +0000 UTCMathew doesn't work here, right? Didn't look like a restaurant he worked at, I don't think. So he's probably not making a spectacle of himself with his new persona. This is something else they're seeing.
Mitchell Sealy
2022-04-04 21:25:26 +0000 UTCoooh all those DETAILS!!! i didnt even register the “rip” also being…a rip at first, such a cool effect!
Sabrina
2022-04-04 18:50:40 +0000 UTCOhh, right right right.
Ruth Merriam
2022-04-04 17:22:41 +0000 UTCThat isn't Berto's hand in the iPod panels, so I think the metal belongs to a coworker.
William Cole
2022-04-04 15:35:08 +0000 UTCB is a metalhead? No. I'm not buying that. I was utterly swept into the world of burritoville and frying chips. I could hear that hustle and rrrrriiIIPPP. And then his mellow was harshed with a yank. Why, dude? It had better be worth it. Ah, but it's Danielle. It will TOTALLY be worth it.
Ruth Merriam
2022-04-04 14:58:37 +0000 UTCComing from you that has some WEIGHT, background champ!!
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-04 14:28:20 +0000 UTCOh we will, and it'll be worth the... um, 4-5 month wait?? WHY DO COMICS TAKE SO LONGGGGG
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-04 14:28:01 +0000 UTCHa HA, I felt CLEVER! >:)
Danielle Corsetto
2022-04-04 14:27:03 +0000 UTCEverything about these pages is perfect! Loved the tomatoes.
Ralph
2022-04-04 13:55:46 +0000 UTCOoh I was hoping to get back to his story.
Ben Hatke
2022-04-04 13:54:13 +0000 UTCYes! The “RIP!!!”
David Neale-Lorello
2022-04-04 13:43:45 +0000 UTCYou're taking minutia panels to a whole new level.
Cab
2022-04-04 13:33:11 +0000 UTCI GASPED LOUDLY
Cab
2022-04-04 13:32:53 +0000 UTCCliffhanger! Why?!? What is behind that door?
2022-04-04 12:55:35 +0000 UTCThat RIP!!! DANIELLE
Boum
2022-04-04 12:41:13 +0000 UTC
