Elephant Town Chapter 8 (pages 21-22)
Added 2021-08-16 03:49:46 +0000 UTC
THANK THEE LORD SHE FOUND THEE MUSIC
I posted the English translation for all patrons, in case you're interested. :)
Thank you again to Kier for the assist on my lazy Google Translate hack job, and for improving it, as always!
Comments
hey i know that guy
Jonah Sanville (firelight_waltz)
2021-08-17 23:15:47 +0000 UTCBeautifully captured. Thank you for the insight you always give us into your work!
Reddy
2021-08-16 19:49:22 +0000 UTCLovely. Also, her "friend" was actually accurate about the music being "chill *for Miranda*", and not just "chill". If you take my meaning.
Hugh Eckert
2021-08-16 19:14:59 +0000 UTCPlease don't let Miranda fall in love with Berto. This song is enough to put stars in any lonely heart's eyes. I can feel the weight of the world slipping off of my shoulders with the fluidity of your drawing.
Ruth Merriam
2021-08-16 15:26:27 +0000 UTCThis is just beautiful. Whether she understands or not, she's just drinking it in.
shadowscribble
2021-08-16 11:55:30 +0000 UTCThe lyrics are three-dimensional. They're "real" to her, as she's hearing them. _Damn_ that was a brilliant artistic choice!
Andy Ihnatko
2021-08-16 09:59:19 +0000 UTCIt's captures what music can do, so perfectly, makes me all calm to watch.
Pille
2021-08-16 06:43:39 +0000 UTCThat is beautiful, Danielle. I love the way she is embraced by, "ΒΏQuiΓ©n me hubiera enseΓ±ado a amarme a mΓ mismo?" -- that moment to breathe, that hug she deserves, that lyric it seems she needs to hear. Chef's kiss.
Fergus Maximus
2021-08-16 06:05:47 +0000 UTCI definitely had to punt to Google Translate for those last two lines, I don't even know what those verb tenses are called in *English* π(it's probably something like "pluperfect")
Deb with the purple bike
2021-08-16 05:59:45 +0000 UTCOh, Danielle...
NJGR
2021-08-16 05:16:03 +0000 UTCOh, love this. Glad she finally found the music. I figured it was Berto, since it is a small town.
Laura J Testa-Reyes
2021-08-16 04:29:09 +0000 UTCAhaha yo tambien!
Danielle Corsetto
2021-08-16 04:28:02 +0000 UTCDAMN, A++ Deb!!
Danielle Corsetto
2021-08-16 04:27:55 +0000 UTCShe found the music...and it's Berto! Ok, I think this is what he's singing... "What if I never met you / Who would have taught me to stay in bed and listen to the birds / Who would have taught me to say "I love you" with only your eyes / Who would have taught me to love myself / Who would I cry to that I haven't met you yet / if I had never met you" -- Danielle, how'd I do?? My high school Spanish teacher wants to know π
Deb with the purple bike
2021-08-16 04:20:24 +0000 UTCTranslation would be good. I took Spanish in high school, but that was long ago Mi vocabulario es bleah!
MaryAnne Glazar
2021-08-16 04:16:10 +0000 UTC
