Elephant Town Chapter 7 (pages 13-15)
Added 2021-05-31 04:20:30 +0000 UTC
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Next week we'll check back in on Miranda!
Comments
Aw thanks, I reworked them like crazy!!
Danielle Corsetto
2021-06-06 19:00:05 +0000 UTCExcellent hands!
Theadora
2021-06-06 03:15:31 +0000 UTCThis is a beautiful way to end their scene. They are just so... cute!!
Cab
2021-06-01 15:49:16 +0000 UTCSometimes their relationship makes me nervous but then there are moments like these where they communicate clearly; Meghan brings up her anxieties and Berto explains and I just breathe a sigh of relief that this didn’t fester into a big fight and they’re both clearly trying so hard for each other. The check-in he did, asking about her comfort level with joining his family after this overwhelming brunch, was a really good move on his part!
Anja Hose
2021-06-01 11:50:29 +0000 UTCSo wholesome. I love it.
Hugh Eckert
2021-06-01 01:58:13 +0000 UTCThank you for noticing!! <3
Danielle Corsetto
2021-05-31 18:36:49 +0000 UTCYou'll find out soon. ;)
Danielle Corsetto
2021-05-31 18:36:29 +0000 UTCI'm so glad you noticed!
Danielle Corsetto
2021-05-31 18:36:17 +0000 UTCAwwwwwwww. I love this so damned much. Really, thank you for this storyline. It's doing my heart a world of good.
Ruth Merriam
2021-05-31 16:14:29 +0000 UTCPlus her eyes. Her eyes are really expressive.
Ruth Merriam
2021-05-31 16:13:49 +0000 UTCI like the subtleties you throw into these stories...the deep blue background when she's unsure, the introduction of the red when she's feeling the love, to the full red when it's all about the love. Really nice addition that subconsciously informs the reader. Just awesome.
Christian Brown
2021-05-31 14:39:07 +0000 UTCLove how considerate they are of each other <3
2021-05-31 14:00:39 +0000 UTCI really like these two. This vignette story style is nice. We get to visit with different people around the town. Will we eventually have overlaps where we can see an interaction from two different pov or is that a surprise? Either way I look forward to everyone's stories, most everyone...
Meisterj
2021-05-31 12:56:08 +0000 UTCShe switched it! ♥
NJGR
2021-05-31 07:35:38 +0000 UTCYay, Miranda. We can't let her sleep forever. :)
Laura J Testa-Reyes
2021-05-31 05:21:52 +0000 UTCA possible solution: wear Super Bowl rings on all ten fingers.
Dean Reilly
2021-05-31 04:55:59 +0000 UTC
