Chapter 622: Final Piece
Added 2025-11-05 00:45:01 +0000 UTCComments
Could have just made part of the next chapter part of this one. This one felt very light. Not a complaint, but an observation. This one felt like half the size of a usual chapter I didn't even have to flick my thumb across the screen more than once too to bottom. Usually it's like 3 or 4 flicks.. or maybe it's just in my head and this was only a little shorter.
MistuhBogan
2025-11-06 13:44:37 +0000 UTCI love the Amelia chose! She is very level headed and strategic. Opposite of Derek or Jace! I wish Edgar knew that the beasts would get stronger so he could stay with Vanessa tho 🥲
Apollo Greed
2025-11-05 22:41:48 +0000 UTCWow! Choosing Amelia is completely out of left field so didn’t expect that!
Elizabeth Prosser
2025-11-05 17:27:43 +0000 UTCGreat chapter m8 can't wait for the next one. :)
Logen Felxon
2025-11-05 16:54:50 +0000 UTCNice chapter, ty!
SmokeJam
2025-11-05 12:33:30 +0000 UTCI think Amelia is a great choice. There’s just too much you could do with her abilities to not dive deeper into her character
Cody Cahill
2025-11-05 12:14:27 +0000 UTCOooo i didnt even think about Amelia. Thats gonna be so fun
Toni
2025-11-05 05:28:22 +0000 UTCHa! Just straight up told blue boy to F off. 😂😜😂😈. I gotta say I really like this twist of bringing Amelia. Much better than spoiled annoying queen of “I am Queen”. And I love that Silvie gored the assassin lady and it wasn’t really even mentioned as a big thing, just an “oh,, she’s over there now” lol! 😸 so perfect!
ABTelford
2025-11-05 05:25:21 +0000 UTCCool 👍🏼 Tftc 🍻
JW Saxby
2025-11-05 04:17:22 +0000 UTCI was already excited but now even more so I thought we would never being seeing Amelia again glad she'll be sticking around for a bit she seems awesome from the little bit we've seen of her.
Icegiant
2025-11-05 02:49:19 +0000 UTCThe wait is so worth it, especially since you make it interesting
Chris
2025-11-05 02:26:18 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-11-05 02:26:08 +0000 UTCI think Amelia was the most interesting of the char anyways and u are right she does fit in well with derek
iam1449
2025-11-05 02:04:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-11-05 01:45:43 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Raymond Mouton
2025-11-05 01:41:49 +0000 UTCWell… it starts Tuesday. Haha. Man… I’ve been trying to get there but I kept getting hit with the, ‘dang, I need to address that.’
SunriseCV
2025-11-05 01:34:08 +0000 UTCYeah. I was writing her to be like Alanah, but more… stoic and straightforward. And of course with a power set that is much easier for me to write about than Alanah… honestly.
SunriseCV
2025-11-05 01:33:07 +0000 UTCIt’s 10 to the city
SunriseCV
2025-11-05 01:31:02 +0000 UTCThis would be a cool idea. Just randomly spaced out and giving small flashes of what it is like for everyone as time goes on and all of the powerhouses move on. Plus personal growth for those who will be following in the future on their own or by Derek and Silvi Dimensional Taxi Services
DeamoniumDraco
2025-11-05 01:30:22 +0000 UTCOh nice, Amelia is a good addition. Question for you - do you think there is a chance we can get one-off PoV chapters of people who stay behind? Like something about Avery later on, or Walter...
granndfunk
2025-11-05 01:14:23 +0000 UTCExcited for it. Interested to see which 10. Thomas been quiet…
Jordan
2025-11-05 01:14:22 +0000 UTCI’m ready for the next adventure..
Mikey3250
2025-11-05 01:11:14 +0000 UTCThat came out of left field for me, but I'm happy it did. I also appreciate the deliberation on the queen. It helped me not hate her as much. ;)
Kendal Bozant
2025-11-05 00:58:04 +0000 UTCAlso, did you decide if Derek can only bring 10 people ever or that he can only safely bring 10 people to Origin city? Could he bring more and the others make their own way into the city sometime after arriving in the system?
John
2025-11-05 00:56:27 +0000 UTCGlad you added Amelia she’s one of my favorite of the secondary characters. Honestly I like her more than just about any of them and that’s even with how little time she’s been in the books.
John
2025-11-05 00:53:01 +0000 UTC
