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New logos - Intro and outro

So I was thinking of updating my old logo, intro and outro.

Personally, I think this looks fantastic, but I'd welcome any feedback.

Click the video above for the Intro and here to see the outro:
https://youtu.be/yVb2TlPoTEg

New logos - Intro and outro

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It's cool - need the funk to lift the heavy work you do :)

Valerie C

Jim you have Created a Brand Music intro and ending do not change it graphics run amok and have fun i like the new graphics cheerd matye

Vic King

nice intro outro. up for it !

Cool intro but the outro music sounds a bit too funky to me πŸ˜‚ Better if both are in sync

Not really I'm afraid. It's a kind of self-taught, trial and error method I use. That said, if you're a programmer, you already have the right background knowledge. If you use Kali and metasploit, you'll have all the tools you need too.

Jim Browning

I'm an avid Linux user / programmer. Is there a video on how I can do what you do?

Little Yellow Ducks

Awesome!

Very nice.... much better than the current one

Love the new look Jim, as pro as you are. Keep up to the good work. Since you've asked, I'd pupm up the music a bit more... then it would be fire!

Tzuki

I commented before I saw your comment, but I totally agree. Have the sound effects he has on this graphic now, only add that to the end. Totally get rid of the graphics he’s using now though.

Way way better than what you have, but I’d still do the soundtrack you had for the other towards the end.

Yeah, globe part makes intro longer but does not lead to anything. I was expecting camera to zoom in into the place where the scam is detected and then see the logo there. But for some reason we were taken to outer space which makes globe and detected scam irrelevant

Patreon sucks

I find the futuristic graphics delightfully ironic on a couple of levels. For one, that's exactly the sort of thing you'd see pop up on a cyber-detective's screen in a movie. It's the visual equivalent of technobabble, I suppose, since it makes it look that you can simply point your tricorder at something and uncover the scam, when we all know how much work and research you put into it. Then there's also the fact that although these scams can be roughly categorized as "tech scams," they're 10% tech and 90% social engineering. Am I reading too much into it? Probably. I also think it looks fantastic.

Iri

I like the logo where it cuts through the word scam. Not as much a fan of the globe part. But definitely an upgrade. :)

I would say though, Jim... as an homage to your original theme, maybe have a bass-heavier anti-tech support scam tune play at the outro. It’d be nice to your original tune’s creator. Just a though.

Agreeing with Dave; there's a typo in the outro, if you haven't caught it already. Check the Twitter handle.

Retsof Noraa

I think he said roughly 5% of scams originate elsewhere.

Thanks all. The text is now larger and straightened. Will be using it in the next video!

Jim Browning

looks superb - keep up the good work

Looks great!

noice

You watch undoomed? nice.

Love the new outro!

dude thats sick. reminds me of "undoomed"

You are the king Jim.

Nice work

Allan N

original intro!

Looks great

Looks good! The actual logo needs some extra love though :) Also, the generic music makes very little sense so there's some room for improvement :)

Focusing the globe on India bothers me a bit, because - as you have pointed out in other videos - many scams originate elsewhere. I recall a few months ago reading that a man in Florida USA was caught masterminding the scam and collecting money from the scammers - he was just using India to "outsource" it. So maybe keep the globe spinning? But I agree the short intro is good, and you probably also want something that can be trademarked to avoid impostors - maybe a jingle playing behind it.

I think it’s great but I agree with the comments it could be quicker. Just speed up the clip and have the words whip arojnd the earth with more momentum

Andrew Bucci

Errrrmmmm ... Twitter ... is @JimBrowing11 correct?

Much improved over current one.

I absolutely love it!!

Its ok. as they say 'short and sweet'

Ramon M

I dig it

Instead of larger text it should have MORE text like a scene from Wargames or The Matrix! I want to see a traditional "hackers" screen overlayed.

Looks super!! Happy, to see updates, so excited to se news video !!!

Agreed. I think the game associations is something to steer away from. Your work needs higher values than that.

Looks great, however, I agree with others who say that the text should be a little larger.

Dave

I love it, however I think you could maybe shave a few seconds off the beginning. Shorter intros are always better IMO. This one is already pretty short though, just feel like it could be even shorter. But it is indeed fantastic.

Tony Richmond

They look great! Definitely a more modern look. Great job!

It's original and stylish and straight to the point so that means I like it. I think I might like it more with a faint, dark mesh or scrolling text overlay but that's just me. Viewers generally don't pay much heed to intro's, long intro's are very annoying and I generally skip them.

Looks great! Sounds good, too. Keep up the good work! Cheers!

Maybe 'signing in as: Jim Browning'

Looks great to me! Love the sound effects too. Has a nice hacker feel to it. Almost want it to be longer. Loving your work!

Yes.Good. but clean up texts and make larger please.Thanks for your scam reveals.Looks like you enjoy doing it.

Totally agree. It was great but the texts could be straight.

In my opinion, it looks great! the only thing I’d day is to have the text in the outro straight? Right now it is slightly off and that bothered my brain a little.

Looks Good <3

It looks nice, but its a little cheese. Reminds me of the scammer using the geektype website.

i kinda liked the old one, but maybe its just from being used to it.

Hi Jim, outro looks good! The intro is missing something... Maybe the music as in the outro? And the logo is not big enough! But great work πŸ‘πŸ‘

Powerful, maybe too powerful? The high pitches in sound were uncomfortable.

Paula Hernandez

An improvement on the old for sure, but I still think you could do better, this is really lacking any kind of personality. Maybe include some sound bites like this guy does: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDzee0-I0_Q&t=314s

Love it - only thing I'd do is make the 'Tech Support scams' Horizontal and BIGGGER .. for more impact..

Annette Erdtsieck

Superb, Jim! Good soundtrack, too. Lot of thought went into all that. How long from idea to finished process execution? Now continue with scammer execution.

You have earned the right to use whatever you want. But I can see Shayn's point of view

ROBERT CROMER

Nicely done! What logo do you plan on using?

Hell yeah

Looks fantastic.

Yaro Kasear

I like the old one but i think this one looks pretty good !

I love the overall design but I feel like the logo itself doesn't really have anything going for it that's very memorable. I think that you need something more iconic so that it works better in your channel avatar. The best I can envision of that without changing anything is just "SCAMS" with the not-sign through it. It's still slightly better than the current. Keeping the full text wouldn't work.

I like it as is!

Doug Betts

I love it. Very eye catching and futuristic as someone else said. Only comment is, it was a little fast...but I’m older and everything seems fast to me.

"@JimBrowing11"? (In the outro) :)

Love the outro so much :)

Some of the other patreons have nailed it, which is that it is very good but also a lot like a video game boot up sequence. And think that's why I'm having a bit of a hard time with it mate. It runs the risk of making your videos seem like it has become a game. I think you are doing people an incredible service of saving them from harm. I can even understand if you were to say that after a while it may feel like a game between you and the scammers! But I also hope that it doesn't actually become that to you becuase there are real people involved here. The victims, the scammers and yourself too. Sorry mate. That's probably way more analysis than you were expecting!! I'll respect whatever you decide to do. Keep you the great work!

Very nice

Yeah - I'm not so good at those (As you can probably tell)... might give you a shout about them

Jim Browning

Looks really nice =)

Couldn't lose that song in the outro... definitely

Jim Browning

Cool - so far, so good... Perhaps I'll tone down the red in the outro then.

Jim Browning

It's got a really cool retrofuturistic feel to it which I adore. I also really love that the classic outro music was incorporated into the new design! :)

Rebecca

super sick. Love it.

I like it. Much more modern. Agree with James Hinchcliffe, it haz a flare of Command & Conquer.

Looks great. I really think the thumbnails will play a huge part in the videos traffic as well. I come from a graphic design background so if you want any help or advise with that let me know

I think the colour of the red planet (in the outro) conflicts with the text. Maybe keep the colour of the planet to a more neutral colour? Other than that i think its spot on!

Mad Dire

Awesome. Tech with a bit Command&Conquer-retro - for those old enough to remember the originalπŸ₯΄

James Hinchcliffe

Those both look amazing.

You should add your name

I'm going to miss the old intro.

itslydiabxtch

Just wanted to check if you still used the iconic song which you do in the outro. Thus, I approve.

I like it (almost reminiscent of Person of interest) which is quite apt... I think you should try to incorporate your name into it though :)

It's so good :0!!!! No offence but the old one was a little outdated, this one has personality!!!!

Looks very modern. I approve :)


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