01 NEW SERIES
Added 2017-03-25 15:46:45 +0000 UTCGreetings!
The new series' first page in English is here!
My English is not perfect, so if anyone find some grammar error, please feel free to correct me, trust me I really need it.
the title is still a secret until the last page of the first chapter(it might spoils the story)
remember that, I will post once in two day, because I can only draw 4 panels a day in Thai and translate to English when the page is complete(program layer problem and stuff)
Cheers!
Yuriwhale
Comments
Thanks a ton! will edit them before completing the first chapter
Yuriwhale
2017-03-26 03:52:17 +0000 UTCActually rephrasing might work better. Like for example "Ever since I first saw you I've had feelings for you"
icedkocha
2017-03-25 18:04:26 +0000 UTCIf you're open to advice on grammar, I'm happy to give you some! In the first panel of column one, I think "Since the first time I SAW you I HAD this feeling" is better, as it indicates the past tense, rather than the present tense. For the first panel of the second column, I think it would be better to go with "Why DO you have to fixATE on love proposals?" Finally, in the second panel of column two, "Even though they are just a few wordS within a few secondS, they are full of emotions" make sure you use plural rather than singular, and you don't need to say "BUT" because you already have "Even though" because they are used the same way. I hope that helps
Blaise
2017-03-25 17:41:42 +0000 UTC
