Fat Bunny Girl Shinobu WIPs
Added 2023-06-16 17:36:12 +0000 UTCMade even more changes! Check the EDIT TWO section for details!
So, after a little sweet time was taken, I got some sketches done for Shinobu! I only got 3 versions down, and I might do a fourth one. I'm in a bit of a hurry as of posting, so these will do for now. Anyways, feedback is appreciated!
EDIT: Made some lineart for her! Will be coloring her next! Also added them in the attachments portion of this post!
EDIT TWO: Flat colors done! Will be shading it next and then we're are all good!
Comments
Ah then nevermind, everything else looks fine
YodaOne
2023-06-17 18:55:30 +0000 UTCI mean, it should be, but what would you have done differently?
HooliganFreak
2023-06-17 17:42:14 +0000 UTCI meant the suit where the stomach is exposed lol. I may be wrong because it’s hard to tell in the third image
YodaOne
2023-06-17 17:16:21 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean? You’re looking at it right now! Lol
HooliganFreak
2023-06-17 17:13:12 +0000 UTCWell, would it be possible to have a reversed bunny suit alt? I think the zuri would look better with it. Other than that everything else looks great
YodaOne
2023-06-17 16:59:32 +0000 UTCGreat to hear! Any fixes I should make before doing the line art?
HooliganFreak
2023-06-17 16:23:01 +0000 UTCLove how this turned out, I especially love the third alt
YodaOne
2023-06-17 13:58:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the critique. By the way, is it the mouth like that, really? Because I never watched Demon Slayer either lol. As for the closed eyes, maybe I can replace the eyes I drew with those lol. Also, the angry veins mark and the scribble are only because I couldn’t decide, for I was rushing this out lol. Anyways, thx.
HooliganFreak
2023-06-16 22:00:13 +0000 UTCHer body is looking great, I love her pear shaped figure, and how soft and doughy she is all over. Her belly roll and navel are super sexy, great work. I haven't seen the show properly so maybe a real fan can correct me, but her expression with the mouth open seems a little too cartoony? I thought she was more cool and collected. But I'm no expert. With the bellyfuck face, I wonder if it would be even more threatening if her eyes were closed. Wonder we only need one of the bothered scribble and the angery mark on her head? No big deal. Love how pissed she looks with her mouth shut as is. Rant over! Thanks for sexy fatties!
Phat94
2023-06-16 21:53:29 +0000 UTC
