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Going a bit wrong

Obviously, the wrong version of chapter 852 went out, with some beta reader notes left in. The proper version of the chapter will be up soon.

Comments

Oh, thank you for the clarification Jay.

It was enjoyable to see the thoughts behind what you’ve written. Obviously not for the general public. A rare treat, thank you.

N8rtotPlayz

This is definitely not the right place to ask but does anyone know why the table of content page is locked? I'm a silver rank subscriber. Thanks in advance.

Oren

Yea can we keep these in like silver or higher tier gets cool beta notes which Shirt is banking on his writing. That would be great, I vote keep too.

Joshua Marsh

Loved the beta reader notes. I vote to keep them in from now on

Crysus

I could be wrong but, when he says beta reader notes, I don't think it's the author or editor's notes.

Jay

I really enjoyed seeing your notes. Like watching an artist create and seeing part of the process. I know that it was a mistake but thank you for sharing. Consider slipping these in from time to time. What a treat.

New Patreon tier for Beta versions?

Moontunnels

has the correct chapter been posted?

Maybe you could release a “director’s commentary” version (beta notes included version) for your books?

Psykohamster

You all know that Shirt is now mostly and almost required to have Jason place a drink mid air like it was on a shelf.

Will Mill

The beta notes were fun to read! They didn't subtract from my enjoyment one but!

Minocho

Maybe the comments could be separated out into annotations? Very much enjoyed the insight regardless

Lucas Gulick

Fkn Steve.....

Kevin Anderson

I was a big fan of the Beta notes too, it'd be nice if there was a tier that got to see the funny little notes that get added

Blayne Allsen

I enjoyed the Beta notes. Make that mistake again please.

Clarke

Maybe for a higher tier like other authors?

Andrei

Caught me off guard at first but i definitely enjoyed the editors notes!

Mr. Matt

Tbh, I loved the notes

Aaron Greene

I thought it was kinda cool too see the creative process at work

Greg Lambert

+1 for the beta notes

Andrew Forster

I liked it, thanks for all you do

Azwrix

They thru us off but please make a pool about leave chapter with Beta note?!

Zack Dehart

The beta notes were sweet - make a beta version that is separate

I thought they were nice

Arthur Pendragon

Hahaha loved it

Jonathan Crandall

I loved the chapter. I was dying with all the little notes left in

Jacob Goodrich

I liked the beta chapter, it was fun to see editor notes

Nick

The beta version was awesome I wouldn't mind seeing more behind the scenes!! Great chapter either way

Ken Sevier

Definitely would love some chapters with the beta readers notes in it.

Michael McMahon

They were much appreciated thank you

Tyler S.

Totally Steve's fault

Jim Erwin

I enjoyed it

Isaac Boyles

The beta notes made it amazing Shirt! Loved see what your betas thoughts were

Bunny

I loved them, can you add them in pdfs for silver and up to see with the chapter?

David Carr

I actually liked the notes. Kind of felt like watching a series with the commentary on.

Caleb

I blame Steve.

Gnothi Seauton

I actually really enjoyed the writing commentary. It had a Deadpool 4th wall breaking fun-ness to it.

Same! And no worries! It's a Monday lol

Dylan Pearce

Same, it also let me help with the editing (not that Travis needs it).

The Random NPC

LOVED IT

Chuck Haeberle

I enjoyed it honestly

Ryan Smart

Second note, how do I become a beta reader?

It was nice to see (not all the time, but enjoyable nonetheless

Allen Wilding

I think it's a fantastic version. I enjoyed it very much notes and all.

I was wondering why all the extra commentary was happening. Loved it though

Joshua Ross

lol the comments were great thanks for the update

Alexander Dupree

Same

John Ness

Leave some of them, they were great!

How does one become a beta reader if not an editor? I offer myself up as tribute and/or would like to sign up for the waitlist. 😬

Rich

Personally I loved those little extra comments!

Georgie


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