Chapter 260: Lessons
Added 2020-06-12 23:00:01 +0000 UTC
Asano was dead but that did not have to be the end. The astral space had no god of death to guide the soul into the astral; it would have to slowly drift into the Reapers grasp on its own. That gave the Builder a window to act.
As it considered this, Asanos combat robe vanished. A glow lit up from within his body, which started radiating heat. The Builder felt the surge of a familiar power and was filled with a fury that no mortal, even one as frustrating as Asano, could engender.
World-Phoenix.
The Builder abandoned its vessel which fell to the ground, an abandoned puppet.
***
On another world, a diamond ranker stood in the throne room of an imperial palace. His name was Shako and he had pale, freckled skin, wild red hair and eyes so brightly green they almost seemed to glow. Those eyes glared down at his descendants, the imperial family sprawled on the floor in supplication. There was no sign of the arrogance that had forged an empire planet-spanning empire.
The elaborate throne of gold and ivory was empty. The emperor was on his hands knees with the rest of the family, at the feet of their ancestor. Outside, the fires of rebellion were burning the imperial city to the ground.
Ancestor, the emperor begged, not daring to raise his eyes from the floor. Please reawaken the guardian golems, we beg you.
Shako had not needed to draw breath for centuries, yet he did so in order to sigh at the people arrayed before him.
When I bestowed the golems on your ancestors, you were warned, Shako said. Their purpose was to protect the dynasty, not as a tool of conquest. If used as such, then their power would be spent in the hour of greatest need. They were a gift from Builder, for assisting him in claiming the astral spaces of this world. But this gift was a shield, not a sword.
We were foolish, the emperor beseeched. Please, reawaken the golems and we will only use them as you have proscribed in the future. We have learned our lesson!
If I did so, Shako said, then the lesson you learn will be that you can ignore the correct path because I will step forward to correct your mistakes. Your lesson is to be found with the armies outside. It will come at the hands of a world full of essence users you oppressed with the power you were given.
Ancestor, I do not think that any of us will survive this lesson. Our diamond-rankers have abandoned us or even turned against us. Our enemies have put up a barrier that we cannot portal out of and only the relics you left behind have allowed us to hold out this long. If you cannot save our empire, then at least save our lives. Only your might can take us away from this place to safety.
When I was a boy, Shako said, our family were not kings but farmers. We understood that the seed you plant is the crop you harvest. You have sown the seeds of discord, fury and retribution. Now the harvest has come, the yield is heavy, and there is no one to blame but yourselves.
Ancestor, the emperor said, finally looking up. Will you truly let your bloodline die?
Shako laughed coldly.
Is that what you were relying on? That I would not let my bloodline expire? You are not my only descendants in on this world. You are merely the ones that sought to leverage our connection to aggrandise yourselves instead of accomplishing anything on your own. My blood flows all across this world, in families that have heeded my lessons and treasured my gifts, instead of squandering them in pursuit of decadence and unearned glory. Many of them are even outside, leading the charge. They do not know that their revered ancestor is the same one their oppressors have used to justify their tyranny.
Shako spat on the floor in front of the emperor.
You have disgraced me. Used me as a banner under which you performed atrocity after atrocity. You beg me to act but I assure you, you would have nothing but regret if I did. It would not be to save you but to scourge you, in ways even the armies baying for your blood would balk at.
Shakos gaze turned to the empress. Through her aura he sensed her steeling herself and she rose to her feet, raising her eyes with determination.
Ancestor, she pleaded. At least take the children. They are not to blame for the sins we have committed and are still young enough to learn better. Let the rest of us die, if you must, but do not make them pay the price for the transgressions of their forebears.
Wife, the emperor snarled, looking up at the empress.
No, she shot back. There is no saving us, husband. Do not be blind now, at least. At the end.
The emperor opened his mouth to speak but did not as Shakos aura fell on him like a boulder. Shako stepped up to the empress, who matched his gaze, even as her aura wavered fearfully.
That figures, Shako said. The only person to show moral responsibility is the one that married into the family. It seems that the ability to grow a spine has been weeded out of my bloodline. Very well, Empress. I will take the children, and you. It is time this family learned the lessons of being farmers once more, so farmers you shall be. Of course, there is nowhere in this world that your name is not hated. You will have to hide it, lest anyone learn whose blood you are, for they will surely spill it. You will have enough to get by, and no more. There will be those who can teach you the ways of the land. I will visit in a few generations and see how you have done.
Shako waved his hand and the empress vanished, along with the children gathered in the back.
Ancestor
the emperor managed to choke out. Shako ignored him, tilting his head as if listening to something.
I have duties, Shako said. You have woven your own fates and I shall intervene no more. Thank you for reminding me of the other relics I left behind, Emperor. I shall take them with me.
Shako vanished, the hope of his descendants vanishing with him.
***
Physical realities existing within the astral came in vastly differing sizes. At one end of the scale were sprawling universes that spanned hundreds of billions of galaxies, existing for so long that they were, by most practical measures, eternal. At the other end were small, astral proto-spaces, flickering into being only to disappear again just hours later.
Size was largely a good determinate of how long a physical reality would last. There was, however, a physical reality that was barely the size of a small sun, yet had been in existence longer than most universes. This reality was a single, flat plane. It had no sun and no stars, containing only one thing: the city world of Interstice.
Interstice was, as far as anyone with the power to check was aware, both the oldest and largest metropolis in existence. Oceans had interlinked, artificial islands with magical batteries charged by the great waves. Mountains were hollowed out, volcanos turned into foundry cities. Intelligent species of every stripe could be found, in jungles dotted with grand ziggurats, connected by magical skyways passing over the trees. Underwater cities connected by glass tunnels, with magical subways running not just on the floor but on the walls and ceilings of the tunnels as well.
There was no sun, yet there were days. No moon, yet there were tides. Climate affected not just weather but gravity. It was a realm of impossibilities that some called the capital city of the cosmos.
There were administrators in Interstice, but no rulers. When the great astral beings had business in a physical reality, this was the physical reality they used. In the face of that, who would be so bold as to claim to be anything but a caretaker? It was a place where the most powerful mortals in existence vied for the chance to be servants.
One of the many city-regions of Interstice was the island Glim. An artificial island, it defied the equatorial heat of its location to be made almost entirely of ice. The ground and buildings were all crafted from ice stained in rainbow colours, extending high above and deep below the surface of the water. The magical ice did not chill the bones and did not melt. The only cold it radiated was just enough to cool the tropical heat to a pleasant warmth.
Shako arrived via dimensional teleportation in the submarine bowels of the city, deep below the surface. He appeared in one of several portal squares that existed for the purpose. The local authorities noted arrivals and made various checks before allowing them into the city proper.
Portalling into just any region of Interstice was frowned upon and magically obstructed. Shako was powerful enough to circumvent such measures but had no reason to do so. He flew into the air toward a shaft in the ceiling, stopping at the checkpoint building affixed to the ceiling.
As he was a resident, a diamond-ranker and a favoured servant of the Builder, the civil authorities did little more than note Shakos arrival as he passed through the checkpoint. They delayed him no more than required to give a respectful welcome before he flew into the shaft and toward the surface. Emerging into open sky, Shako flew up and over the city. Glims buildings of colourful, shimmering ice were a kaleidoscope under the clear blue sky.
At the very heart of Glim, as was the case with many city-regions, were the districts claimed by the great astral beings. The great astral beings could no more visit Interstice than they could any other physical reality, with their servants and agents being the ones to occupy the space. Each astral being that wanted one had their own territory, with the districts forming a ring around a shared communal district in the middle.
The Builders district had the most varied and outlandish building designs as the Builder was not to be outdone on architecture. Shako had the finest residence in the Builders district, making it one of the most impressive, if least subtle homes in the entirety of Interstice.
Shako did not head for home, instead heading for the border where the communal district met the Reapers district. The Reapers territory was marked by buildings whose ice was shaped and shaded like dark glass to look like towers of delicately-carved obsidian.
He alighted on the ground at the border of the Reapers territory and went into a large, dark building. In the atrium, blue light shone through windows of ice, lighting up the dark, glassy walls. People moved out of his way as he moved to the man sitting behind a desk.
Master Shako, sir, the man greeted.
The Builder wishes to speak, Shako told him.
The Reaper has anticipated this, Master Shako. Master Velius is waiting in the dome chamber.
Shako raised an eyebrow, but did not enquire further.
Thank you, he said, and rose up into the air.
There were elevating platforms but Shako flew directly up and into a shaft in the high ceiling. There were magical barriers between each floor of the building but they vanished to admit Shako as he ascended all the way to the top. The shaft opened into a room that took up the entire top floor of the building, covering a dome of glassy ice. It was a pleasant lounge area with rich but understated décor. More used to the Builders indulgent opulence than the Reapers preference minimalism, Shako found it rather plain. A man got out of a chair to greet him, offering him a friendly smile and a hand to shake.
Velius, Shako greeted warmly. Its been too long.
It has, Velius agreed. He was a tall celestine, with dark skin and a bushy mound of curly, silver hair that matched his eyes. Youve been back to your home, right? Are your family still ruling that world youre from?
For the moment, Shako said. And I do mean moment. Theres a horde at the gate situation.
Ah. They took something you gave them and got carried away? Velius asked.
Exactly.
Velius nodded sympathetically as he waved Shako into a comfortable lounge chair before sitting back down himself.
I had similar problems, he said. Its almost a rite of passage for diamond-rankers. Did you decide to help them out or leave them to their fate.
They needed a lesson they were not going to get from me.
Very wise, Velius said. I made the mistake of getting my descendents out of trouble again and again. That just made them worse and worse every time, until I just had to wash my hands of them entirely. I check on them every century or so, now, to see if any of them are still around. They were purged pretty thoroughly once I withdrew my protection.
I decided to protect the children, Shako said. Take them away, get a fresh start. Humble beginnings.
Thats a good idea, Velius said. You know, we should write a book. A guide to the newly diamond-rank. A lot of them have never even left their own worlds before. I was like that and could have really used the advice. We could get together with some of the others, make a list of all the things we did wrong.
Not a bad idea, Shako said. I know a couple of
He broke off mid-sentence.
Its time, he said. Velius nodded and both their auras underwent a change as their respective great astral beings inhabited them.
I know why youve come, the Reaper said through Velius. The rich, warm tone of Velius voice became cold and bleak as it spoke the Reapers words. The answer is no.
Asano is dead. He should stay dead.
Shakos voice was heavy but clipped as the Builder spoke through him.
I agree, the Reaper said, but he carried the World-Phoenixs token. Those pacts are older than you and I will not violate them for your childish indulgence.
I am not a child, the Builder said.
Are you not? the Reaper asked. You play around in mortal affairs like a child with toys. You have not been mortal for so very long, now. The rest of us grow tired of waiting for you to realise that and act with decorum appropriate to your station.
What is the point of being what we are if we allow ourselves to be bound by petty rules?
We are the rules, the Reaper said. To deny them is to deny ourselves.
We could be so much more, the Builder said.
More? the Reaper asked. You have built a world that you might play god, when being a god is so far beneath you.
Gods belong to one, meagre planet, which they share, the Builder said. I will be worshipped by an entire universe. I will be great astral being and god both, becoming more than either. A god beyond gods.
Good luck with that, a female voice came drifting through the room, accompanied by the arrival of a potent presence. The World-Phoenixs vessel was also a celestine, like the Reapers, but with alabaster skin and ruby hair. Her expression more alive than the blank faces of the other vessels, with a teasing smile and an amused twinkle in her red, gemstone eyes.
World-Phoenix, the Builder said. Why are you here?
I requested her attendance, the Reaper said. I wish to settle things now before you make foolish decision that will force the hand of the rest of us.
Your unbecoming obsession with mortal concerns is beneath us, the World-Phoenix said as she joined the others in sitting down.
You are the one who gave Asano a token. Hes your outworlder.
I did not make Asano an outworlder, the World-Phoenix said. That was happenstance. I simply gave him a gift as his soul passed through the astral.
This is the correct way to intercede in mortal affairs, the Reaper told the Builder. If you want a tree, plant a seed. Do not send an army to transplant it for you.
How I conduct my affairs is my business, the Builder said.
Yet you came here to ask the Reaper to interfere in mine, the World-Phoenix said.
The dead are his concern, the Builder said. What right have you to claim them?
And the integrity of dimensions is mine, the World-Phoenix said. Remember that it is only with my permission that you can conduct your little game, and remember well the conditions I have placed upon it.
I remember, the Builder said.
Do you? the World-Phoenix asked. You have already pushed things to the limits of my tolerance. Gods are beings of singular planets, yet you gave one the means to interfere with not just another world, but another reality. I only stepped in because you have pushed conditions to the breaking point. Your divine accomplice has made a mistake that threatens to blow a giant hole in the side of a physical reality, taking an entire planet with it. That, in turn, could threaten the integrity of the reality as a whole. An entire universe, not even fourteen billion years old. I provide someone with an actual chance to rectify the situation and not only do you not thank me, but you come here and try to stop him?
You really think Asano can accomplish anything? the Builder asked.
He stopped you, the World-Phoenix said. Hes becoming a pleasantly effective little seedling.
He didnt stop me. That was the ritualist.
It was, wasnt it? The Celestial Book wanted me to remind you about proportionality, by the way. The ritualist is one of his, and one that he has high hopes for. He will not tolerate you sending some gold-ranker to kill the boy out of spite.
Im not so petty as that, the Builder said and the World-Phoenix laughed. Even the impassive face of the Reaper was tinged with scepticism.
You are literally here because you want revenge against one mortal, the World-Phoenix said. You were not raised up from mortality yourself in order to reign over those you left behind. You need to turn your attention to the higher concerns for which you were brought up to attend.
I was not raised up, the Builder said. I took this power for myself.
The World-Phoenix and the Reaper shared a glance.
Of course you were, the World-Phoenix said.
I asked the World-Phoenix here to discuss a compromise, the Reaper said.
Why bother? the World-Phoenix asked. We both know that he wont learn until he crosses a line and faces the consequences.
I think we can all agree it would be better if it did not come to that, the Reaper said. I have terms that may not please either of you, but should, at least, be tolerable.
Speak your terms, then, the Builder said.
Builder, the Reaper said, you will be forbidden from interference of any kind with Asanos birth world. You will send no people, recruit no followers and produce neither star seeds nor tokens.
That is no concession, the World-Phoenix said. Asanos world is unstable enough. He already knows that if he intervenes further I will intervene far more directly.
A price, at this point, he might be willing to pay, the Reaper said. This will be a formal pact, with all the consequences of breaking it that would entail. Further, his intercession in the other world will be curtailed.
I already have plans in motion, the Builder said. You have no right to interfere.
And you shall not be restricted from carrying them out, the Reaper said. But no new star seeds, no new tokens, and no more vessels. You will withdraw from your existing vessels and unmake all the unused seeds and tokens. That means the world itself, along with any attached astral spaces.
Thats barely a concession either, the World-Phoenix said. He has already made star seeds fall onto that world like rain drops. His invasion will not need more of them.
What do I get for these concessions? the Builder asked.
The World-Phoenix will offer Asano a power. It will aid him in the task ahead, but at a cost: No more resurrections. No force shall return him from the dead again. Not his soul entering a physical reality as an outworlder or any other force. When he dies, he dies.
If he reaches the upper ranks, the World-Phoenix said, that would leave him vulnerable compared to other essence users who could be brought back with gold and diamond-ranked essence magic. The power I offered in return would have to be formidable to be worth the trade. It would also be incumbent upon him to accept it. Even we cannot reshape a soul without permission.
It can be powerful, but only in such that it is a tool for completing the task that lays before him, the Reaper said.
Its not enough, the World-Phoenix said. You wish me to trim my own tree and credit the Builder for trimming he has already finished?
I will make a concession as well, the Reaper said.
Why? the World-Phoenix asked. What concern is any of this to you?
Asano has died twice already. It concerns me that you would find a way to bring him back again and again until you are done with him. If you make him an outworlder countless times over, you make a farce of my role.
Im not the Builder, the World-Phoenix said. I do not play callous games with the rules.
I also have some gratitude to Asano, the Reaper said. He and his companions gave final release to a number of souls that had been trapped. Many of them were my people. I am not opposed to helping him face the challenges ahead.
Favouritism, the Builder said. Asano has one of your shadows chasing him around.
The Reaper gave a brief, fatherly smile.
Of all my children, Shade has ever followed his own path.
What is this concession youll make? the World-Phoenix asked the Reaper.
Asano is going to need a companion he can trust for the tasks ahead. Where he is going there will be those that have his trust and those that have the knowledge and power to help him. There will not be anyone with both of things, but I can provide such a person.
The World-Phoenix narrowed her eyes. Youre talking about another outworlder.
Yes.
How is that acceptable? the Builder asked. I came here asking you to leave a soul where it belongs, and not only do you refuse me, but offer to take another one out?
Yes, the Reaper said.
Why would I agree to any of this? the Builder asked.
Because the next time you kill Asano, the Reaper said, he will stay dead.
Still not enough, the World-Phoenix said. This outworlder. Ill agree if we bestow blessings to evolve her racial gifts. All her racial gifts.
Each of us can only advance one power, the Reaper said.
Which the three of us will, the World-Phoenix said. We also convince three more to do the same.
Thats outrageous, the Builder said. Why would I participate in this?
To demonstrate to the others that you are anything more than a selfish child in dire need of being admonished, the Reaper said. Do not forget how your position amongst our number became available.
The Builder looked at the Reaper for a long time before speaking.
Very well, the Builder said finally. I agree to the terms.
As do I, the World-Phoenix said. I will remind you again, Builder, that Asanos world is already off-limits to you.
I know.
See that you remember, the Reaper said. If you violate the World-Phoenixs conditions, you will be censured.
I said that I know.
You are known for saying one thing and doing another, the Reaper said. Its very mortal of you.
Comments
Yeah, I already assumed Jason would reject the power. It’s very Jason. It’s also a testament to the great characterization done here!
Rebecca
2020-07-01 20:40:02 +0000 UTCNot a huge fan of the little agreement hashed out by yon Astral beings. Of course it would be a disservice to assume things will go as planned. Plans never survive contact with then enemy and all that. The enemy being Jason in this case. From what we know of him, I really hope that he rejects the agreement and decides to do his own thing. I get the feeling that he would appreciate an Astral Being making decisions for him just as much as he did for the Gods. So not at all.
Heraclitus
2020-07-01 14:33:04 +0000 UTCFarrah i feel is more likely that Sophie due to them talking about power and knowledge and while Sophie is not an idiot her experiences and know how are very narrow, but hey could be anyone, doesn't have to be someone we have seen
Maltec
2020-06-26 23:30:49 +0000 UTCthe rank is in the soul, so a broke ranker would still be bronze etc
Matthew A Baker
2020-06-22 14:50:40 +0000 UTCExcept we also have the fact that Sophie has some sort of Reaper-related bloodline and training, so this isn't disambiguated one way or the other.
Monadologist
2020-06-19 14:28:58 +0000 UTCSo, are we getting Farrah back from the dead or they are sending Sophie to him?
Monadologist
2020-06-19 14:27:19 +0000 UTCFailing To consider any new addition from beyond will be iron...while Jason and crew are well into Bronze
Silver Beard
2020-06-19 12:57:23 +0000 UTCIt’s his sister in law
2020-06-17 13:50:02 +0000 UTCYou're paying for the 4 weeks ahead more than for 20 chapters. In that regards it's still valid. The interlude chapters are coming on Patreon 4 weeks before the free ones. And the volume 2 will start 4 weeks before too. If you don't want to you can resign until august, but damn those chapters are good! Also, currently you get less for your money than you usually do, but this is made for supporting the author, and so far he really has deserved it.
Simon B.
2020-06-17 12:12:43 +0000 UTCThe free chapters are up to 252. Patron is only 8 ahead when I paying for 20.
Nonie
2020-06-17 01:25:28 +0000 UTCI assumed it was Purity.
Fushi
2020-06-16 00:01:50 +0000 UTCIt’s farrah, I was just reading the torture scenes again and she’s still a relevant character then and she hasn’t been mentioned for a suspiciously long time almost as if to bring her back because no one would see it coming but I’m onto you shirt
Jess_2037
2020-06-14 21:22:02 +0000 UTCThat was gooood, thanks shirt
Mike
2020-06-14 20:36:02 +0000 UTCI agree with the sentiment, I'm not going to unsub from shirt because of a break. However I really disliked this chapter... so many problems with it. the biggest one being for a group of transcendent beings above gods saying they don't involve themselves with mortals affairs are quite literally having a meeting about how they all do exactly that to the point that they have a city/nexus of mortals for them to move around at their leisure. The foreshadowing of the chapter makes me think this story is about to take a sharp turn into the ground, it is foreshadowing and Shirt has surprised me before so I'll wait and see. That's just my opinion and Shirt's writing ability is excellent and I feel he should write for himself and not for me so Shirt if you read this enjoy your break and unwind and ignore all the complaining from people who are just upset that they can't accomplish what you have here.
Herald
2020-06-14 19:36:13 +0000 UTCSo Farrah is coming back into the story with all new shiny powers, Jason receives a permadeath debuff (the safety of his world and the revival of his friend and mentor will probably convince him to let the gods pimp is soul), now I believe the interesting part is the god that has already messed up a universe I am pretty sure that is Knowledge, that god is just so shady I get the 1984 vibes from her
Sunless
2020-06-14 16:36:22 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter, excited for whats to come. Can't believe the outspoken few that are complaining and unsubbing. Shirt releases consistently 5 great chapters a week, you can't understand the need for a little break? Probably better that he takes that time to unwind, plan out the next arcs and comes back to the grind more fresh. I've seen more than enough to continue to have faith in him and his story.
Sickul
2020-06-14 12:16:13 +0000 UTCAre you kidding? Seriously I understand, everyone has their own opinions but come on. “Oh no another character in one of, if not the best, ongoing stories”. Like really they’ve been putting out five good chapters a week for a while. And now that they’ve actually been brave enough to take the time to consolidate their story you’re giving them shit? Them taking this time to regroup is a sign of faith in us. You calling foreshadowing a future arc and power growth shallow shows that you have no depth to your reading. More importantly this is one of the few glimpses we’ve gotten into the real politics of the astral beings. This is prime story growth. Great job Shirtalooon 5/5.
Cory ostendorph
2020-06-14 10:28:15 +0000 UTCThe other outworlder is a plot divot/device ugh...shallow, small, almost desperate but mostly yet another team member with filler material for this story. Congratulations Shirtaloon. Birches so big folks will only Patreon you every few months! Yeah that’s me now. I dropped you and I don’t see 12 mos support in your future. Cheers. See you in August or October...Adding you to my calendar to see now. I was all in bit you going all out...is just bad...BAD!
Silver Beard
2020-06-14 00:21:41 +0000 UTCI really really hope not. that sounds so uncomfortable
Chip Twothousandone
2020-06-13 19:35:40 +0000 UTCSo... Anyone else think shirt could be fucking with us and the companion could be his sister in law?
Tenpoundtarantula
2020-06-13 16:17:47 +0000 UTCno, it is 6
Matthew A Baker
2020-06-13 12:18:01 +0000 UTCTrying to put the clues together. References to Asano's origin world and the other world. The "other world" presumably being the one he was dragged to when the ritual to summon a clockwork king went awry, which is when the World-Phoenix gave Jason her token. Estimated age of our universe is 13.7 billion years, so that's the one that got a hole punched in it, and apparently the one that he needs to go fix. Which fits the foreshadowing from Knowledge that it could take him home. But I guess it would be hard to transfigure racial gifts here (since they don't exist), so the World-Phoenix wants that done first to whomever the Reaper sends to accompany him (presumably dead and in his care). But they need three other figures to give gifts, and I think the normal is ten, so if Farrah had only evolved exactly four then she's our gal.
Daniel D.
2020-06-13 08:15:31 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2020-06-13 06:03:25 +0000 UTCConsidering the threat at the end, I doubt he has any delusions of taking over in any way. the other great astral beings raised him up, they can take him down, and it sounds like all of the others have far more power than he does.
Matthew A Baker
2020-06-13 05:52:09 +0000 UTCA lot to unpack here. So the new otherworlder, a lot of people are saying Farrah, but is she really an otherworlder. She is dead but still of that world. It would also take away such an important death in the story and really don’t like that move most of the time. I can’t think of anyone who meets these criteria currently. Maybe one of the epilogue chapters introduces someone new but with Jason not trusting the gods(which I have to imagine that’s how he sees the astral beings as well) I can’t imagine he will trust some random person because reaper/Phoenix say so. There really must be a good reason the other beings are ok with The builder doing this stuff as well, since he seems to be the “youngest” of them and sounds like he is trying to take over. Oh well great stuff and I’m starting to feeling like an addict waiting till Fridays lol
Clay smith
2020-06-13 05:07:42 +0000 UTCNot too keen on another outworlder just for Jason.
Leonard Marchant
2020-06-13 04:12:37 +0000 UTCThe deal is overwhelmingly in her favor. She gets: Worldwide rules on the Builder's behavior that will have real consequences if broken, a powerful boost for Jason's abilities that will help him fix the universe, and an empowered ally for Jason. By contrast, the Builder gets: Assurance that Jason gets no more respawns. Really, the ability to punish the Builder if he breaks the rules is worth it alone. It protects entire worlds, in exchange for a minor restriction on one mortal. And we've seen that they don't actually care that much about mortals.
11037
2020-06-13 02:51:47 +0000 UTCWow, the universe and powers that be are so much more then I thought this story had. Mind blown. Thank you for awesome chapter!!!!
Chad Hagner
2020-06-13 02:38:06 +0000 UTCI will withhold judgement until we A.See the Power Jason is going to be offered and B. See if he accept it or not. I do think it would be out of character for Jason to accept any sort of deal though and let them mess with his Soul.
Call0013
2020-06-13 02:11:25 +0000 UTCI don't understand. Why would the Phoenix agree? As pointed out, Bill's concessions aren't really concessions. It seems like the only reasons to agree are the boons the gods will give Asano and the other person. And that's in exchange for Asano being permanently dead if he dies, which apparently isn't always a thing because of later essence powers. Does "she" view the boons and companion as THAT amazing to make up for the handicap they're going to give him? Also side note, I assume Purity is the god that fucked up another reality. And that reality is our reality. Should make Earth an interesting place right now.
Ziggy
2020-06-13 01:56:16 +0000 UTCGiven that it's the Reaper making the offer, you could argue it's exactly the kind of weaselly abiding by the strict letter of the agreement that he'd pull to spite the Builder. Farah has power, knowledge, and Jason's trust.
Roger Faux
2020-06-13 01:54:35 +0000 UTCEveryone talking about Sophie. I’m putting my money on Farrah! She has knowledge Jason will need and he trusts her. Also remember it’s the Reaper who said he can provide and he deals with the dead.
Conor
2020-06-13 01:51:49 +0000 UTCFarah?
Roger Faux
2020-06-13 01:51:17 +0000 UTCMind Blown. A great chapter! The amount the universe expands with just what was written here is phenomenal. Also of great interest to me is that the Builder actually seems to have reasonable followers, and he rewards them. Seems a far cry from the extreme willingness to sacrifice them we saw recently. I’m a little leery of a second outworlder being added with evolved traits..but i have faith!
EmissaryOfZork
2020-06-13 01:37:31 +0000 UTCHmm I wonder if this is the last we see of the Empress, or was she a story stepping stone to Shako, Interstice, and the Astral beings. Either way good job on making a probable side charter so interesting with just a smidge of back story.
Death2Shrimp
2020-06-13 01:35:11 +0000 UTCAnd the fact that he has over $2,000,000US in "Trash" gold in his inventory will help.
Matthew A Baker
2020-06-13 01:06:08 +0000 UTCI'm going to withhold judgement. I said at the end of bk 1 that you have managed to pleasantly surprise me throughout this experience, and so I will.hope for more of that.
2020-06-13 00:57:19 +0000 UTCHm? Doesn't sound like it at all. Apparently the Builder enabled Purity to do something that threatens to completely destroy the planet, and World Phoenix is using Jason to stop that. Not to mention they said the Builder has already put tons of Star Seeds in that world for his upcoming plans.
Kirvin
2020-06-13 00:56:24 +0000 UTCnow i understand why i didnt get an answer re: the last chapter great chapter, now I have to wonder if Sophie is going to get pulled out of Greenstone of if the Empress that is tucked under the builders elbow will be the companion.
Matthew A Baker
2020-06-13 00:55:08 +0000 UTCWhere's the trust?
Shirtaloon
2020-06-13 00:53:50 +0000 UTCSo I guess the story's going to move to Jason and Sophie working together to save Earth from the Builder? And maybe Purity as well?
Big I
2020-06-13 00:42:40 +0000 UTCHow dare they bully the poor Builder like this!? They made is sound like they were all reluctant, but the Builder gets one guarantee about a single mortal, and they get concessions that span multiple worlds under threat of death! All the poor guy wants is to be the ultimate god of gods. What's wrong with that!?
11037
2020-06-13 00:33:26 +0000 UTCSorry, this seems more focused on nerfing Jason, than advancing him as character. All the while a new female character introduced with all the benefits he would lose. This feels really forced and Im afraid as to where this story may lead because if this. I have been a reader since the first dozen chapters and love the story,but this has me feeling very nervous about it.
Yamibomb112
2020-06-13 00:28:34 +0000 UTCAt first I was worried that the entire story was expanded too quickly at once and might become confusing later on, but you just made it seamless and easy to understand. This chapter still reads like what you would expect from your past chapters. Bravo.
John M
2020-06-13 00:14:30 +0000 UTCSexism?
John M
2020-06-13 00:11:09 +0000 UTCI think so. It was confusing for sure.
John M
2020-06-13 00:09:53 +0000 UTCThanks
Shirtaloon
2020-06-13 00:06:46 +0000 UTCHoly sheeeeeeettttt. This was great. The potential size of this story just expanded ten fold. I'm assuming now from looking at it that there is an incredible power difference possible between diamond ranks. Also I get the feeling that gods are diamond ranks who bound themselves to one world in order for greater power at the cost of never being able to leave. And it feels like in general that cosmic beings and gods both bind themselves to an idea or concept for greater power. Although I'm definitely looking forward to Jason exploring different worlds I do hope that he's able to bring the gang with him. I feel to invested in them and hope it doesn't end up like wuxia novels where the main character ascends to godhood and all his compatriots along the way just become after thoughts. Personally I feel like if Jason can figure out a way to group up with them then he will take it, they are essentially pillars of his new life. I have so much more to say from this chapter but I'll leave it at thank you Shirt you're writing continues to amaze and is one of the first novels I recommend to people new to web serials to highlight the quality that is possible in this format.
Tristan A
2020-06-13 00:03:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Alexander Dupree
2020-06-13 00:00:46 +0000 UTCMultiverse-building feels appropriate
thaughton2
2020-06-12 23:55:58 +0000 UTCLoved it!!!!
Frederic Vincent
2020-06-12 23:44:11 +0000 UTCBig money on Asano pissing the Builder off further in the future and getting him to put his foot in his mouth and censured. That might actually the best way to stop him from destroying the world.
Thransk
2020-06-12 23:36:24 +0000 UTCI hope this new female character will not be just a better version of Asano. Getting fed up with sexism in general.
ggpavi
2020-06-12 23:34:32 +0000 UTCIts feeling more and more like we're done with Humphrey, Clive, Belinda, Sophie and Neil's world, not sure i like it.
Worldknower
2020-06-12 23:33:23 +0000 UTCExcellent stuff, thanks! You've passed world-building and gone on to... what's next after universe-building?
Mike G.
2020-06-12 23:31:09 +0000 UTCI get the idea that the Builder became an astral being because another one did something wrong and got destroyed. That made an opening the other astral beings could fill.
Gnothi Seauton
2020-06-12 23:28:12 +0000 UTCMaybe Farrah? That would be kinda weird tho
Amelgar
2020-06-12 23:26:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!!
Kenneth Darlin
2020-06-12 23:24:10 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!! Another person from earth then? I'm still rooting for Sophie... with Jason presumed dead I think she will have the drive to grow to his "level"
Simon B.
2020-06-12 23:23:02 +0000 UTCDid the Reaper offer the concession of a companion? Because it read like the World Phoenix asked the Builder would offer and the next paragraph was about the companion.
Rick White
2020-06-12 23:21:04 +0000 UTCIf it's his ex imma laugh
Tibstrike
2020-06-12 23:20:23 +0000 UTCanother nubile female slave perhaps :D?
Amelgar
2020-06-12 23:18:39 +0000 UTCOh boy... the stage just got a little bit bigger
Amelgar
2020-06-12 23:18:10 +0000 UTCGah! I need more! I've missed this story so much
Patrick Short
2020-06-12 23:15:05 +0000 UTCAnother otherworlder? A female? I don't get it, is Asano stuck in proper earth or can he come back?
2020-06-12 23:13:07 +0000 UTCSo mortals can become great astral beings, that's cool. Also lowkey interested in Shako and Velius's book
Alfcam
2020-06-12 23:13:05 +0000 UTCthank you!
Jeff Barton
2020-06-12 23:12:20 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Harrison Brown
2020-06-12 23:07:51 +0000 UTCFirst
Harrison Brown
2020-06-12 23:07:44 +0000 UTC