UNMASKED: Page 10 Sketch (Dialogue) Updated
Added 2017-10-13 17:32:45 +0000 UTC So I decided to make a minor but major change in this script. Doesn't really change the sequence of events in the narrative but it does make a change in relationships and the cohesion of the story.
If you haven't noticed, instead of Alice talking about her brother (who originally only existed for this scene) she's talking about a completely different character for the sake of the script. Everyone's favorite Hyena, Summer!
So basically what this change does is making Summer and Ally acquaintances, while originally, they didn't know each other until later. Yeah. Pretty Big change lol
So why make them friends instead of mentioning Ally's Brother who happens to be a Meta? Well, like mentioned before, Ally's brother only existed for this scene which could make his mention pointless. Summer becomes involved in the story later on, so for the sake of the cohesion of this chapter, I decided to connect the 2! So yeah, now Summer and Ally kinda know each other.
Does this muck up anything planned for story in the future?
Not really, if anything this make my journey of drawing this comic more interesting as I create more and more character interactions.
This whole section probably wasn't necessary but since you've all been supporting me and this comic, I do wanna share all the behind scene stuff I come up with when writing this comic! I'm very passionate about it.
Expect a patreon only sketch of Summer and Ally interacting soon! :)
