Merrin (Term 82)
Added 2022-08-20 22:43:42 +0000 UTCFrom Star Wars Fallen Order
Trying out a different pose not sure what to think of it.. Any feedbacks?
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Thank you for the feedback B79! I've touched up the hand a bit and yeah it's late to change the arm position at this stage. However thanks for the options I could apply those to the next picture π
Elyza
2022-08-21 16:12:39 +0000 UTCThank you Lord of Nightmares! I've touched up the hand and wrist hopefully improved it a bit.
Elyza
2022-08-21 16:06:18 +0000 UTCGreat work with trying out this new pose! π The curve of the body and the pose of the right arm resting under Merrin's head look natural and as usual your attention to detail is excellent! π Not a complaint ofc, but I agree that there seems to be something off about her left arm/hand: the pose of the left hand in particular has a bit of a stiff/rigid look to my eyes (could be the "wrist issue" noted in the preceding comment). Maybe it could work better with the left arm standing on the bed, alternatively with the left arm resting on Merrin's abdomen? π€ But I guess both these options would require too much effort at this stage and the current result is already very good, so no need to go for any such time-consuming changes.
2022-08-21 08:32:25 +0000 UTCOh, that's fantastic, I've missed your more dynamic poses. Nearly everything looks great, the curve of the spine/side muscles, the pose of the head lines up though i think the shadow under her chin is a little too defined making it look a little disconnected but her pale skin is probably a factor there. The big issue is the forearm and hand on the left its too straight and looks like you forgot the wrist, Other than that, fantastic work!
Lord of Nightmares
2022-08-21 01:36:44 +0000 UTC
